Dam!! I think that Amelle just let the Big bad Wolf get a little taste of her and wants more.
I can see Harison trying to break her down.
Great update.
Author's Response: Sooo true!! When will this girl learn!?! Thanks for your review! Reviewer: Janetbd Signed
[Report This]Date: December 17 2010 02:36 pm
NOOOO dont stop there...! Very bold of Amelle to take on the challenge and know Eddy had made his move, literally, lol! foooh, i hope - pray! - you update sooon!
Author's Response: Lol the update is on its way!!! thanks for your review! Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: December 17 2010 02:20 pm
Amelle just put a wider target on her back. I hope she slaps the taste of Harrison's mouth. He is so disgusting. Someone of his power shouldn't be so obvious.
Author's Response:
I won't lie, Amelle is kind of clueless. And Harrison well, he does have his piggish qualities. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: December 17 2010 09:27 am
Hummm these folks are snooty, upper crust and nasty!! I am not sure about Amelle...will she really fit in with this crowd or is this just the crowd for her.
Harrison pursuing an engaged woman seems totally acceptable to this crowd so I am concerned what else is totally acceptable..of course if you are in the circle!
Very interesting and complex story sweetie..keep it coming!!
Author's Response:
The girls, well some of them, just might suprise you. And In terms of Harrison, well he does have the power to do whatever he wants. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2010 11:46 am
intriguing as hell story - look very much forward to ch 4!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: December 15 2010 11:38 am
Amelle, that is not the type of dress you were to a galla in Connecticut.
David is so damn clueless. He is killing me, so I can not imagine Tom Welling in the role.
I do not like Nadia.
Author's Response: Lol, you are right with Amelles dress choice, but give Nadia a chance, she might just suprise you. Thanks for your review.. Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: December 15 2010 08:23 am
Hmmmm is Nadia doing that out of the kindness of her heart or because she wants to move in on Eddy herself? I'm not sure, but at least Amelle now has a heads up and can watch herself with these people.
Does David not know who she is? Is she only concerned with fashion and decorating. Who says she doesn't want to talk politics? And the new dress is supposed to do what bribe her? I am not feeling David more and more.
I'm liking this a lot Drogheda.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Amelle needs all the help she can get and David it just really oblivious. He means well but he could seriously use some help. Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed
[Report This]Date: December 15 2010 06:23 am
These women are a trip..poor Amelle seems miserable and if this is going to be her inner circle I cannot see happiness comng in any time soon!!
This story is revealing it's layers slowly..I cannot wait for more!!Good job sweetie!
Author's Response: The girls are complicated... And thats really all I should say for now. Thanks for your review! Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: December 15 2010 02:22 am
I want more, this is so interesting, I can't wait for you to update this story, what motley crew these couples are turning out to be....
Alex
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Reviewer: Chocolatepink Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 11:14 pm
Eddy spells trouble and Amelle better watch out! i also her man turns out to be a good guy because Amelle packed up and left her life for him(!) so he better be ready to sacrifice for her sake! look forward to the upcoming chs - bring it on!
Author's Response: Eddy is trouble and for Amelle's sake I hope David gets his act together. Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 06:28 pm
"You never know power until it’s in your hands, flowing from your fingertips in golden rays. It was the stuff men dreamed of." it was this sentence that got me hooked - so well put and true! off to read ch 2
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2010 06:16 pm
Great story so far. really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 02:01 pm
I knew Eddy was going to be trouble. Amelle better watch her back, because Vivian is going to try to take her out. Vivie needs to set her eyes on David, he'll probably be free soon, unless he proves to be a man who loves and listens to his fiance.
Author's Response: Lol you are quite intuitive, but I doubt Vivian would shack up with David: he is too low class for her esteemed tastes. Thanks for your review!
Date: December 14 2010 07:46 am
Not sure that I like David, he seems a bit neglectful of his fiancee.
It seems I was right they women are a bunch of rich, vapid bitches. Bring it on!
Amelle needs to hold her head up and roll on these chicks and the men too if they get in her way! If she's got some backbone she may be able to rule this little world and not let it rule her. It seems she already has the eye of the most important person in the little cliche.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
David is a good guy but his position is kinda crappy. And in terms of the girls, well they might just shock you. And I hope Amelle figures out some way to roll with these people, because right now she looks like she is about to be trampled... Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2010 07:29 am
Amelle is the girl next door thrust into a world of rich bitches or at least one rich bitch so far. Hopefully she doesn't change who she is for these people who would step on or over her to get what they want.
Love the label dropping. The details are good and I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2010 07:19 am
Well, well this is going to be interesting reading I can already see.
Your cast is very good looking. The women look like Houswives (Desperate and Real) and the men look like movers and shakers.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2010 07:14 am
I'm loving it. Can't Wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 04:51 am
this is interesting. can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Date: December 14 2010 03:43 am
Poor Amelle. I can really relate her. I know how it feels to be in a place where you feel like you just don't belong or you won't fit in because of your background, ethnicity, or whatever it may be.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Amelle is in a position everyone hates to be in, so I am glad that you could relate to her, and I thank you for your review! Reviewer: Missus James Signed
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 02:11 am
Interesting beginning sweetie...I cannot wait to read more. I wonder where you are going with this one..it is quite different and interesting!!
Cannot wait for more...good job!
Pictures would be very nice...:)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 02:07 am
I like, I like! I can definitely feel mysterious vibe going on. :) I like it a lot! Please update soon. :D
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: December 14 2010 02:07 am