Reviews For Memento Mori
Title: Characters

Bomb of Sex: Leto S. Bourges

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 04:38 am

Title: I will either find a way or make one

dude, first off. loooooooooooove me some Tom Hardy. i'm convinced once we meet, he will leave that bird and take up with me instantaneously.

two, i'm excited for this. not even really sure where you're taking it, but from this first chapter, i trust you.

also, i'm not sure if you may have meant 'gobsmacked'. godsmacked is a bit more yankee. but godsmacked is cool too. lol



Author's Response: Your absolutel right, I did mean gobsmacked. Microsoft word is messing with my story, lol. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2010 11:56 pm

Title: I will either find a way or make one

A good start; I really like that you used the gent from Luther. Can't wait to read more! 

 

One thing, though -- I think you mean "Lucius" for your character's name; it's a bit distracting to think that he's named "Luscious" -- which calls to mind some sort of performer. 



Author's Response:

I thought about changing his name to Lucius, but  have a friend who's name is Luscious but we pronounce it Lucius. When I asked him why that was, he said that his mother told him it meant 'light' so it kinda stuck with me. But I am going to change it so I don't confuse people, Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: alices Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2010 04:11 am

Title: I will either find a way or make one

More please =)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 07 2010 04:52 pm

Title: I will either find a way or make one

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2010 07:09 am



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