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Title: Chapter 4

Damn!, that was hot!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2011 01:08 am
Title: Chapter 4

OMG! I want more! Senna is a piece of work. Please do not make Evelyn make it easy for him. Yes, he was tore up when she left without a word, but since he has found her, has he questioned why she left? No he has not. He is all set on getting her back and teaching her a lesson for ever leaving him. The communication is lacking completely between them. Now Senna thinks he has the right to shove his fingers up her p*ssy whenever he feels like it. The bastard. Please make Evelyn fight back. Senna may be fine, but his a*s needs to show some respect. They both need to clear the air, but I know that won't be happening anytime soon and that is okay because I love the back and forth. I just want Evelyn to have some control. Great update!

I always want to keep reading and reading. I wish you could post longer chapters or two at a time. I know, I am impatient, but this story is really good.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2011 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 3

I like it, can't wait till the next post!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 05 2011 06:03 am
Title: Chapter 3

Great start . Can't wait to read more .

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 04:55 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Well that was...really fast.

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2011 09:00 am
Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story. I wish you would write longer updates but I am really enjoying it. Please keep it up!

 Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 10:42 pm
Title: Chapter 3

love what i've read so far please update often ;)

 Reviewer: 100%FAN Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 01:18 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for the update.  I hope Evelyn did not have an abortion.  Who was the woman giving her a hard time?

Please update again soon!!

 Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 10:14 am
Title: Chapter 3

hurry with more, this story has a great beginning!!

 Reviewer: sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 07:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

I almost forgot.  That love scene lacked detail and fire!  I know it's hard to write scenes like that.  Maybe you should read other erotic stories to figure out how to do it effectively. That love scene was PG at best.  

 Reviewer: Jannelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 06:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

I am intrigued by this story.  Just a few things.  What happened with Micheal?  Why did Evelyn run off.  Don't tell me it was because of what that stupid woman said in the hotel.  Why didn't she defend herself?  I have a love/hate relationship with authors who provide pics of their characters.  That doesn't give you an excuse not to describe them.  What exactly does Senna do?  In short, I need more detail.  Also you might want to find someone to edit for you.  There was an instance in your story, when Senna was describing Evelyn's going away party...you described it as "some sort of leaving party."  You can kind of get away with that if you explain that Senna's first language is not English (I'm assuming that because his name sounds Italian), but otherwise it just sounds weird. I like this story and I hope you continue!  

 Reviewer: Jannelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 06:54 am
Title: Chapter 3

Ok, this story sounds good. However, I am confused by some things said in the story so, far, for instance,,,,Mathew beaten her so hard, Do you mean slept her! Constructive criticism here, Ow, or Oh!! Are you going to give more details about her relationship with mathew. Evelyn is on my nerves for leaving and not telling Senna she was pregnant with his child. She sounds sooo imature. How could she let that stupid Woman scare like that and not confront Senna and refuse to speak to him. Evelyn is naive and needs a backbone. Well, since two years past I hope she changed for the better!!!

 Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 05:23 am
Title: Chapter 3

She ran from not this Matthew person but from her feelings for Senna.  Did she have the baby? Was it a boy or a girl?  Who is this Matthew person?  Is he a past lover or abusive ex-husband?  I love this story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 03:59 am
Title: Chapter 3

Oh, she was preggers???!!! WOW!!! Who was the bitch that messed with her head?? I hope Senna finds her and gives her a reality check for messing with his woman.  Did she go through with the pregnancy??? I hope so. More please!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 03:48 am
Title: Chapter 3

You must update this story and update soon!! LOVE. IT.

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 03:42 am
Title: Chapter 3

I am absolutely intrigued.  This is a great start.

 Reviewer: Shereads48 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 03:14 am
Title: Chapter 3

great chapter

 Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 01:23 am
Title: Chapter 3

okay, okay, more please. NOW! lol

 Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2011 12:20 am
Title: Chapter 3

Why did she run and didnt' tell him about the baby?  She has a lot of class because I proably slap the woman for what she said to evelyn. I hope he find her and she tell him the truth about the baby. thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2011 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Wow now undestand little bit why she freaking out. She knows her boss and he making sure she doesn't leave him agian wow talk about crazy lol. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 01 2011 11:50 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Love it.  Please come back soon.  Did she have the baby...I am assuming of course Senna never knew.  Oh, once he finds out trouble will definitely be on the horizon.  Can't wait.

 Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2011 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

So does Senna knows Evelyn? If so from where? I like it so far look for reading more. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 01 2011 11:47 pm
Title: Chapter 3

OMG! Thanks for making it longer. Now I can't wait for the next update. This is too good. Wow, so does Evelyn have a child? Mr. Senna is going to be pissed. In Evelyn's defense, she had already been thru a lot and having that heifer talk to her that way in the hotel did not help. A simple talk with Senna would have cleared up everything. But this is better. I don't mean to be greedy but please update soon.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2011 11:18 pm
Title: Chapter 2

love it

 Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2011 05:23 am
Title: Chapter 2

What's the back story between those two??? She's so determined NOT to be around Senna. I need more please!!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2011 04:51 am


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