Reviews For To Last a Lifetime
Title: Pale White

Please please update soon... I love this story!!!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 07:08 am

Title: Pale White

Wow, I love how Simon is rerfering to Moliere as his wife!!  I love that he put the fear of God in Amber, Cooper is scared to death as well.  Just loved it.  Thank you for this update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 05:10 am

Title: Pale White

Sooooooooooo happy to see this back! I definitely think Simon needs to fix the mess between him and cooper because cooper wil never have the life he wants so no need to torture him more.

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 05:10 am

Title: Bad Medicine

This is an excellent story!

More is coming right?

Reviewer: blackpanthershay Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2012 12:08 am

Title: Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes!

lawd have mercy............

Reviewer: blackpanthershay Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2012 11:20 pm

Title: Bad Medicine

He's really in love with Moliere, too bad she's taken! So sad for him! He wouldn't treat her right anyway!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2012 06:07 pm

Title: The Cast

what is Amber's story? I want to know her motivation besides the 10 inches of course. she plays a major role in the characters' lives yet I feel I know nothing about her.

Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 12:14 pm

Title: Bad Medicine

Now I'm crying for Cooper. Dang, this loving someone you can never have thing always gets me! And Cooper's so torn!!! It's all just so bittersweet cause Molly's got Simon but Cooper doesn't have anyone! And his past's just horrid! Dang, your story just makes me feel so much!

Reviewer: shae Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 05:27 am

Title: Bad Medicine

I just LOVE the backstory.  I don't know what will happen to Cooper at the end of the day but he is someone who just wants to be loved. awe...

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 04:59 am

Title: Bad Medicine

My thoughts? Cooper is kinda f**ked up in the head!! I really cant wait for his story. Its gonna be a doozy!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 01:52 am

Title: Bad Medicine

amazing. you never really care too much for cooper except for pity, but seeing his story laid out like this is so sad. it just has you wishing that he finds someone just for him. it removes nearly all the pre existing opinions that he  was or is a bad guy, he truly just is misunderstood.

awsome, post again soon please, this is some really great work.

Reviewer: Leah Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2012 12:43 am

Title: Bad Medicine

Why is this story being retired? I love this story!  The characters are complex...very human. Will you continue this on another site? Are you thinking of publishing this?

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 11:01 pm

Title: Bad Medicine

What to do, What to do, Cooper?  It is really hard to love someone who is in love with someone else.  It is even harder when your best frined is involved. You have portrayed that very well in your writing and I have enjoyed reading your story. 

IT, keep up the great work and I will be looking for updates constantly.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 05:00 pm

Title: Bad Medicine

I read this last night and I have to admit, I am uncomfortable voicing anything about this chapter. Reason: I am completely fascinated by Cooper and yet, a big part of me (the part that has known and pathetically loved the Coopers of my past) knows that boy is just trouble. He's damaged goods and wrecks opportunities given his way b/c he doesn't know how to man up. So, to clarify, I feel uncomfortable b/c I've been burned by Coopers before...wishing and wanting to slap and hug them, as another reviewer articulated.

I don't *want* to be interested in him. But the fact is, I am. At least, your tale is a safe space to watch and learn all there is about Cooper.

You write damaged people very well. I wonder if he will get forgiveness and salvation.

I won't bother to ask if he deserves it. That would push me back emotionally 10 years.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 04:56 pm

Title: Bad Medicine

We talked offline last night but now I can leave a real review...

I am so captivated by Cooper. I love the frailty of his character. Yes he's frail, even if he puts up the tough guy facade. He does envy and love Simon in the same right. He feels the man is handed any and everything he wants without a fight and yet he has to battle for scraps. Coop is such a damaged individual and I can't wait until you explore him as a character. He's the kind of person you're drawn to because you want to right every wrong that's been done to him, but in the end the favoritism and love you give him only increases fissures in his psyche. I love this man. Love him.

And I'll say it again...in that flashback...Moliere's heart was with Simon...but another...naughtier piece of Mo was completely feeling and anticipating enjoying what Coop had to offer.

Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 04:25 pm

Title: Bad Medicine

Loves it! more, more, more please!

Reviewer: kaci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 09:35 am

Title: Bad Medicine

Cooper's the type of person you just wanna slap and hug all at the same time. It's sad to see him self-destructing and yet that little seed of empathy gives one hope for his character. I still think he's a slimy little git though. :)

Reviewer: Georgia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 06:22 am

Title: The Cast

Great update,looking forward to see what will happen with Coop and Simon friendship. Can't wait for the next update.

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Amber's character type is the catalyst; she's the ball of chaos that shakes things up for other characters. her backstory is actually not important, at least not to my Muse, but i find it interesting that she's piqued yours.

now you've got me thinking. LoL

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 05:54 am

Title: Bad Medicine

I feel so sorry for Coop and love him to death I so hope that he, Simon and Moliere can get pass this with their friendship intact and hopefully stronger.

We know that Coop has the ability to love just in his own way because it's a testimony with him and Simon and then with the torch he has carried this long for Mo.

He needs to step away from the witch we all love to hate Amber cause she means him no good and she is far from a substitue for him to get over Mo he needs his own love just for him that understands him thru and thru.

Great update hope to see another one sooner rather then later,

Happy writing,

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 05:49 am

Title: Bad Medicine

Ohhh and 10 rating as usual :)

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 05:08 am

Title: Bad Medicine

I have nothing productive to add. But just keep it coming cause this story is just so good.
Hopefully we can get a Cooper sequel. Sorry I know he's a shallow dumbass, but I'd like to see him continue to find his way after this story.



Author's Response:

oh, no, there's definitely going to be a Cooper sequel. there's much more to our beloved shallow dumbass, as we already can tell.

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 05:07 am

Title: Bad Medicine

Poor Cooper...find him his own girl!!!!  He needs not have to settle for Amber's skanky ass...obviously he has issues, but deep down he has some good in him and is redeemable.  Let someone else see this too.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 04:49 am

Title: Bad Medicine

ahem... Cooper's going to get his own story. *falls over in a dead faint*

ITmouse, you always bring it. I'm obsessed with Cooper. And his sexing Amber makes me want to throttle him. But I just can't bring myself to do it. It just shows how badly he needs some good and true loving and not just sex, but someone who cares about HIM as a person.

Well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 04:32 am

Title: Bad Medicine

I am not surprised that Cooper has been in love with Moliere.  What I am surprised about is why is he having sex with Amber.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 03:54 am

Title: Bad Medicine

Cooper’s character from the beginning was always – imo – the sophisticated, trash-talking fuck-up that you couldn’t help but love -because it was part of his charm ya know? The friendship between the two men was special, genuine, a bond that’s ever-lasting. Slowly Cooper’s childhood, his discretions, and bleeding heart begins to surface so surely one can’t help but feel sad for this man but now as his demons are prominently on display, that adoration has turned to disgust!  C’mon Coop! His slut-fiancée too?!!! Good grief man! He’s totally obsessed with everything Simon.  His self-loathing and envy has propelled him to destroy the one thing that is unconditional in his life:  Simon Ford.


The one redeeming aspect is that he didn’t take advantage of Molli’s vulnerable, drunken state yet sadly, and most regrettably, Cooper Denton has lost his appeal. (Great storytelling when the reader is so passionate about the characters isn’t it? J)


Hopefully Cooper won’t lay with that snake and is there to really set things straight.  As for Moliere and Simon, loved their scene – even though it was a snippet, it was still moving to see how much they love each other.


Thanks for the update IT!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 03:38 am



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