i am really curious about what happen to have cameron hate on phillip, were they dating?
I love the now and then pictures they look so young and innocence
please update soon
Awwwww! They have been through so much! Gosh Erin is such a royal bitch! Also I love Greg and Nina! But i was wondering why is Max so underdevloped? He's kinda random lol. Anyways i really like this story and can't wait to see what will come next!
Hi EvaJaye! Cam & Philip have been through a lot! Erin is terrible and I love Greg and Nina too! As for Max... Funny enough, I've noticed his absence and lack in the story and I honestly never intended to make him so underdeveloped. He is a minor character that I wanted to mention on more than one occasion (more than I have) but I sort of got caught up in the other characters and he was pushed aside, however I do have a pivotal scene with him and Erin coming up soon. I've a mind to re-work some parts of this story and add a few things I wanted to but never got around too or didn't see a need for until re-reading it recently. Anyway, I appreciate honest reviews like this so much. It's really the only way to improve I think. I'd much rather receive reviews discussing characters and plotting than a simple "update" or "I like it" but alas, it doesn't happen that way all the time, does it. Thank you so much for the reading and the review. I appreciate it! :)
Erin deserves to be cussed out; after all, she's worked so hard to receive it hasn't she? Not only has she sidetracked a relationship that could have been in a two-point-five-kids-and-a-dog status by now, she's still trying to insert herself into the life of a man that was taken before he even grew a mustache! I'm quite certain that Nina has no idea of Erin's deception, so, i'm quite certain Nina will have some choice words for her lying, manipulative, trifling ass! [Whatever happened to Erin's kid? Did she have it, give it up for adoption, or did she decide to keep it or does George have his child?]
Now that everything's clear, all the cards laid out or will be...what's next for our couple? Where do they go from here? Maybe, possibly, this is their time to
I'm glad you're writing mojo is back and hopefully it will continue to crank-out regular updates.
Hi JV4ME! LOL! Erin has worked extremely hard to get whatever she receives. I love the 2.5 and a dog stat statement! Made me laugh! Some of the stuff about Erin's child will come out in the following chapter. Cam and Philip being on the same level now can only lead to good things. Thanks so much for reading, rating and the review! It's inspiring! :)
Love the update! I hope Cameron introduces Erin to a good ol fashioned asswhooping
Hi Monique! Erin does indeed some form of punishment doesn't she. She totally ruined a relationship that could have blossomed into something beautiful. At least they have now. Thanks so much for reading and the review! You're the best!
Im dying to read the next chapter, to see Cameron kick that Erin's ass!!!
Hi Serenity! Thanks so much for reading and the review! I appreciate it so much! :)
Thank you so much for giving us an update on this story, I just Cameron and Phillip!! The *itch Erin needs to get run over by a bus!! I give this update two thumbs up for Cameron finally telling Phillip why she was so hurt. Although he had to force the conversation. I am going to reread the whole story again, as I love it so. Please don't make us wait as long for the next update.
Hi pmgayles! Thank you so much for not being upset with the extended amount of time that passes between updates! Writing is tough for me (finding time and maintaining interest) but I love it so much. I'm glad you like Cam and Philip and that you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for reading, rating and the review! It brought a smile to my face! :)
OMG!!! Erin is such a vindictive bitch. She deserved the ass whopping Cameron put on her ass!!!
Hi BossLady! You've hit the nail on the head with Erin and she deserves something severe. Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing. You're the best! :)
“Really Nina,” Greg exclaimed. “Are you really still telling people that I help her at the nail shop?” Greg turned to Cameron and Erin. “You’ll have to excuse my fiancée. She confuses doing graphic and marketing stuff with applying fake acrylic nails.”
Made me bust out laughing...
I love writing for Nina and Greg. They are love! I have a stellar idea for a story for them. Hopefully I can get it out before I grow bored, lose my muse or life happens. Thanks so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :)
Now we are getting down to it!!!!! Yeah lol.
I am truly enjoying Cameron and Phillips story. Looking forward to the next installment
Hi Show Love! Yes, everything is now out and hopefully everything will be resolved between Cam and Philip. I'm so happy to hear that you're enjoying their story! Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing! That's so super awesome of you! :)
Never mind catching up, they need to give that skank a beatdown. Boston style fo' reals.
I really like Cam. She's a champ.
Hi AmaraJayne! Awww... but don't you wanna see Cam & Philip re-connect? Just Kidding. Erin deserves probably much more than a beat down. I'm so glad you like Cam. I'm alway curious to know how people really feel about her. I can relate to her character, being sort of an internalized person but I'm never sure how everyone else perceives her. Anyway, many thanks to you for reading, rating and reviewing. You're the best! :)
Erin is a coniving little weasel and I hope they don't let her get by with any other things. She's beeing carrying like she wasn't part of the reason Cameron and Phillip fell off. Hopefully, now with things out inthe open, they can slowly move towards their potential. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Hi helloWORLD! Erin is a weasel and has been carrying on like nothing is wrong because of her. Things are going on the up and up with Cameron and Philip! YAY! Thanks so much for reading, review and rating! I appreciate it very much! :)
Please continue. I'm loving this story. Everybody just needs to let Cam kick Erin's ass up and down the block.
Hi choklit! Erin's horrible and her intrigues will be addressed by Cameron shortly. Thanks so much for reading. I appreciate it sooo much! :)
oh my! please update soon...
Hi Bredreaway! I'm working my way through this story... slowly but surely! Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating. I appreciate it! :)
I'm really enjoying this. At least now I know why Cam was mad at Philip. I bet that heffa Erin was lying though...
Hi Brenda1257! Everything is out in the open now... took me long enough to get there! LOL! Erin is what Erin is... conniving and sneaky. Thank you much for reading, the review and rating! :)
Yes you are finally back i can't wait for the rest of this story to unfold
Hi Tiera! I am back, though slowly getting through this story! Thanks for continuing to read despite the updates! I appreciate your support! :)
I wish that Cam had beat the hell out of Erin,that sneaky ho is still up to her old tricks and as usual nobody is on to her 2 faced ass, especially Phillip.Nina still should have minded her own business like Greg told her to do. Mimi is a trip and I like her for telling the truth about themselves. Glad to see you back and look forward to the next chapters.
Hi jai02! Erin is indeed a sneak. Some people will go to great lengths to get what they want or prevent others from getting what's rightfully theirs. Nina is a nosey rosey, but she means well and Mimi is the best thing that's popped into my head as far as stories go. She's my comic relief! Thanks so much for reading and the review. You rock for that! :)
Yay! A new update! Woohoo! I hate Erin even more for lying just to break them up. If you can't have a man that you want, find another. Don't mess with someone's happiness just to try to get your own! Ugh! They should have let Cam give her that asswhooping she deserves, and Phillip needs to open his eyes and take a good look around him and stop living in Philip land! I love this story! Please update soon! Glad you are back!
Erin is one to loathe. I've known a few Erin's in my life and there is nothing cute about them. Philip and Cam's saga will come full circle in the next two chapters! Thanks so much for reading and the review and for sticking it out! I appreciate that so much! :)
Great story. Mimi is a trip, I love her dialogue. I cant wait for the next chapter!
Mimi is so much fun to write, a little tough but fun nonetheless. Thank you so much for reading and the review! :)
Cami thinks that Phillip got Erin pregnant while he was sexing her up? Is that why she stopped speaking to Phillip? I love this story and I love all of male characters they are hot!!!! Please give my HEA, Cameron forgive Phillip the man is still in love with you!!1
Oh the drama betwixt these two! All will be revealed in the next two chapters. Thank you SOOO MUCH, for sticking it out and not complaining about the extended amount of time that has passed between updates! You totally rock for supporting this story! :)
No sweat on the 'pep talk' deary. All writers need encouragment from time to time. And...I GOT AN UPDATE! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
On to the story--
The plot thickens.
Cam and Phillip were getting it on in HS but were super secretive about it b/c she is a PK. Then here comes Erin saying she is pregnant and there is a possibility that it is Phillip's?
Can you spell receipe for disaster? Why yes. Yes, I believe you can.
I can't wait to see how you pull this off dear b/c this is a doozy!
P.S. My favorite country Korean was LIVE AND DIRECT! I will never be able to get enough of her. LOL!
Thanks for the wonderful update, dear!
Sebine... Have I told you lately that you're AWESOME! :)
The plot most certainly thickens. It's chaos for these two but everything will come out in the wash soon! And isn't Mimi the cutest thing ever? I have fun writing her, though it's rough sometimes. I loved how she tried to check Nina. That whole exchange made me laugh while I wrote it (Corny, Right?) Anyway, thanks so much for reading and your constant encouragement! I really, really appreciate it! :)
So glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reading and the review! I appreciate it very much!
It flows really good...great job
Thank you for the comp! I appreciate hearing that. Sometimes pacing can be an issue for author's so it's nice to hear that you don't feel the plot is choppy in any way. Thanks for the review and for reading! :)
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