Nice long updt sweetie....BTW what does Mon_san mean..?? Why the blank space?
Ok I love Shouda so innocent and sweet..but wants to kow why his dad just left his mom..that is right young man..mom comes first ..rotfl!!
I actually like Yuki's interactions with Shouda and his respect of what Sara has done and her as the primary parent...and his recognition his mom is a pig..too bad it took him so long to come to that reality!!
However I was kinda mad at Yuki for kissing Sara...he disrespected her and his wife..both ladies I like very much with very good hearts!! Men!!!
Love love love Sara and she does deserve some happienss..she had a hrd time by herself pregnant and heart broken..now that Yuki is spending time getting to know his son it is time for her to find some love for her life and that gorgeous Indian man might be the answer.
I love the international vibe in this story sweeetie...you are doing an exceptional job..excellent!!
Author's Response:
Hey there! Sorry I explained in one of my other stories. I often use this method when the character is unimportant. I put the first letter of a name than the the space. It means they aren't important. (ex. M___ ) I don't want you to waste the space trying to remember or imagine anything for them. He's like an extra that gets a little more camera time.
Yes I thought that a child in Shouda's situation would be curious about this, especially one that was open. Plus, he and Yuki already had a good relationship so I felt he would free to express himself.
Yuki, I don't know what to say. He is conflicted.
International love is great! I think everyone should give it a try. Glad you like it!
Thanks nene. :)
Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: April 21 2011 03:00 am
OMG last night I had ramen noodles with salmon and greens, because of this chapter, it was soo delicious I think I gained a pound LOL
I love this lil boy it's nice to see a visual of him he's so adorable and I love the connection he has with this dad.
I'm not feelin Yuki, he hurt her so bad it was cruel even tho she may harbor feelings for him and he for her they still haven't address the elephant in the room. He also hurt his wife, it's quite complex. He is a coward and should have stood up to his mother and father I don't know how I feel about a reunion it's in your hands.
Okay I'm totally diggin Kamir he is definately a keeper she needs a fresh new start and if everything pans out maybe he could be the one.
I love that fact that hes Asian from India too Ha! OMG you are just to clever chica!
Great chapter Loving it!!
Author's Response:
I know I have said this before, but YOU TRIP ME UP!!!!!! You went out and got ramen. OMG I almost died laughing.
Yes there is a pretty big White elephant in the room, but for some reason, they won't talk about it. Adults can be complicated you know.
Yes, well, I feel in love with Shahid Khapoor watching Bollywood films. He makes me drool.
Thanks NiaZ!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 10:40 pm
Ahhh! A new man for Sara, perhaps??? I knew she couldn't be as calm and serene as she was acting. Yuki is still an ass!!!!! Great update.
Author's Response:
What can I say, you are too smart for me. Poorbre Yuki! Thank you!
Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 04:24 pm
I am glad that Sara ran from Yuki. He had a lot of nerve to kiss her. I love Shouda and how direct he is with his father wanting to know why he left his mother. Yeah for a new possible love interest for Sara...I think Kamir might be what the doctor for her lonely heart. Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response:
Didn't he? I wonder what he was thinking. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 01:17 pm
Loved the update. Hmm, looks like Kamir is making his move. Not sure what's going on with Yuki but he needs to figure out what he wants.
Author's Response:
EXACTLY!!! Very insightful of you.
Thanks!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 06:17 am
I don't think Yuki is going to like Sara going out with Kamir! Too bad, so sad!
Author's Response:
I think you are right. LOL! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 05:55 am
Ooooohhhhhhhhh! An Indian man, look at you going international with your men. They both Asian though -__-. I like it, make me love it next time.
Author's Response:
International Love! I love it. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed
[Report This]Date: April 20 2011 05:42 am
I think Kamir will be good for Sara. I am really excited and this new addition just added more longgevity and intrigue to the story
Author's Response:
Thank you! Kamir, we don't know much about him though. We'll see.
:)
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 05:02 am
okay, so i missed two updates! lol
i heart Shouda so much. he's too cute for words and such a smart kid. Sara and the Shinohara's raised him well. love Sara's parents (Darren's off-screen commentary was great) and i really like the relationship she has with them.
my heart bleeds for Kaoru. i'm kind of scared for her. she seems so sweet and so trapped.
Yuki . . . ::sigh:: just keeps fuckin' up! dang it, man! but, hey now, Kamir's fine as hell! but may be too nice. Sara's already comparing him to Yuki, which is a bad sign. i don't know who i want her with, but Sara's too smart to get into anything dumb. not that being with Yuki is an automatic no-no; she'd create some new rules for that ass and Yuki would be too happy to comply. eff his moms, btw. ugh.
great job, woman.
Author's Response:
No worries! You are all caught up now.
Shouda is a sweet kid. Darren Percy is fun to write, hope to have more from them soon. Poor Yuki, your expression match the general sentiment I think.
Yes, hands up for Shahid Khapoor.....fine!
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 03:30 am
yes please keep shouda away from yuki's mother. that woman could drive anyone to drink. i'm glad that sara is able to put her big girl panties on and make nice with yuki for shouda's sake but the vengeful part of me thinks yuki is getting over way too easy.
Author's Response:
He is getting over easy, but for how long?????
Thanks!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 03:17 am
Very nice Update. I can see how Sara is conflicted. She still cares for Yuki, but he mistreated her...abysmally. And Shouda or no Shouda, Yuki should answer for it. And I like this new guy, Kamir. I do not think HE will take Sara for granted. I would like to see more of him and Sara...but I am conflicted because I would love to see Yuki try to win Sara back. Yes, on his knees would be a good start. It looks like she still loves him.....
Looking forward to the next update.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thank you!
You are one of the few that have said they want the (Yuki and Sara) to get together. I wonder how people really feel. I think Sara has to figure out if she loves him or if she is in love with the memory of him. Two different things.
:)
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 02:16 am
Excellent, need another update. I am so greedy for this story. Yuki you are still a wimp and liar. Sara kick his ass softly. When you kick his ass softly leave no marks.
Author's Response:
Bain! If you are not signed up as a member, you need to. You leave more messages than anyone I know. If you are, sign up now.
Trip me up!
:)
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2011 01:20 am