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Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

This story just keeps getting better and better.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.  I am almost caught up need more.  ;)

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 02:00 pm

Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

I wrote a really long review and it disappeared...aww well!!

I loved this chapter ...I love the parents plotting and what seems like kids are going to find their way back to each other.....Shouda gonna get his family after all I hope...and the right way too!! Love this story sweetie!



Author's Response:

I asked Jacci if it could be retrieved and she said no. I was very sad. I wanted to read it. Well, thanks for leaving another one for me anyway.

Seems everyone is plotting at one time or another, except Sara. Hmmmmmm

Thanks for the comments as usual.

:}

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 02:55 am

Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

I'm so glad things are turning out so well for everyone so far. Hopefully his birthday goes smoothly.



Author's Response:

So far so good! Yes. Thank you! :)

UPdated!!!

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2012 03:49 am

Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

So excited to see what will happen next!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! If you are still excited, check it out! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 03:26 am

Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

Thanks for a good update.  The shopping spree was fun.  I was LOL at the parents and their reactions to the gift for Shouda.  No matter how much the husbands try to outfox their wives they will ultimately fauil.  I am really surprised that Yuki's dad is so invested in his son being with Saraua.  Looking forward to reading what happen nexts.  Thanks



Author's Response:

You are very welcome. I liked the shopping scene too. You kind of get a glimps of the past and what could have been all along...at least that was what I was going for. As to Kenji, I think he knows whats right and what Yuki wants and that is Sara. He knows that part he played in the past and doesn't want to make the same mistake. Though he isn't very vocal about it.

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 01:44 am

Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

I havent' read this update as of yet, but, I know it wil be great.

I liked the fact that the two mothers are going to make a plan...whether for the good or gooder (of course not a word)  I am not sure.

I love Yuki father, he has a great deal of insight into things.  He is funny as well.



Author's Response:

Thanks! and Kenji is a trip. :)

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 12:11 am

Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

This was a great chapter.  I loved all the family interractions.  I like Kamir too, just not for Sara.  I'm looking forward to seeing how you bring Yuki and Sara together.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Writing family is fun I think. :)

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 07:19 pm

Title: Jyuu hachi (18)

It is really bothering me that Yuki has yet to tell Sara about his impending divorce. Yuki can't stake his claim on her heart until he does. Not to mention he needs to apologize for dumping like she meant nothing. Yuki has alot to make up for snd his parents should apoligize to him as well. They ruined so many lives! Love the Darren/Percy and Kenji. Yuki's momma is starting to grow on my like moss on a tree. Yuki open your heart to Sara and let her where she stands. Wonderful, just winderful!



Author's Response:

Alright then! I think Yuki is still getting it together. Men are simple creatures are then not? They are also rather slow. So Yuki fits that opinion, however, I think he has heard your pleas. Great comment about Izumi by the way. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2012 06:14 pm



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