I must say Jeremy is mighty fine. And Bree needs some love. hmmmm
The phone conversation was cute.
Stacecy sounds pretty vacuous. But then she's still very young... I think Justin will continue to compare the two and Stacey will prolly come out on the short end of the stick, so to speack. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review... Jermemy is fine I agree and yes there might be somehting in the works for them two not sure yet they havent really said but who knows I let mycharacters speack to me and I write what they have to say... Glad you like the phone convo I liked it to it was one of those that left me sighing.... Somebody will stick it to the stick.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2011 07:07 am
Awesome love how you are developing the story, I like how you shared bree history. Looking forward to the next update. The longer the better. lol I love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you glad you like the development I was worried I wasnt doing a good job on that... Bree is the big reason for Jalena not wanting to have b/fs... I'm trying to make the chapters longer if they are short I wil post more than than one chapter. thanks again for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2011 05:21 am
Love it
Author's Response:
Yeah!!! thank you!!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2011 08:55 pm
You did really well! Justin and Jalena are going to be so cute together. Justin needs to break up with his girlfriend first.
Author's Response:
I love how everyone say's he needs to break up with his girlfriend first poor Stacey she gets no love..lol... without conflict where would we be.. There is loads of tension and temptation bewtween them... We will just have to see how they handle it.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I just love it! I'm still nervous about writting and I'm glac your enjoying this I hope to keep you entertain and happy too. :)
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2011 10:50 pm
I just hope that Justin make a choice of who he going to be with because you don't want to hurt any one of the girls. I hope him and Jalena be together because the make a great couple but he have to break it off with his girlfriend before they go there. I like the story and can't wait to see what happen next thank for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and rating... Loads of tension and temptaiton for them both well have to see what they do with it... :) I'm glad you think they make a good couple someone said they didnt get what he say in her. I hope I'm making that a lil clearer now of what they both see in each other...glad your enjoyoing it so far and cant wait to read your thoughts on the next chapter.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2011 08:59 pm
So glad you are back with an update. I loved it. Love how you are developing the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I'm gald you looked forward to more that makes my day.. thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2011 01:33 am
Great chapter - the kiss was hot. I hope Justin breaks up with Stacy before he tries anything else with Jalena though.
Author's Response:
Thankyou I was hopping to make it hot enough but not too too hot glad you liked it.. There is a lot of tension between them too will just have to see how they handle it.. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and 5 stars at that yeah!!!
Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2011 11:40 pm
That waas sweet, I have not like Stacey since this story first began. They are in high school and much too young to know what the forever kind of love is. I do want him to give his feeling Jalena a chance to grow. Justin and Jalena that is so cute!! Get rid of Stacey please she is not good enough for Justin!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! well we will just have to see what happens huh? Stacey is something speacial..lol ;) the tension, temptaion is strong between these too J J that is... Nobody and I mean nobody understands love well except God... but I believe that in all kinds of ways it could happen to people weather they are young or old.... they both have their thoughts of what love is but are not ready to yet... they will take their time I promise you....
thanks so much for reading and reviwing again. next chapter will be up tonight!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2011 10:55 pm
Yes, he kissed Jalena!! Wonderful!!!
Author's Response:
Oh yes! he did.. glad that made you happy!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2011 10:46 pm
I like the cast pictures. Jalena and Justin. Cute. JJ.
So, Jalena is the new girl in school. Justin is a lucky girl to have met her first.
Author's Response:
Thanks Arch for reviewing Those two names just stuck with me...
Reviewer: Arch Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 23 2011 04:29 am
I really love wherenthis story seems to be going. Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you glad you like it thank you so much for reviewing and I will do my best this is my very first attempt at writting... I still get nervous after ever chapter I post..
Reviewer: K.b Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2011 05:12 am
Good for Justin. Now she knows how he feels. I hope she likes him back. Good chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Oh yes she is definitely feeling Justin
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 06:19 pm
I feel the heat....this really great story
Author's Response:
oh yes it's heating up thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 05:30 pm
Please do not keep us waitong to long...
Author's Response:
I promise I won't I try to put one or two chapters every week I wish like heck I could do more didnt realize how much time writing a story takes.. lol
thanks for your comment! :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 05:10 pm
Umm its heating up!! I like this story and I know I may have said this already but getting a glimpse of both of the main characters pov's is always a good thing. I hope to see another update soon!!
Author's Response:
GLad you like I wasn't sure if I would do a good lob with doing both pov's I''m so happy you like it.. thanks for reading and reviewing
Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 03:30 pm
So, OK, there was a lot going on this chapter. I really don't like that Justin cheated on his girlfriend so soon. I mean, I had a feeling it was going to happen, but so soon? That was not a good look, he doesn't exactly look like a five-star dude now, does he? He just looks like a cheater.
I really didn’t know this guy but I trusted him. It was just a knowing feeling I had, that he wouldn’t hurt me or put me in danger. I am almost absolutely sure that Ted Bundy's victims didn't think he would hurt them either, right before he snatched and killed them. Justin has been leering at her all day, a bit like a stalker (a creepy little weird-o) and Jalena trusts him? I do not understand this, it makes no sense at all.
™Peace.
Author's Response:
WOW! Uh, thanks for the review, I think...
Not really sure if this is a story for you to continue reading, its just a bit of fluff, humor and romance with the obvious clichés.
Jalena has been leering at Justin just as much as he has her, it's going both way's here.
For one I'm not going have her murdered I think I would have put that in the warning section, no "Ted Bundy" story here!
Anyway thanks again for reviewing... Peace
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 06:58 am
Me likey, I am glad that he kissed Jalena. I can't stand Stacie, she is a *itch!!! I love the other characters they are absolutely hilarious.
Author's Response:
LOL yeah Stacey is a what you said.. hehe but she is good at hiding it from Justin... the crew of characters are a fun bunch. All the things they say have me cracking up laughing when I write it. I'm so glad you like the story thank you for your review...
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 06:07 am
Hi Meme,
Well what can I say, I don't usually enjoy stories that take place in the high school setting, and that's just because I am so far removed from it, however I am finding your story entertaining and I am especially enjoying it the perspective of each of the characters. So do we have a Justin so bold as to kiss Ms. Jalena on the first day of meeting her or is this his imagination of what he would like to do? Looking forward to your next posting.
A
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you took the time to read my story and that you enjoyed it I myself am in my 30's, obvioulsy been along time since Highschool for me as well but these pass few years I've come to love young adult romance it just takes me back to first love and flirting hanging out with crazy friends. So this story just has been floating in my head for a while and I just had to get it out.
Yes he really did kiss her the tension between them two is crazy! thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 02:18 am
Ok girl. You have definitely caught my attention. I'm loving your story and I enjoy both of their povs. I like knowing what's going on in the minds of both lead characters instead of just one of them. Keep it coming. I getting hooked! ;)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy I snagged your attention :) and glad your liking both povs it's a challenge but it's a fun challenge I always want to know what the men are thinking in romance books that I read.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. can't wait see what you think on the next update.
Reviewer: Shea Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 01:38 am
oooooooooooooooo he kiss her lol. When he ask if she want a ride I was so thinking of something dirty lol. They just need to be together because it going to be very hard for them to be friends lol. like the story and thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
LOL dirty thoughts are welcome. ;) yeah there will be loads of tension between the two thank you for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 01:34 am
Justin that boy cant help himself kissing my girl Jay. I wonder what is going through her mind. Its crazy he definitely isnt thinking of Stacey. If they start out like this will Jay be able to trust him if he gets rid of Stacey? I dont think Stacey would take a break up very well I think she will have some fatal attractions tendencies. great update looking for the next one.
Author's Response:
No Stacey will not take kindly to a break up and she will fight tooth and nail to keep her man Justin is a good guy he's got some challenges coming up. Jalena too. ;)
Thanks for reviewing and reading I really love hearing from readers... untill the next update hope to hear from you again. :)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2011 12:58 am
I was so excited to see 2 chapter updates. I love this story. I like how you give the povs. It just sucks that he is involved with stacey. Jalena isnt trying to feel him either but he is fine as hell. jalena is trying to ignore her feelings especially since she just meant the guy. Ok off to read the next update. Great job.
Author's Response:
Yeah glad you like the two povs those two chapters needed to be back to back couldnt make you guys wait that long to see what happens Justin is just so gorgeous I stare at the character pic of him all day! cant wait till I am #4 to come out i will watch it over and over again;)
Jalena is fighting this felling for him they both are going to be fighting these feelings for each other
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: May 16 2011 12:52 am
love it :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing Sooo glad you love it!!!! :)
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2011 06:09 am
Loved it!! Jalena sure rocked the try outs!!
Author's Response:
She sure did that girls gots skills.... :)
Glad your loving it thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2011 03:14 am
i like totally like think this story is righteous forsure lol sorry i could not resist lol but i am loving this story please update soon i want to know whats up with Justin
Author's Response:
LOL! glad your like tottally in to it.. :) what is up with Justin hmm will have to see in chapter 8,9 wont we? ;)
Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: May 10 2011 07:24 pm