Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I can tell already this is going to be good. Love A'isha and Elton. They will make a great couple

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 06:28 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I love it love it



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Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 05:55 pm

Title: Chapter 1

uh oh now, mr. franco doesn't waste any time.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. lol yeah!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 05:36 pm

Title: Chapter 1

What an impressive start . I think this story will be a delight to read . Can't wait for an update .

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 05:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like the start so far, love Elton.

Please continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 02:59 pm

Title: Chapter 1

A’isha and Elton are hot. I can't wait for them to get together.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a great start to the story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the start.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 01:06 pm



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