nice chapter :)
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed
[Report This]Date: July 18 2013 05:03 pm
Good story. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Cynthia Allen Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 04 2013 01:26 am
Did any of the words that Joey spoke to her about Fabian register? The man is bad news girl so why can't she see that? Just because the man is beautiful doesn't make inherently good. There is a saying, "All that glitters isn't gold"! All we don't know much about Fabian yet but what we do know isn't great or positive. Slow your roll, Meka! Dumb child!
Author's Response: Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: June 29 2013 02:29 pm
fantastic update.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2013 09:38 am
this is good so far! Keep updating plz
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2013 05:53 am
I am really enjoying the way that you write, it is very easy to read and picture. It's still way to early to try and analyze the characters, so I can't wait to learn more about them especially Fabian.
Everyone has a dark side, some are just better at hiding it so I am excited to read about Fabian's.
Btw I didn't say if before but the guy you have as Fabian is HOT!!
Update Soon!!!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: June 29 2013 01:13 am
Meka's first clue that Fabian wasn't a good man should have Joey's reaction to his presence. Her second clue should have been Joey calling her Linda. Meka is young and dumb.
Author's Response: Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: June 29 2013 12:13 am
was this a flashback?
Author's Response:
I am sorry for the confusion. No ma'm. This is where the story officially begans. THe chapter before was the prologue.
Reviewer: renata Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 11:13 pm
this is interesting i'm looking forward to reading more
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 10:19 pm
I'm intrigued although scared about the ending....doesn't seem as though this story will have a happily ever after but I can't wait for the next chapter hehe.
It seems like Fabian is about to try and commit suicide....
Update Soon!!!
Author's Response:
You are in luck! I just updated! But it probably won't be what you wanted. Hehehe.
Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 09:43 pm
Is Fabian about to kill Meka? Is Fabian a gangster? What did Meka witness and who was murdered? Did Fabian actually do the shooting or did he order it?
Author's Response:
Only time will tell! You will get to see the true Fabian as time goes on. :} In all his hot glory!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 04:51 pm
Love the cast!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 04:37 pm
Intrigued.
Author's Response:
I am guessing that is a good thing? Haha.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 04:26 pm
Oh wowwwww! First off, I love your writing style. I'm eager to see how Fabian and Meka got to be at this point they are at now and what he's going to do next. I really hope you update soon and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
THank you! Well, I just updated so you can go see the first part right about now. Haha.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2013 10:05 am
I had almost 4got N about this story seems the first ch. happened ater on then went bk 1 give the bk ground of how she got there? very intreguing keep on hopefully sooner than later want 2 c how this 1st sat went & how the talk went among
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 08 2011 06:36 pm
A beautiful song but so deep in it's poetic meaning I had to read twice and slowly; perhaps confusion is because it is sung in a foreign language and I had to be translated. I think I came away with the meaning that she brings the divine light of life into his life; that as long as he is with her he can even go to places where he's never been. It's with her that his life has meaning, is alive with meaning and as long as he is with her he never feels alone, he can even go to strange countries he has never been in before as long as she is with him. Also, when he is alone without her physical presence, she is so much a part of him that her essence in some way has remained with him through his love for her so that all these enrichments that she brings to his life also remain; he still has these enrichments of self and spirit that are with him wherever he is or goes in life.
Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2011 06:10 am
WOoHoO
Reviewer: DivineFindings Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 13 2011 12:46 am
I was referred to this story by a friend who knows how much I enjoy dark fics and let me tell you...I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!! I read all the chapters in 30 minutes to get caught up. Please update often because like Fabian, I am now obsessed. I don't know why the stalkerish, psycho alphas make me swoon, but I am swooning something serious over here. You are very talented and I hope to see you published one day. This story is awesome and I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: CapitalPeach Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2011 06:23 pm
Fabian is very domineering and obessive and I dare to say borderline crazy. He has found his perfect Submissive in Meka.. I believe he becomes more controlling once he learns how inexperienced she is when it comes to life and sex.
Looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.. I definitely don't see a HEA with this one..
Author's Response: He is exactly what you say. Hmm. Borderline. Girl he plays hopscotch with that line. Haha. We will see about that. Haha. ;} Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 03 2011 03:39 am
i love this story!!!
cant wait for more
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! Minus my mistakes! Haha.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2011 12:43 am
Love the banner beautiful MJ. Thank You. Now I need to go read it.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 01 2011 12:30 am
OK, ? is the guy with the gun Fabian her love interest, and is he the same guy from the resturant? All i can say is I hope she jumped because as far as I am concerned she dead if she does and dead if she stays.
NOW UPDATE!!!! And no I am not to proud to beg!!!
Author's Response: Maaaybe. Lol. Just playing. ;} you are so right. I will. Tomorrow hopefully! Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 30 2010 11:25 pm
I like it so far
Author's Response: Thanks! That last chapter made me kind of iffy. Haha. ;}
Date: December 30 2010 02:29 am
WOW yoe were right!!!! now I can read the story
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! `} it took me all day to find the characters. Haha. Please keep reading. And listen to the song!
Date: December 29 2010 02:07 am