Title: In Blood We Pay

When is the next installment?

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2018 08:24 pm

Title: In Blood We Pay

This was off to a great start. 

Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2018 07:43 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Fangirling harddddd

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2017 11:10 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Hope that you update soon!

I'm actually just realizing that for some reason, most of the stories that immediately hook me in end up being abandoned by the first few chapters. I really hope that isn't the case here, because geez it's disappointing when it happens, especially if it happens frequently with the stories that you actually like the most. I'm starting to think that I'm a jinx lol So PLLLEEEEAAAASSSE update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 08:36 pm

Title: In Blood We Pay

Please update, this story is intriguing to say the least and the characters have already got me hooked!

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2017 05:00 pm

Title: In Blood We Pay

Can't wait for more!!!! *CARTWHEELS*

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2017 04:22 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Damn! That's cold blooded. I can't believe Remy's brother would sell her out like that. I hope Remy can keep her head on straight and figure how to get out of the mess she's in. 

Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2017 02:40 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Ok now u got me

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2017 10:29 pm

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Keep writing and keep giving us more.

Love this book!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2017 05:46 am

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Love!!!!

Keep going!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2017 05:15 am

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He is going to try to marry her...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 08:02 am

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Ahh this is getting good!!

Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 04:24 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Bye bro. 

Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 04:21 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

I would have left her ass. He tells you to pack your shit, you're here asking questions even though you see it's an emergency. Dumbo.

Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 04:18 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Good concept, I do however feel like like you could have combined those chapters to make it one whole steady chapter all together. I know you say you'd rather post short chapters that feel right etc. but please also think of the reader. I like this story, so far so good. I'd just like longer chapters. All the best with it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 03:47 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

This is so fresh. This site was getting stale. Gj and please update soon



Author's Response:

thank you - so happy to heat! but dont give up on the Chamber - old and new writers will fill this pages again :)

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2017 05:26 pm

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Next chapter soon please!!! GREAT START



Author's Response:

next chapters are upp  - enjoy the read! thansk for reviewing!

Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 09:19 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Peaked my interest but I will need a little more.



Author's Response:

I understand that :) for me, when i'm writing, I go with a "feeling" and sometimes chapters end up on the shorter side. however i will try to add more but fair warning, short chapters will probably pop up every now and then so  i hope you will keep reading though XD

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 04:31 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

Ohh!! I love a new Mafia story. I can't wait for more. Please post again soon



Author's Response:

me too XD I hope you will enjoy the read :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 11:31 pm

Title: In Blood We Pay

Pretty intense intro. Looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

thank you! more to come and posted :D

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 06:32 pm

Title: In Blood We Pay

Too short, but great start. More more more, please!



Author's Response:

some chapter are or will probably be short. for me when i try to add more, it messes with the flow of the story so i rather post something short then a story which feel "off" if that makes sense :) but i will keep in my mind what you said and see if there a ways to lengthen a story - thanks for reading and leaving a review!

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 05:12 pm

Title: In Blood We Pay

Excellent build up. Very descriptive. Can't wait for more. My stomach is in knots.



Author's Response:

thank you intheroar! more is coming - i hope the story will keep you on your toes ;)       

Reviewer: intheroar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 04:38 am

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LOVE!!!!!! More please and Thank you!!!



Author's Response:

thnak you, SnowFever! More has arrived - enjoy the read!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 01:22 am

Title: In Blood We Pay

There are some minor editing needed and I could have done without the typical "unruly curls" (ugh!!!), but other than that, interesting start.



Author's Response:

sorry for the editing faults - more will probably come (lol) but I will do my best to keep it to the minimum :) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 12:05 am

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oooo i caint wait



Author's Response:

super! sorry for the long wait - i hope you enjoy what's been posted :)

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2017 11:55 pm

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