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Title: Instincts

This story is intense, but I'm enjoying it thoroughly.  Bowie is a bad chick and Svetlana needs to leave her alone, but we know she won't.  Vlad's brother needs to rethink his alliance with that crazy woman.  Jan is a straight up slimeball and I could see him joining forces with Svetlana, and in the process getting himself killed. 

Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next part.

 Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2011 12:09 am
Title: Instincts

I knew Bowie was not a mere human ..something supernatural about her..but I love she whipped Sveltho's butt big time....she should have killed her!! Now her and Alexi are working together to get rid of our Bowiie...looks like Vlad will have to kill his own brother...how stupid!!

So many people will be against them if they do finally allow themselves to fall for each other but both are bad arse people so Bowie and Vlad with the help of Ludmilla ..can handle them!!!

I just cannot wait for them to get together permanently!!!

Vlad has the rough, can screw your brains out and make you beg for more look...he is ubber sexy!!!More more more...

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2011 09:52 pm
Title: Instincts

interesting... Did Bowie's dad know something about her that he forgot to tell her? 

great update!

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2011 08:52 pm
Title: Instincts

Excellent!! Alexei and Slutlana must go! They must die now!!! What's going on with Bowie. What is she? She gave Slutlana the beat down. I love this story so very very much. And yeah, those red shoes....not a good look. Great chapter!!!!

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2011 08:22 pm
Title: Confrontation Part 2

stalking around for update

 Reviewer: brownie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2011 03:49 pm
Title: Confrontation Part 2

OMG...that was hot hot hot!!! Forget Joey!!! I am begging for another update

 Reviewer: Leogina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2011 07:30 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

MORE PLEASE !! That was so MEAN of you to just stop like that  !!!

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 04:41 pm
Title: Confrontation Part 2

I'm glad they didn't let the crazy woman get to Bowie. I wonder how things are going to be between Vlad and Bowie now that that's happened. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 

 Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 04:21 am
Title: Roots, Bloody Roots Pt. 2

This chapter had me on the edge of my chair.....brilliantly written....everything is making sense

 Reviewer: Leogina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 03:53 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

Okay, so I totally forgot to leave a review when I read this first time around. You literally left me speechless and that's not a good thing for a lady who uses words!

Whew! Score one for Team Vlad bwahahahahaha... although I do feel kinda bad for Joey and people on Team BowJo. Oh well, as Bowie said, what happens in Russia...

However, something tells me it's going to spill over. My man Vlad tells me he's feeling insatiable now that he's had a taste.*winkwinknudgenudgeknowwhatImean?*

I was literally yelling, "Bite her, dammit! Just bite her!" Vlad, next time Bowie offers her neck up on a plate to you, feast away my friend, feast away!

Superb chapter, IT!

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 03:02 am
Title: Just a Little Closer

Please don't let anything happen to Joey....I love him!!!! I hope she ends up with him In the end...

 Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 01:54 am
Title: The Players

Chapter 16 was excellent, can't wait for the following ch.

 

 Reviewer: truthsetrnl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 12:34 am
Title: The Players

I love this story. Its my new favorite. Update soon please!

 Reviewer: Apple Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 08:59 pm
Title: And Life Moves on

I don't know...I am a fan of both men....hot hot hot!!!

 Reviewer: Leogina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 07:08 pm
Title: Confrontation Part 2

WOW!!! that was beyond hawt!!!! im a little sad though because this whole time even though i knew shed end up with vlad i was rooting for her and joey. i feel bad for him.  but your writing is seemless and masterful as always i.t.!!!!! even though im afraid to find out i cant wait to see what happens next!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 01:33 pm
Title: Confrontation Part 2

I am loving your story. I should have been asleep over an hour ago! I can't wait for the next installment.

I'm enjoying the layered plot, and to find out how you put the puzzle together for us.

Reviewer: A.C. Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 09:57 am
Title: The Players

Poor bowie you dont get to decide anything now

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 09:46 am
Title: The Players

I love you!!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 09:44 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

Ok, so I just HAD to do another review because the chapter was TOO good!

"I say that Bowie doesn't get her way in deciding that "What happens here, stays her"  I say Vladimir goes after her and let's Bowie know in no uncertain terms that Yes, it will happen again...and again...and again."-So yeah, I totally agree with Nyeesha. Vlad totally needs to assert himself like he normally does and get in her pants again. EEEEEKKKK SO EXCITED :D **does happy dance** haha, cannot wait for the morning after :D

 Reviewer: Alphabet_Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 04:57 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

I CAN'T EVEN RIGHT NOW! I JUST CANNOT. That was too damn much **trembles** haha. I want them to be together, even though everyone else is against them. But seriously that was so.hot.

I think my brain, eyes and panties just melted haha.

WELL DONE! THANKS SO MUCH :D

 Reviewer: Alphabet_Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 04:50 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

Awesome.  Can't wait until the next update.  Great story.

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 04:16 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

Wow Wow Wow..that was incredible!! I read it twice went got some water..did my husand and read it again!!lol

Cause that was hawt!!

I cannot believe Vlad just let her leave..and Bowie did not want to go so why...I do know she is crazy if she thinks this was a one time thing..she belongs more han ever to that severely hawt sexy Vampire!!

OK Jan is creeping me out and really do not trust him..he is up to something other than Bowies panties.

Svelt is going to get herself killed and I kinda think Bowie might be the one to do it..I dont think Bowie is a normal human..I think she has some type of supernatural abilities.

I really like Milla and Bowie as friends..actually more like sisters..they fight, laugh and seem to already care about each other.

IT girl you are writing the heck out of this darn story..I hate to be greedy but more more more!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 03:54 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

umm...well..ummm...sooo...yeah

I take it she kinda likes Vlad. HA!

Bowie, yeah, it won't happen again, right... And if you believe that, I've got some swamp land in Arizona for sale.

She almost ripped him to shreds. I noticed that when she had sex with Joey, she was talking bout teaching him how to keep up with her. I don't think Vlad has that problem. There's something going on with Bowie in regards to that. I know she's a lustful individual, but there's something going on there. And there's no way in hell that Vlad will stop now. He's gotten a little taste of her and that has just whetted his appetite. Who will surrender first? This should be an interesting dance.

Why would she even think he should bite her? why? Something's afoot.

ITM, you blow me away. I enjoy ALL of your stories *including PWAHII, hint*

Author's Response: i know, i know! but my braiin is consumed by Farewell. i just can't seem to get into Penny's grove. though i do miss my DeLeon. lol

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 03:30 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

Woah.

What an explosive chapter. I need a fire extinguisher, seriously...

I love Reid and really want him to get with Ludmil already and sod what anyon else thinks. Vlad and Bowie coupling was hawt. I'm getting hot flushes. I feel so bad for Joey, the poor lad really likes her, who knows maybe he might fall for veronica instead. Because Bowie needs to be with Vlad.

Great update. More ! More ! More ! 

 Reviewer: MissVee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 02:31 am
Title: Confrontation Part 2

oh myyyy..  i love it ,why did he not bite her?  bowie is in love with him? so she could be preg now his hot seed inside of her...

 Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 12:44 am


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