Good update. I like where you're going with these characters and that Nina knew she went to far.
Author's Response: Hi peach martini! Thanks for reading. Nina is a pretty self aware woman (after the fact) and is willing to bow out when necessary. She values Cameron's friendship and really wants what's best for her more than anything, she just sort of went about it the wrong way. Anyway, I appreciate your kind words and the review! :)
Date: April 04 2011 10:44 pm
Thanks for the update, it was GOOD.... OK I see that Erin was the school TRAMP, I knew from the beginning that she was NO GOOD, and to think that Nina still befriends her even after she slept with her EX while they were still married, I so hope that Erin gets hers.
I also see that she knew that Carmeron was into Phillip and moved in on him on purpose.
I look forward to Cameron and Phillip FINALLY get everything out in the open.
Author's Response: Hi lady liberty! Erin has a bit of a naughty girl rep and yes Nina forgave her but there's much more to that than what's been revealed thus far. Cam and Philip moments will soon surface more and more in coming chapters. I hope you enjoy those interactions. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it! :) Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 04 2011 07:10 pm
I don't like that Erin heifer, she is nothing but ho and has been for years. Why is Nina befriending the ho that slept with you ex-husband? I wouldn't that ho around my child either. Bring on chapter six!!!
Author's Response: Hi pmgayles! Erin is def the villain in my story but there's some more to her than what I've conveyed. And some more info about Nina and Erin and her ex husband will breifly be addressed as well. Anyway, thanks so much for the review. I appreciate it! :)
Date: April 04 2011 06:53 am
Please give me more, I so love this story. NOt to mention the males characters in this are hot!!!
Author's Response: Hi pmgayles! Glad you're wanting more! These characters are so much fun to play with and aren't Josh, John and Adam a nice group of guys to look at?!?! Thanks for the review! :)
Date: April 03 2011 07:02 pm
Oh wow. I read them all so far. Sebine told me I would like this and she was right.
You tell a good story. I like the way you set up the background. Not too much information and yet not enough so I want to keep coming back to find out what's going on.
Nicely done.
Author's Response: Hi Acorn! Thanks for reading and tell Sebine thanks for the rec. I'm glad you're enjoying the story itself. That's so important. I didn't want to just write something that has no depth or meaning. Again thanks for reading and for leaving a review. I appreciate it! :) Reviewer: Acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04 2011 07:56 am
Oh my gosh! What happened between Cam and Philip?? I love your writing style it makes it easy to follow everything that's happening and its an awesome story line! please up date soon - i'm loving it!!
Author's Response: Hi Proudly African! More will be revealed about the Cam/Philip saga. Thanks for the compliment on my style of writing. I appreciate hearing that. It makes writing that much more motivating and rewarding. Thanks so much for your review! :)
Date: February 03 2011 04:33 pm
Ok maybe I am overreacting but what kind off a best friend is NINA???? She knows that Cam and Erin have some tension between them and issue, but she still invited Erin knowing that Cam is going to be there too. I don't have nothing against Nina being friend with Erin, but she don't need to invite Cam and Erin in the same room at the same time. I would stay mad for days at my bestfriend if she pull that off with me. I wouldn't have even showed up. I would have give her a piece of mind and may be help her the next day. I'm sure that Nina wouldn't have like it if Cam did that too her.
And what is that about Erin sleeping with Nina's ex husband while she was still married??
But also Cam needs to let things go. What could have been soo bad between her and Phillip that happen so long ago. And especially if they didn't even date. Anyways what had happened was 15 years ago and she still can't talk about it ?? She is 32 years old. When will she be ready to talk about it?? after another 15 years when she is almost 50???
Author's Response: Hi Anon! So, I don't think you're overreacting about Nina. What she did wasn't her best judgement but she means well. At this point Nina doesn't know the severity of Cam's issues with Erin, so that plays into a lot. Cameron is uptight by nature but we'll slowly see her let her guard down as the story unfolds. Anywya, thanks so much for the feedback. I love getting reviews like this. They offer insight to the characters that I may or may not have intentionally implied. Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2011 02:28 am
Great cast. Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks Divisionred! Casting is one of my favorite parts of the story writing process.
[Report This]Date: February 02 2011 09:48 pm
Oh I need to know WHAT HAPPENED!!!
Did bio-mom say something about Cam? To Cam? How is all going to work out? I mean really.
And what's with Cameron and Erin? In Phillip never dated her, and there is tension then something must have happened right? Do tell. I'm nosey and I WANNA KNOW!
I loved this chapter as I do with all you're chapters.
Thanks for the speedy update! Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Hi Sebine! Questions, questions my dear.... (some I don't even know the answer too just yet!) The Cameron/Erin deal is coming up very soon and so will the root of the issue betwixt Cameron and Philip. Side note: I <3 the fact that you're nosey, cause so am I. I'm so impatient with stuff I really want to know details about. Anyway, thanks again for your support and your awesome review! :) Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
[Report This]Date: February 02 2011 04:42 pm
Phillip also needs to stop pushing the issue and give her a break ,obviously she's not ready. He and Nina are too much. Its all about what they want and what they think is best for Cam. What about what Cam wants?? They need to allow her her space. When she's ready she'll deal with her issues. Again Nina needs to keep her focus on her wedding. She was being abit too pushy.
Author's Response: Hi baha_malo! Philip was pushing her and probably a bit too much but he's just trying his best to pry her open. Cam's got a tough little shell that's hard to crack open. Nina is at her core a friend who wants what's best even if she doesn't know what's best. Thanks so much for reading and the review! I appreciate it! :)
[Report This]Date: February 02 2011 06:38 am
I'm sorry but I'm not liking Nina right now for ambushing Cam with Philip and now Erin. She knew these people represent something painful to Cam and she's forcing the issue. I'm sure if the shoe was on the other shoe, Nina wouldn't be so gong ho about it.
She might have good intentions but she needs to focus on her wedding before she causes more problems for Cam who isn't and hasn't been comfortable about what Nina is doing but is being accomodative to her so as not to cause her any issues about interfering in her life. Even Greg felt it was too much!
Author's Response:
Hi baha_malo. Nina's doing the best she can with what she's working with, not knowing all the juicy tidbits of what actually went down. Anyway, much will be revealed in coming chapters and maybe we'll get a better understanding as to why Nina shouldn't have done what she did. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: February 02 2011 06:27 am
So disappointed there wasn't more. Don't like waiting for updates, so.... ;-)
Author's Response: Sorry jovanfan4evr.... life sort of caught me off guard and of course writing gets placed on the back burner. All apologies. Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 05:58 pm
You've got me anticipating the next update. I heart Greg, he's funny and whipped. Is Erin the cause of the Cam/Philip riff? Nina's losing bff points by the minute. I stll don't get why she deemed it neccessary to have Erin and Cam work together given their history. Couldn't Nina have met with her without Cam? It was bad enough she didn't mention Philip was best man, but I could understand her maybe wanting them to reconcile their friendship. Gawd! You've drawn me in to this story already.
Author's Response: Hi peachmartini! So glad you're liking what I'm delivering. I really heart Greg too, more and more each time I write. It's hard not to include him in a chapter. Erin is part of the Cam/Philip riff. Nina's trying to be a good friend but is quite possibly making things a little worse for dear ole Cam! Thanks so much for reading and the review. I most certainly appreciate it! :)
Date: January 31 2011 09:00 pm
What is wrong with Nina? If Cameron is supposed to be her best friend, why would she ask Erin , the troublemaker to be in your house at the same time. You are just asking for bad feelings and possibly losing a friend behind playing peacemaker. I'm glad that you used Marsha Thomason and Josh Duhamel from Vegas as your main characters. Enjoying the story and waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi jai03. I knew Nina would get some flack but her heart was in the right place. There's a little more to Cameron's situation that Nina's not aware of and therefore she tried to be peacemaker without all the facts. Isn't Josh a cutie and I always thought he and Marsha just sorta look good together. Anyway, ramble, ramble, ramble. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: January 31 2011 07:38 pm
Got a chance to check out this story, and I like what I have read so far, and the flashbacks flow well with the present time.
Ok already not crazy about Erin and that remark that she made, she seems like the type you wanna SMACK b/c she says something STUPID.... Can't wait to find out what she did, but I think that I may already know.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hi lady liberty. Thanks so much for taking time to read my little story. Erin has some issues, which I'll dive in as the story progresses. Not much but just to give the reader a better sense of who she is and why she does what she does. Not to sway you or anyone for that matter, just to give some depth to that character. Anyway, I appreciate the comments! :) Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 31 2011 08:01 am
This is pure excellence! I love it! So glad you posted. Your images are lovely; the casting is great; the characters are wonderful! I'm looking forward to more. You take me back with mentioning Mitsubishi Eclipses, Luscious Jackson, Beastie Boys, etc. Those were the days of MY youth, too! LOL Only not as glam as your cast. ;)
I, too, want to know what happened with Cam and Philip. Can't wait to read more on that. Greg and Nina are pure love love LOVE! This story is funny, smart, thoughtful. I'm really loving it. :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and the casting. I had a lot of fun casting this story. I first fell in love with the idea of Josh Duhamel's character and Marsha Thomason's characters on Las Vegas but I didn't want to write a Las Vegas fanfic, though that's not a bad idea. They just look sooo good together. Dontcha' think? Anyway, so glad I could aid in your nostalgia and glad you like Greg and Nina. I responded to an earlier review stating that a Greg/Nina fic may spawn from this one much later. I guess we'll see. Thanks so much for your kind words and taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 01 2011 07:11 pm
Girl you are an idiot!! LOL!
That whole country Korean convo was CLASSIC!!! My husband looked at me kinda funny when I was lughing while I was reading.
And the Camometer? Really? LOL! I just couldn't get enough!
As for Cam and Philip, you got a sista wondering what happened. Because for them to be besties and suddenly she can't stand the ground he walks on, something major had to have happened.
I am LOVING THIS STORY! Until the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I can be rather wacky sometimes. I'm glad you liked the country Korean piece. I first enivisioned that scene in my head and thought, how on earth am I going to execute this? I was belly aching over that but thought it could be read as weird and ridiculous. Thanks for finding my corny sense of humor amusing! Glad you liked the Camometer too. I plan on elaborating on that just a little bit in a future chapter. The Cam/Philip saga will start to unfold soon enough. They both feel the same way about each other but neither knows. Thanks so much for the awesome review. I really, really, really appreciate it! :) Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
[Report This]Date: December 29 2010 03:21 pm
So he had feelings for Cameron, I ask again did they date in the past?
Author's Response: Hi pmgayles. He did and still does have feelingsf for Cameron. As for if they dated in the past... that will be addressed in later chapters. (I hope that answer is okay with you :) Thanks for the review!
Date: December 29 2010 07:17 am
Loved the update.
Author's Response: Thanks baha_malo! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2010 06:16 am
Great start, well written and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hi aprilfool. It makes me so happy that you enjoyed the start of this story. Thanks for the compliment and the review. I appreciate it.
Date: December 28 2010 12:01 am
Me likey. Good start.
Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks for the review! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 27 2010 10:10 pm
This will be a wedding to remember. Love it.
Author's Response: Hi Bayoumomma. I do hope it is a wedding to remember. Thanks so much for reading and the review.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2010 03:46 pm
Beautiful cast.
Author's Response: Thank you bayoumomma! I had a lot of fun creating the cast pics and banners. I could stare at pictures of Josh Duhamel all day long! :)
[Report This]Date: December 27 2010 03:37 pm
Great start to the story. I can't wait to read why Cameron is so mad at Philip. Thanks
Author's Response: Hi divisionred. You'll find out Cameron's hang up soon enough. Thanks for reading the story and the feedback. That's awesome of you. Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: December 27 2010 06:20 am
Your banner drew my in, your character pics made me interested and now that I have read the story I love it.
Cam and Phil. Tension much? I guess getting to the bottom of that well will be interesting.
Your dialogue is on point and I am LOVING that you cast Cho marrying Tamala Jones. I don't know why, I just do :)
Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response: Hi Sebine. I love hearing that the banner drew you in because (I really probably shouldn't admit this) I tend to read stories that have an interesting banner to accompany the story. I think it's because I'm so visual by nature. I'm really in <3 with John Cho and Tamala Jones characters and think I'd like to do a spin off story for them. IDK... it would be a while before I got to that. Anyway, I really appreciate you reading and the feedback. Thanks for that! Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed
[Report This]Date: December 27 2010 06:19 am