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Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

One of the best stories, I still keep checking and hoping that one day there will be an update.  I love Lukas, Elise and Mila.



Author's Response:

Hi There...thank you for checking in. I am in the process of prepping this series to the published on Amazon Kindle 2021-2022.

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 21 2020 11:03 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Ok I want to kick the little girl but for calling her a orphan  not  cool and Lukas man up and tell your daguther. Yes it be hard but she needs to know the truth. Also I dont' like how dude  gettling little to close to Elise something tells me he will cause trouble big time.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 09:28 pm

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Little Mila don't play that! Talk about her lack of a mother and you're getting one to the face! Haha. It's still sad that he has to share that information with her. It's never a good thing to break a child's innocence like that. I hope Mila is strong enough to handle it and it doesn't break her. She has a great support system so I know she will recover but it doesn't make it any less horrible. Seriously Kori? You can't love working that much?! It makes you look kinda pathetic, you dive into work becuase you don't want to deal with other things. It's okay for everyone else to find love and true happiness but not you? Yeah right. What's the deal? I believe that Elise is about to take that step and completely move out of her parents home. I'm proud of the growth she has had. Not that she was a horrible person before but it definitely made her a more well rounded person. 

Update soon! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2016 06:16 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

It's time for Lukas to tell Mila everything. She's at that age where she's going to ask a lot of questions. I believe she can handle it, just tell her the truth. And watch their relationship grow even better, because she will feel like she can go to him and tell him anything and not have to hide. There will be times when he think, I know this child did not just tell me that, girl WE KNOW. But we wouldn't change a thing. I think Elise should sit back and let this be father, daughter time. Thanks honey for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2016 04:11 pm

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Little kids a cruel to each other, having one parent does not make one an orphan.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2016 02:43 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

I feel so bad for Lucas and his daughter. And what the hell is that Oliver dude up to?  Fantastic update, thank you.

Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2016 10:19 pm

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

That's adorable. I know this conversation about Hanna is not going to be good but Mila deserves to know the truth. It will set you both free. She is stronger than you think and she can handle knowing this. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 09:21 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

They are adorable in their own special way. Perfect for each other. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 09:07 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Yay!!!! They both confessed and are going to be together now. Totally awesome. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 08:49 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

I'm glad that Elise got to go out and just hang. It's great that she got set up for someone else. LOl. She's probably not used to being in the wing man position. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 08:26 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

I really want to know what this Oliver character is up to and why. I hope Elise gets the relief she needs and Lukas gets the guidance he needs too. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 08:04 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

I don't know how I would feel about my friend doing that honestly. I know it was done with good intentions but still. IDK. At least he realizes how he feels now. Hopefully he can get it together before it's too late. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 06:39 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Who does this Oliver Martin want? Her mom? It doesn't make sense. That could be the only reason why he's targeting the family business. Daddy Roberts might have to get his hands dirty to handle this guy for sure. So she finally finds out about Mila. I wonder how that is going to change things, if it even does so. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 06:19 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

That's because you are trying to convince yourself homie! You want that girl. Stop fighting it, it's just going to hurt you and her in the end. You are no better than Hanna, playing with that girl's emotions. You can't make love to her and then tell her it's a mistake hours later. That junk is not okay. Just be real with the damn girl and see what happens. She might surprise you. Sidenote... Who is Oliver? I feel like I've seen that name before. Was he in book 1? Why does Oliver want to stop the Roberts company soo bad? Who is Carlos? Does he work for Mr. Roberts too? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 05:34 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Well... Now that that's over. Let's get down to business. Because having sex is in no shape, form, or fashion resing. LOl. I can't believe it was Paul. Why though? That's the question. And who was the other guy in this lil gang. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2016 04:58 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Hell no she can't. She belongs to Lukas. Sorry, tall, dark and handsome. Funny how the past always comes back when you least expect it. Hopefully she doesn't try to make things work with Keith just to not think about Lukas, that is not going to help anything but will make everything worse. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 11:54 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

I hope everything is okay with his family in Germany and his daughter. Lord, this girl has put herself in harm's way again for this man. At least he didn't have to save her this time. LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 11:01 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Wow..... I'm glad that he got that off his chest though. She needed to hear that, this is not a game. It's people's lives and I don't think she fully gets that. Maybe she was starting to but she has yet to completely understand the magnitude her actions can have. Thank goodness he wasn't too far away because that could have been extremely bad for Elise. She could have been seriously injured or died. I wonder how the metal was loose in the first place. I'm sure that it's someone's job to make sure that those things are secure for those exact reasons. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 10:16 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Damn.. I want a kiss to bring me that. But I think I would be scared shitless. LOl. I wonder who he is calling? Mila's maternal family maybe? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 09:56 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Lol. I can see why he doesn't feel lucky. Why would this girl show up to a construction site in a short fitted skirt? She really has no clue. At least wear a fitted pants suit. Do you plan to screw Lukas in the trailer? No, so come to work prepared to work. I bet she has on heels too. Smh. LOl. I wonder what's going on with Kori? She seems to have been hiding something since the first book. 



Author's Response:

Lol...I adore your reviews....Kori's life will be covered fully in book 3

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 09:29 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

I'm glad that her father is making her work. It won't be hard, hell she's working for her own damn company. There's that spoiled attitude, he's being professional. What do you expect him to say? I'm glad I didn't sleep with you the other night because you're the boss' daughter? Be real. You do have a degree after all. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 08:55 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

I'm soooo glad this story continues from journey 1. I was worried that it wouldn't since it was focused on someone else. Yay!!! 

Elise shouldn't be ashamed of who she is. Everyone, whether or not they will admit it wishes they had the luxuries she does. They might not react to it the way she does but we all want riches and the good life. I commend her for still being a great friend, it's hard to find people like that these days. I commend Lukas for stepping up and being a single father. Mila's biological mother is fucked up for abandoning her like that but in the end it's going to be her that misses out on her life. I can not understand how any parent can just abandon their child like that. Just ungrateful for the chance to bring a new life into this world. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2016 08:37 am

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Great update honey! children understands more than we know.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2016 03:59 pm

Title: Journey Book 2 - Elise's Journey

Thanks for the latest installment.

It's endering how much Lukus adores and is protective of Maya, it will be a difficult conversation but much needed.

 

On a side note how sweet are Elise's parents d84;

Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2016 05:42 am

Title: Journey (Book 1 - Devyn's Journey)

Yay... I'm sooo glad that everything worked out. Now I did not see her being pregnant at the end even though I know they were having sex unprotected. I'm happy all the same! Great story. 



Author's Response:

Again thank you for reading...I am overjoyed.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2016 11:16 am

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