Negro gal? Really,Pa? He's from the boonies in VA. He's from the boonies in Va. I have to keep reminding myself. Ok. I won't shut the door in Pa's face just yet.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed
[Report This]Date: August 25 2014 07:44 am
Lovely!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 25 2014 07:14 am
So, you just gave me something to do on this boring, lonely Sunday night. Thank you!
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2014 06:59 am
It's been awhile since I read this story. I really needed to catch up. It's just as good as I remembered.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 03:42 am
So. My emotions are running full speed. Karma better be a bitch to those people. More, please?
Reviewer: monsgors Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2014 05:05 pm
I found the beginning very confusing and had to stop reading for a while, there didnt seem to be any flow to it like you have in your previous chapters... But it all came together for me in the end.
Reviewer: SenieceTaO Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2014 04:58 pm
Love this story. I hope finish it.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2014 02:47 am
No worries. Didn't notice any glaring errors. Just glad you got this second piece of the puzzle out so quickly. It was really sad what happened to his parents.
Reviewer: bambi4real Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2014 12:15 pm
Aww that is sad now we see
Reviewer: Misunderstood Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2014 03:27 am
Aww that is sad now we see
Reviewer: Misunderstood Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2014 03:27 am
Damn, that was rough. I've got a lump in my throat & I had to look away a couple of times before finishing.
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2014 02:49 am
just crying now for the Halperns... how awful!
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 11:11 pm
This chapter was heart breaking. No one got charged in the murder of his parents, how awful. My heart goes out Del Leon!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 08:23 pm
Someone must pay!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 08:06 pm
Damn, that was really hard to read. Well written, but brought back some really awful memories. And yeah, it's very real that an f'in whole town can know that a murder was committed and who did it and nothing happens to bring the culprits to justice. That is my love/hate relationship with my Southern hometown.
You did a really good job with this chapter, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 06:45 pm
So the sheriffs people, that bitch Cats mom and I'm betting the sheriffs wife people. All had a hand in killing his parents. Is the truth ever gonna come out. Or just stay hidden?
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 05:08 pm
Well that was very sad but insightful in what happened to his parents the story needed it now on to brighter things.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 09:39 am
It's 8:30 a.m. here. And now I'm feeling a bit sick to my stomach as I fight the tears back.
I asked for this. We all wanted to know. And now we do.
No other words are coming except...thanks for the update.
I'm ready to get to the other side and see DeLeon get his happy ending now.
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 09:32 am
Oh man! The accents are great! The story teling is amazing! character development is FANTASTIC!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 06:06 am
I missed this story :)
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2014 02:10 am
I love the update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2014 01:49 am
What the heck happened to Kendra she was fine he was dreaming & talking to his mom then she woke him up & next blood & she's in the hospital had to have surgery & the whole clan is worried & on there way there. Is he gonna finally tell her what happened the night his parents died hope so. Update. Soon
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2014 10:11 pm
It's BEEN time, DeLeon. We're all waiting to know what the hell happened that broke you!
By the way, am I going to get in trouble for thinking of the scene in the Thor movie when several security men and medical personnel tried to sedate him in the hospital as I read the part where DeLeon was getting manhandled?
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2014 09:51 pm
Why are you punishing us like this? loool. I was soooo excited to see an update and now my curiousity going haywire
Reviewer: Judahlove Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2014 06:51 pm