Super update . Dreamin' of fishes... love it , so southern ( coming from a North Carolina girl ) .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 04:47 pm
LOL!! Aunt Mae is crazy!! That bit with her and Amber was too funny!
What's the story with Coop and Amber? Is he in love with her? He's been pushing hard for Simon to take care of things with her. Not that he shoudn't, but it just seems like Cooper has something more vested into it than that.
I do feel bad for Amber though. Even if you dont love the dude like you should, and I suspect she really doesn't, thats still not the best way to find something like that out.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 04:18 pm
lol wow, mae. i'm trying to understand amber, but i can't. she hasn't contacted her fiance in who knows how long so what has she been up to? i mean she can't be all that surprised. as for moli and and simon, i'm glad he finally told amber who he's actually in love with, but this should have occurred ages ago. loved the chapter, was full of drama. hopefully, now amber will bow out and go diddle whoever she's been with for these last few weeks and we can have some more confessions, by mae and cooper. i really want to know what cooper's secret is.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 03:38 pm
I was pretty sure that something is up with Amber and now I"m sure. She won't returned Simon's calls and now she shows up five minutes after he gets home. I can't wait for the party to continue.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 03:26 pm
Damnnnnnn this update was freaking spectacular whoo and what an hell of an cliff hanger please,please i am begging update sooon whoo i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 02:49 pm
well its about damn time it all came out!!!!! more please!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 01:05 pm
brilliant! glad Molli told Simon right away and that Simon told Amber the deal right away as well - Cooper needs to spill his beans. we all know something's up, lol! thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 12:15 pm
So what is the story between Amber and Cooper? Aunt Mae is a hawt mess called Amber everything but a child of God. What a way for Simon to return home not only to a fiance but a pregnant friend as well. Great story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2011 12:01 pm
Aw man, I don't know how you do it again, and again but you're a master of sexually tense relationships. Pitch perfect, cant wait to see how it will all roll out.
Symph
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2011 06:29 am
Oh my gosh!! This was an awesome update!! I really cannot wait for the next one. Please update soon! This is very creative and awesome writing.
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2011 09:03 am
I just discover this story. I love it. This is a fun read.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2011 12:43 am
Damn, damn, damn...
Talking about making a character believable. After all that sexing, then all that time waiting for Moliere to come back- Simon STILL hadn't broken up with Amber?! WTF!!! And yet, yeah, how realistic.
He is working a nerve...and now, 7 weeks?! Poor, poor Moliere. My heart breaks for her. This ain't good. But the story is delish!
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2011 05:04 pm
Oh, oh, troule in paradise...Simon is still engaged to be married and his wedding his close to the time that he is due back.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2011 04:21 pm
Come on! She is going to give up because he will be gone for 7 weeks. I like the chapter so I'm hoping things will get better.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2011 05:31 am
Simon, is such a dufus, why hasn't told Amber that it's over. I agree with Cooper he should call her on the phone and tell her that it's over and that he is in love with Mollie. SImon needs to prove to Molli that he is serious. Great update.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 18 2011 05:14 am
I like, I think am going to stop studying for a little while and enjoy your wonderful story. Good start.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 18 2011 03:33 am
Just read all seven chapters and they were awesome. Really liking this story. Cant wait to know Simon's seceret. I hope Aunt Mae isnt dying?? Awesome story telling look forward to more.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2011 01:24 am
Whats Cooper's deal? Is he doing Amber? And Moliere and Simon really need to get it together.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 11:46 pm
Sooooo, he couldn't take a quick flight down to where Amber was to tell her to her face that he's breaking up with her before heading to the Apple place???? Ohhhh mannnnn!!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 11:25 pm
Hey, IT
Finally caught up with this story and I'm really enjoying it. I love the dialogue between Cooper and Simon. Since Simon has Molli, can I have Coop?
Great job, lady!
Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 09:07 pm
Ok Moli should not allow 7 weeks to stop her from telling Sinon how much she obviously cared for him....she is too smart and mature fro that and Simon needs to let Amber go because I do believe she has probably le him go already since she is screwing his best friend!!
These two are so hawt together..intense and sexy...but they are already making the stupid mistakes most couples do..not saying and doing the things that should to ensure their relationship grows.
I really like this story sweetie..is not simplistic but just complicated enough to hold your interest and care what happens to Moli and Simon..I love aunt mae and even wondr about Cooper...I cannot wait for more ...excellent job sweetie!!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 08:50 pm
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh why'd you end it there!?!?!? i neeeeeed more. that was soooo good!
Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 08:25 pm
Simon beter call Amber during those 7 weeks!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 07:39 pm
Aw, go back Molli!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2011 07:22 pm