It was so short, what's the dealio? Evy is tripping, help the poor child. She won't be able to get out that contract so she might as well quit trying.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: August 05 2012 03:41 am
What happened to the baby?
Author's Response: I'm getting to that.. Reviewer: Stories Signed
[Report This]Date: August 05 2012 02:29 am
I don't like the way that Senna is treating Evelyn. I get that he is angry with her for leaving but he doesn't know why she left. The fact that she had just ran from a horrible abuser now she is with the equivalent of the same type of person. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2012 02:48 pm
SO now Evelyn is pregnant with Senna's baby. Did she keep the baby? It has been two years since they have seen each other. Did her know where she was all of this time? How did he even know whom to have the PI keepa watch on if that was the first night that he had met her when she was running from her abusive boyfriend? AS for the woman that showed up at the hotel to ridicule Evelyn for being pregnant and then the hotel receptionist being an idiot no wonder Senna didn't realize that the woman that he knew were sbaotaging his relationship with Evelyn. I can't wait for him to find out. Hopefully before he does something that he will regret. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2012 02:41 pm
I guess she is stuck in this job with a man that she doesn't seem to like very much. Very interesting. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2012 02:36 pm
Good start to the story. What in the heck did she do to dude to make him so upset with her. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2012 02:35 pm
Because of her previous relationship start of great and finished badly.She think the same thing will happen with Senna?!
What happened after the 2 years:
Why she came back?
What happen to her child(she didn't mention the presence of a youngster) or was there even one for begin with.Sometimes a woman can miss her period for different reason(psychology/physicaly).(like in Evelyn case stress could be a reason)
Hope one day you'll want to finish it and bring an answer(s) to my question(s) ^_^
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2012 12:08 am
Poor Evelyn :(
Mystery woman an Mandy are ugh! (I can't put words on that).
Woah...Make her pay O_o
Dude is mad.
On to the next chapter
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: February 12 2012 10:19 pm
Awww so short but good.
On 2 the next 1 ^_^
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2012 08:38 pm
Great start.
Up to the next chapter ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks :o) Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: February 12 2012 08:32 pm
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it so far! Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 13 2011 02:06 pm
Thanks for the update. What happened to the pregnancy? Evelyn seems to want Senna. I look forward to the next update.
Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 12 2011 11:42 pm
Evelyn is doomed. if she thought she could oppose Senna - he just proved her wrong, lol! thanks for the hot update! keep them coming! wonder what happened to the baby...hmm...
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 05:07 pm
Woo girl, gimme some mo!!LOL
Author's Response: This made me smile!! Thanks :D Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2011 11:24 am
ohhh i little short but sweet. wow senna is so forceful and manly, just up my street. cant wit for an update. where is the child?
Reviewer: kamille Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 10:25 am
Oh Boy!! She is in trouble now as Senna has just declared war!!! Did she lose the baby???
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 06:23 am
Oh. My. God. This story is....wow. I just can't right now. Please update. Please Please Please update. Like tomorrow.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 06:13 am
Ummhmmm I like this super short tho but sweet n' Hot LOL
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 06:10 am
ooh this is good I like this dominant senna character
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 06:08 am
Senna is an ahole a fine one, but an ahole none-the-less. What are we gonna to with his fine ass?
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 04:25 am
I am intrigued by one very important thing since apparently something happened. What happen to the baby she was carrying, Senna's baby???? Other then that one question I am truly enjoying this story.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 04:02 am
wow umm that was hot very hot lol. Evelyn should had know Seena going to make sure he see you every day no matter what and he not letting you go girl anytime soon or never. What happen to the baby?
No wonder why she acting crazy when it comes to men. First her father leaves her then she was in a very bad mess with this matthew guy crazy. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 03:13 am
Was she pregnant? Did she have the baby?
Senna is relentless and I like that in a kinky kind of way.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 02:26 am
This story is so good. I love the interaction between Evelyn and Senna. That man doesn't play. I know the next chapter is going to be interesting!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 01:41 am
layin' it down already! i like that!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2011 01:20 am