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Title: Hachi (8)

Yuki's "family" is moving on without him. It's his own fault he was a coward and let his mother dictate his life. Now he sorry. Too late, too sad bye-bye.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 09:36 pm

Title: Hachi (8)

"So many things going on! Someone else needs to write this, I'm too excited to type!"

LMAO! 

Yep can't wait to see how your brain and fingers work this out!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply... Thanks for reading and I hope you are still enjoying it! :]

Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 03:35 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Yuki had his chance...now hopefully its to late for he and Sara...she deserves better. I hope its a showdown when Yuki and Sara's parents meet.

Reviewer: Chey2Four Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 13 2011 04:04 am

Title: Hachi (8)

About damn time! let the competitions begins!

Reviewer: reyshi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 10 2011 06:54 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Oh lord! This is gettin juicy. Yes, yes, yes! Stew in jealousy Yuki! Look at what you missed out. And kamir is freaking sexy! If sara doesnt take him I will! And I am loving that karou is getting her groove back, I am happy for her. And I can wait until the grandparents meet, lets get ready to rumble!

Reviewer: sabrina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 10 2011 01:24 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I like this chapter. Yuki is seeing what he is missing and feels some shame. I am not a big fan of Kaoru and Yuki, just becasue I feel like that they are more friends then husband and wife. Even though they are both trying to put the effort into the marriage. I know alot of the reviewers want Kamir and Sara togather I just can't help feel that would just be to easy. I know he made a mistake and was a complete jerk, still I have to look at it from his point of view. In Japan honor and family are very important, you are trained from a young age to always up hold these traditions. What he did was wrong, but still life is about learning, and he is now learning to become more of man then what is expected of him.

Reviewer: Angela Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 09:13 pm

Title: Hachi (8)

I love this story!!!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 07:14 pm

Title: Hachi (8)

Hey can you put up pics of Ward and Kamir please? And the story is really good keep it coming.

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 01:22 pm

Title: Hachi (8)

I like Darren Percy. Alot. It is good that they came. It is good for Yuki to understand truly what mistake he made.

That was harsh and unfair, but I am usually on the heroine's side, hands down and this time is no exception. Though the jealousy that he admits to himself at the end is quite interesting. When I think of Sara doing it all by herself it is, not fair that he feel this way, but - in my book anyway- a little just.

Reviewer: acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 08:48 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I like Darren Percy, even thought the whole name thing confuse me. I really like Kamir and hope Yuki doesn't do anything stupid. Kaoru is getting her indepence on that is what she doing. I look forward to when the grandparents meet up.

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 08:00 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Thanks for a great update.  For some reason I thought that Yuki could speak more English.  I forgot that Sara is very fluent in Japanese.

SHoulda is to funny guilt triping his grandparents in  staying with his other grandparents.

I like Darren Percy.  They seem to be real down to earth folks. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 07:58 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I love Percy and Darren, they will not give Yuki a inch. Yuki did you think it was going to be smooth sailing for you.Sara parents will be civil not for your sake, I realized while reading these chapters Sara is one who always made life easy for Yuki especially in the beginning of there relationship. I truly believe that Yuki never respect and understood Sara, now he realized that Kamir is going to have Sara love and respect. Excellent.......

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 06:01 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Interesting update. Three is definitely a crowd and Sara may have to move on with Kamir if its ment to be.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 05:59 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Sorry haven't commented on previous chapters. I wanted Sara to have something fresh & new (Kamir), but now I fell so bad for Yuki. Shouda asking for a sibling! Whew! So, I guess you can put them back together... LOL!!

Darren Percy are too much; like them being successful in business, oh their response to Kamir; too funny!!

What was that thing with Kaoru and Kamir in a previous chapter, her being all bashful? Are we switching partners? LOL!!

Anyway, of course I am enjoying this story another great chapter!!! Thanks!!!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 05:14 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I love he Sara is working my nerve, I know that Yuki offered but I would have declined.  Yuki is man that left her because she wasn't good enough to marry and you have a raised your by yourself, now why would she think her parents would want anything to do with him.  Love Darren Percy, they are cool parents!!  Yuki is jealous of Kamir, what a punk.  Yuki has a lot to make up for, and Darren Percy ain't feeling him.  Loved this chapter!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 04:59 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Well, well, well.  The green-eye monster has struk Yuki like a baseball at 95 mph!  And Kamir did a little rubbing in!  Very interesting dynamic.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 04:57 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Ok I feel sorry for Yuki..I love all of them together..I am like Shouda sadly..I want them to be a family!

I love Karou but Yuki does not and she does not love him...Karou is coming into her own and Ithink she will be just fine!!

Kamir is fine, fun and all that but he does have Sara's heart..I think Yuki still does and btw he is ubber fine and just as rich but just married..yikes!! lol

I don;t know I really disliked Yuki at first but now I kinda really want him (now that he has grown some balls) and Sarah to try again...

anyway I love Darren Percy..I love that two people sahe one name that is so cute and sweet...Darren is my favorite ..though Percy reminds me of me..lol.

They are just perfect..a little disrespectful of the culture but especially Yuki but that is to be expected when he broke their baby's heart..

I cannot wait for the grandparents to meet..I think the grandpas will be just fine but the grandmas that is another story altogther.

Shouda is in kid heaven..I am so happy eh is happy!! BTW sweetie what does his name mean??

Great job..loving this story!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 02:47 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Love Kamir, he sure did that maneuver with style, lol. I'm really liking him. I'm wondering at Yuki though. He's spending so much time with Sara, how is he really working through things with Karou? Seems like he's putting more effort in with Sara. As for Darren Percy...LOVE THEM!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 02:38 am

Title: Hachi (8)

Well, Shouda wants his family together.  Not Karou or Kamir.  Maybe as friends of the family.

I think Yuki feels that he still loves Sara and doesn't like this man walking away with sara family.  He isn't happy.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 02:27 am

Title: Hachi (8)

shoulda is havin a ball, kimir is taking over, Yuri feelin left out Sara feelin kinda uncertain, then the meeting of the parents let the fun begin

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 02:27 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I feel sorry for Yuki but as we say in America, 'he made his bed and now he has to lie in it'. LOL  Kamir is wedging his foot in alright and he's shoving it in Yuki's face.  I love Darren Percy and can't wait until they meet the in-laws.

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 02:12 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I love Darren Percy!

Reviewer: LilBluestar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 01:56 am



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