Something about Karou is bothering me. I don't like hos she is pursuing Kamir. She is not even considering that Sara might have had feelings for Kamir. Sara has been very kind, understanding, and supportive of Karou. It's not something I would ever even contemplate with my friends. Excellent Jobs!!
Author's Response:
I hear you! However, I don't know what to say...... Thanks :)
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 27 2012 07:09 am
Oh Sara is so my hero. My articulate and poised hero. I'm so proud of the way she handled Kamir who is in fact a dog.At least he is aware of his shameless deeds.
Waiting for Yuki to speak his mind. Though I love his pleasant nature,I would like to see him pour out his emotions. Not necessarily in a dramatic fashion but something to make me exhale and say, "Finally Yuki."
Though Kaoru and I would have many disagreements in terms of morality,I like her self awareness. It's definitely stronger than Kamir's and so much more...mature.
Great chapter as always. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for this feedback. You express yourself very well! I'm keeping your wishes in mind, be assured. Um...and I think you owe me a couple chapters from your stories as well. I'm waiting!
Thanks :)
Reviewer: Ioneha Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 27 2012 03:45 am
Kamir is an idiot but a loveable one for Karou. She seems determined have him for the fun of it all.
Sara and Yuki are circling each other. What does Yuki expect Sara to do when he is a married man.
I love the grandparents. Yuke's father is a mess. But Darren/Percy was onto his scheme.
Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, Sara and Yuki are circling each other. Lack of communication is the root of all evil. Ha! A bit dramatic yes, but true.
:)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 01:05 pm
Love the update, please update soon. If you are asking if Sara was easy on Kamir the answer is yes.
She needs to be little hard on Yuki to bring out the man in him and fight for Sara
Confused at how to approach sara with is love and if he is man enough to be Sara's man
The mothers wiill plan to bring Sara and Yuki together with a little bit confusing
Reviewer: bredreaway Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 09:54 am
I think Sara behaved OK with the Kamir situation.
Kamir seems to be a bit of a manwhore. He made some bad decisions and tried to blame them on Yuki.
Yuki jumped to conclusions concerning Kamir and Sara. He should've asked her to clear it up.
The mothers are going to try and play matchmaker.
Reviewer: ttee72 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 06:26 am
First, great chapter. I am so happy you decided to continue this story. I do a happy dance everytime I see an update.
Now to your questions.
No Sara acted like a lady & thought like a man :-)
Kamir is a dog, he thinks he is all that and in the beginning he was.
Yuki thinks that he doesn't have a chance with Sara
Looks like the moms have a plan to get Yuki & Sara together
Author's Response:
I absolutely LOVE your response. Thank you for this. Its funny the way things come across to readers and what I learn about my own writing throught them. So many good comments. Thank you!
:)
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 03:26 am
I love it! No, I don't think Sara was too easy on Kamir. She's in a place in her life where she can't waste time on useless emotions; being upset with Kamir would be just that--a waste of time.
Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 03:18 am
I love when mothers conspire together to get their children together. It's also so amusing. I'm excited to see what Izumi and Percy will do!
Author's Response:
Me too! :)
Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 03:15 am
I am so sick of Kamir...I thought Karou was so funny when she asked him if he was having a tantrum...I LOL......he is like a child...and attacking uki was definitely not winning any prizes with Sarah.
I think Karou is using Kamir just as much as he is using her..I am ppretty sure soon as she gets her thrills over she will move on to something real...meantime I am not mad at her for getting her jollies..lol
I love Sarah and Yuki together but he is going to have to confidence and fight for his woman....he thinks she would let Kamir back in her life after all this ....why...he really does not know Sarah at all...but even if he feels that way he needs to fight for our girl....not sit back and let it happen!!
Ok the mothers are putting their heads together to get the kids together...I love it...watch out now...this is gonna be good!!!
I love this story sweetie...your writing is spot on...perfection!!!
Author's Response:
Poor Kamir, he's a man! What can he say? They are often silly creatures I think. Yuki has been down for a while now. Its no wonder his confidence in matters of the heart is pretty low. Here's hoping he gets it together. Thank you for your kind words!
:)
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2012 12:56 am
This chapter has not changed my opinion of Kamir, he is ho with no respect for Sara. Sure he apologized but was it sincere? I don't think that it was, he still wants a chance with Sara but he does realize that Sara does not love him. I am so happy that Karou is using Kamir for a good time and that she realizes that Kamir is not the man for Sara.
Kamir is definitely a dog, Yuki is a good man who allowed his parents to control him. Meeting and becoming a father is every sense of the word as helped him to develop a spine. Although he has not right to be upset with Sara, but he is coming to all of the wrong conclusions about Sara's and Kamir's relationship. Why hasn't he told Sara yet that he and Karou are divorcing? What in the hell is he waiting for?
I have a bad feeling about the mothers, it can't be good with both of their head together!! Yuki needs to talk to Sara fast before the mothers get involved and ruin any chance that Yuki has of winning back Sara's heart. He has quite a bit to overcome and could the assistance of his son. Great update!!!
Author's Response:
You are right on point on many things. Kamir, Kaoru, Yuki. It all seems to be tangled up right now. But I have to say that I like Kamir in all his arrogant, childish glory and I'm not quite sure why. So I guess that makes me like Kaoru.
:)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2012 08:45 pm