Reviews For Bright Ōsaka Star
Title: Kyu (9)

Even Yuki did what he did and has know moved on, I still want Sara and him to be together. I feel that even Kamir's kindness maybe taken for something else by Kaoru, I feel that either he or she may make a move but it wont be rejected my the other and that will cause problems. Can't wait!!!!



Author's Response:

You're spychic I think. Sorry for taking so long to reply. Thank you! :]

Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2011 08:54 am

Title: Kyu (9)

I love this story!!

Darren Percy's visit couldn't have come at a better time.

I appreciate Yuki and Sara working things out for Shouda's sake; but Yuki made his coward's bed, now he must lie in it.   

Trdition or custom or whatever, Yuki's parents, especially his mother, irritate me to no end. I'm with Darren Percy. Why be so accommodating to them?

Kamir is charming but a bit too pushy. He hasn't yet earned the right to be markng terrtory. Sara is vulnerable and needs to keep focused not get caught up in an emotonal tug of war between two men.

I do like the growing friendship between Kaoru and Sara. There is no rational reason for them to be enemies. More women should realize and act like adults where men get them involved in crazy shit.

Kaoru was an individual, a person before she married Yuki and got caught in his mother's toxic web. She s on the right path reclaiming herself.

I believe that we are overdue for an update. I'll be looking out for it... soon,  hope.



Author's Response:

Well, tell me how you really feel! :)

Great review. You are very right on many points. I think everyone hates Umezawa, but I kind of like her for some reason. That doesn't mean she isn't obnoxious though. You are very right, I am overdue for a update and this response as well.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2011 02:02 pm

Title: Kyu (9)

Go Kamir! Loving that guy and seeing Sara grow aka leaving the past and opening herself up again - it's a beautiful thing and i hope it continues with Kamir & Sara!

thanks for the update! been looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2011 11:02 am

Title: Kyu (9)

People are thinking that Kamir is there to stay, but Yuki and Kaoru is right. He will be going back to India, but they think Sara needs a man now. Sara don't need a man now she need to get over Yuki properly and Kamir is helping her. I think that Sara and Kamir is having fun and they both know it, I hope I'm right. Kamir is not going to fast, because they are both adults looking for fun and friendship not everlasting love. I enjoyed this chapter a little too much, I hope the comment is not too long.



Author's Response:

Not at all! I like your comments. Thank you. Yes, Kamir and Sara are definitely just kind of floating along. Wonder how long it will last. Sorry for the tardy reply.

Thanks.

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2011 03:25 am

Title: Kyu (9)

Yes, Kamir is and he is not serious .  Does Sara need that?  No she does not.  Yuki, must admit that he is jealous.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2011 02:42 am

Title: Kyu (9)

Great update! Poor Sara & Yuki. IMHO they were destined for each other and now...

It looks to me that Kaoru is thinking she has other options in men and that this new liberation of starting her own business may oper her up to other things...

Wondering if Kaoru said to Yuki; about the fact that she thinks Kamir is not good for Sara to gauge Yuki response?



Author's Response:

So I'm just catching up on some overdueness hear. Thanks for sticking with me! :]

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2011 12:47 am

Title: Kyu (9)

Darren/Percy are hysterical...I love the questioning and anwering doubleteaming..they are too much!! But it is obvious they love their children very much and that Kamir and Yuki better come right or have heck to pay!!

Kamir is too much for me..,,He seems to be into games...I don't like that..though I agree that the Yuki is to stuffy ..afraid to go after what he truely deires..

It is pretty obviois Karou is eyeing other men and it is just a matter of time before their farce of a marriage is over,,,I want so badly for Yuki and Sarah to get back together...they are suppose to be a family..now yuki needs to get on his knees and beg to have Sara back'''

 

This story gets better and bettter..I love!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 10:11 pm

Title: Kyu (9)

I still like Yuki, just something about Kamir that turns me off.....we will see



Author's Response:

I'm catching up on missed reviews. Thanks for taking a read and hope you are still enjoying the story. I think you may not have been too far from the truth.

:)

Reviewer: elleon sivad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 04:07 pm

Title: Kyu (9)

....He is but hey Sara needs to move on and he is giving her the push...

Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 03:48 pm

Title: Kyu (9)

i like kamir, i say bring it on, but only if he is serious and willing to stay in japan for sara and souda. if not, then he can at least be some fun for sara. i still think yuki is all up in sara's business and not really making an effort in his marriage but if you plan for yuki to be with sara, i guess that would be the way of things. loved percy's "up pops the muslim". LOL. i can't wait for this meeting to occur. there should be fireworks, no?

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 03:11 pm

Title: Kyu (9)

This story is off the hook. I have mixed feelings. I like Yuki, but he did my girl Sarah dirt. And I like the new guy too. Hope Sara makes the right choice for her. Love this story.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 03:09 pm

Title: Kyu (9)

Thanks for a great update.  What game is Kamir playing he is kissing Sarah but then making eyes with Karou.  Is Karou attracted to Kamir?

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 11:44 am

Title: Kyu (9)

Great update but wonder what Kamir was up to . Was he deliberately antagonizing Yuki???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 08:22 am

Title: Kyu (9)

Finally Sara is getting the attention she deserve, I wonder if Kamir is serious. I think Kaoru is sweet on Kamir. Need another update loving this story.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 06:13 am

Title: Kyu (9)

I'm glad that Sara has been given something to think about in terms of her feelings, past and present regarding Yuki. I don't know how I feel about Kamir, except I hope he doesn't see Sara as something to do while he's in Japan; that would really devastate her!

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 06:12 am

Title: Kyu (9)

Kamir is pushing Yuki's buttons on purpose,  I realize that Yuki has been married to Karou for eight years, but he doesn not love her.  Why would you stay with a man who doesn't love you?  More please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2011 05:49 am



Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.