Honestly, if Peri were dressed as Loki, I'd be toast. I just couldn't deny him... Maybe. I like to pretend, because he's gorgeous, but I get it: a pretty face does not make up for a broken heart. I believe only distance and time got Peri what it got him, what little it was! And good for him, he doesn't deserve more than Shea's willing to give him - which could have been her ass to kiss goodbye. Lol. I cannot stand cheaters. Can you tell?
I kind of want Shea to get a little Dean, even if (according to him) she would have to gain a few pounds first! Lol, that boy is a trip; I love him! I know it would hurt Alex, the lovable Mama's boy that he is, so I'm only half-wishing Shea gives young Dean a try! Peri might lose his shit also, so...yeah, maybe she can just have fantasies about Dean that make breakfast Super Awkward...? I could be down for that, so long as one (or a few) of said fantasies are laid out in explicit detail.
'Cause my mind goes there and refuses to come back, lol!
Reviewer: @DieAMouseDeath Anonymous
[Report This]Date: November 29 2014 03:03 am
Hooked on the blue brothers serious. love the charcters you have made them real with their flaws and all... but I am like that fish on the hook dangling over the big blue sea just waiting for that next shark to run and try to take a bite... well i am now the shark and I am looking for a bite..lol... please at your convience update??????
Reviewer: DIMPLESCWT Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2014 01:33 pm
I like the concept and I am interested on where you want to take this. Love the cast pics and the pic of Shea is so beautiful, why he would cheat on her I have NO idea.
Could it be that maybe you are regreting having it where he cheated for 6 months instead of like 1 or 2 times. Cheating for 6 months is like way to intentional and I dont' see how they could recover from that, that is a complete relationship that he had with another woman. I can see people who have married as long as these two working it out slowly after cheating once but for six months, idk that's crazy.
Just a thought because it seems like you are stuck. This is your story but just thought I give you something to think about because you haven't updated. I see you are working on another story but now I am interested in this one lol
I hope your muse returns even if you have to start this one over, believe me some of my favorite writers have started stories over that were almost complete.....
Update Soon!!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2014 11:28 am
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 08:23 am
I really like this! Very interesting keep going please :)
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 05:38 am
I like this story normally I do not read these type of stories but since u have the story where he is trying to win hs wife back might be okay to follow so far it is good
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking a step out of your usual reading to give this a chance.
Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 03:31 am
So Peri cheated on the Shea his wife tht he claimed to love. He deserves to loose it all and he also deserves to loose the respect of his son. The ho Emily got pregnant too, that is grounds for an immediate divorce. More please!!
Author's Response:
That's what I was saying, but I guess it's hard letting 15 years go down the drain. He sure threw it away though!!! Let's see where this thing goes.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 03:23 am
I liked it! They're going good. These snapshots into their life makes me feel as if I'm actually there watching it play out.
Good job
:)
Author's Response:
haha thank you! I was hoping to portray it like that! They are such a close, but dysfunctional family. I love it.
Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 03:23 am
Please update soon!!! Seems very interesting
Author's Response:
I'll try to update as soon as possible! I get so caught up trying to understand why Peri cheated that I stress my muse out.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 03:17 am
I must confess that I didn't read the previous stories because of the cast. That says a lot more aobut me than you as a writer.
You have held a mirror up to me and I'm not happy with what I see. Instead of reading the story and enjoying it for what it is, I made some assumptions and discarded it. Thank you for giving me something to think about and coming to grips with some of my own prejudices.
I will now go back and read the prior installments. It's necessary if I want to know who Indy is and why he comes to be the person he eventually becomes.
Once again, thank you.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2014 10:37 am
I like them so far, keep 'em coming!
Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 02:29 am
Great Start!....Excited about characters
Reviewer: islametropoles Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 12:55 am
Your summary states "No bother left behind". I think you meant, no brother left behind.
Much improved over the other 2 drabbles and thanks for the lack of a crazy author's note that could turn people away.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The summary is always the last thing I do and I end up slacking!
Thank you again, I'll keep the crazy authors notes to a minimum and begin letting the work speak for itself haha
Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 12:27 am
I honestly want to find out what is going to happen btw shea and peri
Reviewer: tiffany37 Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:25 pm
In love with this story already...you got my favorite villain in this story too!!! Lol but on the responsible side he needs to stop moping and figure out how to win her back and well start over. Let her do something to him back. That's what I'd do. I'm glad it's not a continuous affair that he continued to do after he got caught he reflects on it and he should let her punish him for it and earn her respect back. But I'm getting a hang of the story now so I know it wont be easy. But love it regardless
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed
[Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:10 pm
Nice. More please.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:06 pm
I like this a lot. This is said as I hang my head in shame for not reading the others yet.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:02 pm
I really like this story and would love for it to be continued!
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 07:57 pm