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Title: Jyuu ni (12)

I knew it! Dirty as Kamir and sly sneaky Kaoru!! I dont like them two, but they deserve each other!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 12:48 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Now how did I know that was going to happening.

All that time I kept chanting don't do it Sara...don't you do it girl...he a playa....something is off about him...then with Mr. Shinohara who hardly ever talks or says a word is out in front of his door and then whole a long drawn out convo with Kamir. Something just didn't seem right in the water.

Wouldn't it be something if Kauro got pregnant by Kamir that all it really was is that her body was allergic to Yuki's sperm are it just wasn't meant to be anyway I have heard that some women have been allergic to their partner's sperm or that her body can kill the sperm before it meets the egg because it's just not compatible.  Hey! Don't judge me I'm just saying....LOL!

I'm glad that Sara and Yuki did not sleep together. and I hope Kaoru sings like a little mocking bird....since her and Yuki has gotten so "close".

Great update....I'm so excited

Happy writings

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 04:08 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

oh dammit, Kamir! what have you done?! first of all know this is not a flame because i looove this story ;) but this update made me sad since i'm a Kamir fan *blush* in my HEA Kamir would go back to India only to realize his mistake and come back for Sara - but that's not going to happen, lol!

i felt the attraction between Kamir and Kaoru before and thought they would only kiss, maybe grobe each other - not go all the way, lol! there's no way Kamir can redeem himself from this and i fear his reaction when he hears Sara spent the night at Yuki's...

GREAT update! looking forward seeing where this goes  - take care & happy new year!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Cassius! I think he's just being a man...right?

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2012 11:03 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Why would she do that to him? thats so not cool and Kamir is gonna get his they are so wrong...SMH



Author's Response:

True, but don't you think their situation is such that this is not as bad as is seems?

Thanks!

Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 03:59 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

What a turn of events but I am not surprised that Kaoru would have sex with Kamir.  She seemed to be awfully attracted to him but also she seems to want what Sarau has.  I also wonder about Kamir.  What is his deal?  Is he there to cause harm to Sara in some way?  Just some of things that he said about gettins Sara to trust him just made me wonder what his motives really are. Thanks for a great update.  Happy New Year!!!



Author's Response:

It does seem that she wants what Sara has and maybe that transended into the same man? Who knows, that would be pretty deep if true. I don't think he wants to harm Sara, but perhaps Kaoru was right from the begining, he just isn't that serious.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 02:40 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Kamir and Karou...I can't say that I'm surprised by this. He's out for a good time while away on business and she's trying to assert her independence and maybe add a little payback into the mix. At this point, Karou just needs to tell Yuki she wants out of the marriage instead of playing the martyr.

And Yuki, you need to come clean with your wife and let her know that you want out of the marriage too. At this point, your obligation as the dutiful son is finished. I think you'll be able to stand on your own two feet without your parents' support...

Great story and keep the suprises coming.

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 03:56 pm

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

So loving it. I kind of hoped Kamir and Kaoru would act upon it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 07:36 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Oh snap!! Wonder what's going to go down after this. I love this story please try and update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry its taking me so long lately. I will not launch into excuses. I just updated though.

:)

Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 11:54 pm

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Well to be honest I love this story and am so mad at the next chapter not bing there



Author's Response:

Ehem....I'm sorry. There is a chapter there now? Please forgive me. thanks! :}

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 08:16 pm

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

I knew something like this would happen between Kaoru and Kamir after she accepted his invitation for drinks.  He was mad at Sara for killing the mood of their date and mad at Yuki because of the whole situation between Sara, Yuki and Shouda.  Mr. Shinohara was right not to trust him around Sara.  Kaoru is unhappy in her marriage.  So with two unhappy and frustrated people, and a lot of liquor them, sleeping together was bound to happen.  I wonder what will happen next.  Will they come clean or will they hide it?  I hope they come clean, but Kamir is shady and Kaoru seems "wishy washy" to me so  they'd probably try to hide it.  I wonder what Sara and Yuki would think about this when it all comes out...great chapter, Happy New Year!!!!   



Author's Response:

Honestly, your response is what I was hoping for. Not necessarily to surprise the readers but for things to fall into place in such a way that you guys were like "I knew it!" To find out what happens next, take a look at the update.

Thanks!

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 05:53 pm

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Well,

I'm surprised at Karou and then again I"m not.  I'm wondering if she will tell Yuki or will he have to find out. 

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 04:01 pm

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Well that was unexpected yet not entirely surprising.  I knew Kaoru was eventually going to let loose but Kamir was the unexpected part.  I don't know how Yuki is going to work up to deserve Sara because right now he's still pretty gutless.

Thanks for the update



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! :}

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 03:01 pm

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

I always had a feeling that Sara shouldn't be with Kamir. He isn't a typical male lead that can provide her with long term happiness. He would have to return home, and I felt as if he just lusted after the idea being with Sara and not really understand her fully. I'm curious to see where the story will head from this point.



Author's Response:

Hopefully it will not be too predictable. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: tmrwslove Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 11:29 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Well, I thought there was some attraction between Kamir and Karou.

Sara and Yuki have a connection that needs to be played out.  Those two have a great deal to resolve.

Great update.

Now where do we go from here.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 09:18 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

I can't believe Kamir and Kaoru slept together!!! Wooooow this chapter was great!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 08:12 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

I knew Kaoru was attracted to Kamir and I think Kamir wanted to get back at Yuki somehow because of Sara.

Now that Kaoru wants independance, let her and Yuki divorce, so Shouda can have his family.

Very good chapter, yup can't wait for the next.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think I kind of set that up pretty heavily (Kaoru and Kamir), as to what happens next. Who knows. Maybe he will get his stuff together or maybe he will totally screw things up. Or maybe reality will just hit everyone involved.

Thanks for your comments! :)

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 05:32 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Ok needless to say I was KNEW when Karou accepted Kamir's request for drinks ..something was gonna happen...I just did not think it would be sex so quickly..and no shame at all by Karou..matter of fact no shame by Karou...she is even spending the night!! I am shocked..

I pictured Karou as sweet and innocent but hardly..momma is hawt sister..lol..wow

I new Kamir was not right for Sara I am more than sure now..he just wanted some tail...anybody's apparently...married or not..pig!

I knew Sara would not sleep with Yuki...She has wayy too much self respect and respect for Karou plus I don't think she would want to risk the possible heartache.

Funny thing Yuki and Karou dont sleep together and he does not seem to be worried about her not being home either!!

Sweetie this updt was off the chain good and full of surprises!!! Excellent excellent excellent!!



Author's Response:

Thanks nene! It does seem that Kaoru has kind of done a 180, but I figure its to be expected. You know the old addage 'give em and inch, they'll take a mile?' I think this applies to Kaoru. She had an open and just flew with it. Not recommended but everyone has to find their own way. 

As to Kamir. I kind of think of him as a typical man. Its not that he is bad or good, the question is if he is good for Sara. We will see!

And of course Sara and Yuki would not sleep together, though Yuki scared me a bit there. Emotions and desires are powerful things I think. Who knows what would have transpired if Sara had been awake. But Yuki calmed down when he found her the same as always. At least that is what I was going for.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

:)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 05:08 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

I am glad that Kaoru and Kamir got together in this chapter.  Kaoru deserves some happiness.  I predict that she will become pregnant. I like the relationship b/w Yuki and Sara. It seems like it is developing slowly. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 03:45 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Lovely.



Author's Response:

Thanks Bain! :)

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 03:04 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Wow!!! Kamir and Kaoru, I always knew there was some connection between them and then the fact that Sara and Yuki stayed faithful even though they are really still in love with each other.



Author's Response:

Really glad you pointed this out. The contrast. It shows what love is. Of course, there are some extenuating circumstances here too.

Thanks!

Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 03:00 am

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

Wow, Karou you a ho!!!  You may not be in love with Yuki, but he has treated you with nothing but respect!!  That was bogus and I thought that he as feeling Sara, Kamir you are nothing but horndog!!!    It would be funny if Karou got pregnant after her night with Kamir.  I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Trip. Me. Up.

:}

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 02:54 am



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