They finally get to spend some time together. Nice update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: March 23 2011 06:07 pm
Great update, she is really serious about learning ASL even though he is a stranger to her. She must have felt some kind of connection to him.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2011 05:59 pm
they will meet again, wonderful beginning.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2011 05:53 pm
Liked that Patrick was sensitive enough to give Angela a choice. Really happy to see Angela wants it to work with Patrick. Greg is nice about it which makes him a good guy. Your story is coming along well.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 23 2011 04:55 pm
this seems like the start to a very sweet story. i like Angela and the fact that she's taking the time out to learn ASL. it's cute! and so's Patrick!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: March 22 2011 03:06 am
I like that Angela is putting forth an effort to learn for Patrick. Greg really seems like a good guy. Angela's friend Carmen sounds fun! Nice chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 20 2011 11:06 pm
Loving how this story is progressing. Yay!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2011 07:12 am
Love it! UPDATE SOON. :]
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 19 2011 06:45 am
Great story, Patrick is a cutie, and I can't wait to see how things progress between them!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 19 2011 03:22 am
Wait, I'm confused, it Angela going to be with Greg or Patrick? Coz three's a crowd! I'm really liking this story! Keep the updates coming!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 19 2011 02:23 am
I always found sign language beautiful! Interesting characters and story!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 19 2011 01:28 am
Great second chapter. I kinda got lost a bit when they were in the laundry room with regards to who was speaking...Patrick or Greg? Oh and what was Patrick's reaction to seeing her underwear? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Technically...both. Patrick was signing, but Greg was speaking. He was being Patrick's voice. He just interpreted what was being signed.
Date: March 19 2011 01:18 am
Me likey! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2011 03:23 am
You are off to great start. I am looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 18 2011 02:22 am
Great start, looking forward to more
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2011 02:12 am
this is awesome and different never read anything like please continue
Reviewer: NOONA Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2011 12:56 am
I like the idea of this! I've read one other book before with this type of theme and its something like 25 years old.
Nice.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2011 08:13 pm
Very cool!!! This story will be different from others that I have read and I am really looking forward to that. I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2011 06:31 pm
I like the start of your story! I'm very interested in reading more. Good job!!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2011 06:15 pm