Reviews For Bright Ōsaka Star
Title: Hachi (8)

shoulda is havin a ball, kimir is taking over, Yuri feelin left out Sara feelin kinda uncertain, then the meeting of the parents let the fun begin

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 02:27 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I feel sorry for Yuki but as we say in America, 'he made his bed and now he has to lie in it'. LOL  Kamir is wedging his foot in alright and he's shoving it in Yuki's face.  I love Darren Percy and can't wait until they meet the in-laws.

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 02:12 am

Title: Hachi (8)

I love Darren Percy!

Reviewer: LilBluestar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 01:56 am

Title: Sichi (7)

Don't give gold coins to cats. You are not a cat and I want to give you all the gold coins for this story. I really like Kamir, sidenote have he paid for any of these little outings yet?



Author's Response:

I think he paid for the first lunch and I'm pretty sure the second, definitely the third. However the Aquarium...everyone is keeping their mouth shut about that one.

:)

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 08:35 pm

Title: Sichi (7)

Loved the update. Glad all went well at the school. Can't wait for her parents to reach.

Author's Response:

They are here!!! :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 07:46 am

Title: Sichi (7)

Thanks for a great update.  I can't wait for the grandparents to meet.  Two formidable woman vying for the attention of their grandson.



Author's Response:

I was thinking, two formidable women vying for control. We'll have to see.

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 05:38 am

Title: Sichi (7)

thanks for the update...so is Kamir going to be Sara love intrest? any ho I loved it



Author's Response:

Well, it looks like she's going to give it a try. We'll have to see what happens. :)

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 04:10 am

Title: Sichi (7)

Karou checking out other men..hummm!!!

I actually like Yuki and Sara together with Shouda as a family ...but however that turns out I think I am ok with it becuase Karou is finding her own way anyway!!

I don't trust Yuki's mom..but I am so glad she got that director straight...but her inviting Darren/Percy to her home might be wayy more than she bargained for..but we will soon find out!!

I love Shouda ..such a man fro his mommy..Shouda Richards he says...love it!!

Great job sweetie..such a wonderful story!!



Author's Response:

Only two people mention Kaoru's wondering eye. I must have downplayed it too much. Yuki's mom and Sara's mom. A possible explosion! Thank you nene!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2011 02:55 am

Title: Sichi (7)

Excellent, I think Kamir is the choice for Sara.



Author's Response:

You are sticking by Kamir. Loyalty. :)

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2011 11:03 pm

Title: Sichi (7)

i like kamir and he's doing wonders for sara. i hope karou does improve on her self growth, it's a long time in coming. i don't know what's up wit yuki's mom, still don't trust her.



Author's Response:

Poor Yuki's mom, she gets no love. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2011 10:54 pm

Title: Sichi (7)

This is good, please tell that Karous and Kamir will fall for each othere allowing for Yuki and Sara to reunited.  I can't wait for the her parents to make an appearance.



Author's Response:

Kamir definitely caught Kaoru's eye, no? Thanks! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2011 10:14 pm

Title: Roku (6)

Nice, I don't know if Yuki is really trying to make it work with his, since he seem to always be thinking about Sara. Yeah the parents are coming I can't wait.



Author's Response:

I know right? But what do you think is going through Kaoru's mind? That is what I would like to know.

Thanks!

:)

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 01 2011 10:00 pm

Title: Roku (6)

Hold on Sara. Mama is on the way. Percy might have to stomp a knot in that she-devil's behind.

Sara, Sara, Sara. You need to explore other options when it comes to men.

I son't trust Yuki's mother. That turnabout seems contrived to get her what she wants; which is total control of Shouda.



Author's Response:

We shall see! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 01 2011 08:29 pm

Title: Roku (6)

Sweetie this story if possible, seems to get better and better.

I love Sara's parents and her brother. They love her a lot and it is clear right now she really needs it. Karoud is becoming quite a friend to Sara and both ladies need it. Yuki is standing up finally and becoming the man he should have been a long time ago in his family. Shouda is LOVE, he is the perfect son..what an excellent job his mom has done with raising him. But like Sara's parents I am worried about her too..everybody seems to getting what they want and growing at her expense. She is strong but even the strongest person needs someone to lean on sometimes...so I am glad her parents are coming..she needs their support and I hope she finds some to love and care for her.  Who knows what may happen betweeen Yuki and Karou but Sara should not have to wait and see...she is too special for that...she needs someone to be head over heels for her too...someone to love her!!

To think this was almost a one shot! You writing is exceptional sweetie! Your grasp of the culture and the way you make it come alive to us the readers with each word is extraordinary!! Even before the beautiful video..and it was beautiful...I could visualize this place and the thinsg they were living through so perfectly. I have never such an excellent first view of the Japanes culture, in all it's formality before but it is the richness and excellence of your writing that enable the reader to do just that .....

Great job sweetie...I cannot wait for more....here comes the parents..that will be quite interesting to say the least!!



Author's Response:

Yay for Yuki! He's getting props now, though very few. Your observations about Sara are very accurate, however I think things are in place for her to get the love and support she needs. I know, you comment about his almost being a one shot kind of blew me away too. Its been fun writing it.

Thank you for all your support!

:)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 10:48 pm

Title: Roku (6)

Well, I'm team Yuki and Sara if that counts for anything.  I like the way you are writing the story and ultimately I would like to see where you take it and how you develop the characters.  My preference though is for Sara and Yuki to find their way together, but I'm sure I'll enjoy whatever you write simply because you are a delightful writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you, and it does. And thank you for your vote of confidence. :)

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 06:45 am

Title: Roku (6)

Thanks for the great update.  Is Sara sad that Yuki and his wife are trying to make their marriage work when she is still in love with him?  I like his wife Karoi.  Yuki's mother is a trip.  I can't wait for both grandparents to meet because I am sure that Percy has something for Ms pushy.

Thanks for the pictures of Japan.  I was there with my daughter in June 2009.  We were there for a week. What a beautiful country.  I was very saddened by the earthquake and the Tsunami. We stayed in Tokyo at the New Otani Hotel. Here is the link:  http://www.newotani.co.jp/en/tokyo/ This was a beautiful hotel with a waterfall and Koi fish.  It also had a shrine.  We went on a lot of tours to various destinations in Japan like Nikko (I loved Nikko).  We also went to Disney Tokyo.  The most amazing thing about visiting Japan was how nice people were to us.  I loved their public transit system.  One day while sitting on a tour bus I saw this mass exit from the train, hundreds of people just appeared out of nowhere it seemed.  I have lots if pictures of my trip to Japan too.  I made a video of my trip at CVS on a CD. Anyway sorry to take up so much time reminiscing about Japan.  I just wanted to share that I have been there and that I am enjoying the story immensely.  Also there is a book out called Nihon Nights by Trisha Haddad and Monica Haddad, this is an IR book BW/AM. link to Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Nihon-Nights-Indigo-Trisha-Haddad/dp/1585713821/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1304137994&sr=1-1



Author's Response:

I believe that Sara is not sad that Yuki is trying to make things work with Kaoru, but that he didn't do the same with her. She really loved him, as I hope the flashbacks can attest. She is bitter about his lack of courage where she was concerned. Does she still love him? Well, I don't think she even knows the answer to that question.

As to your personal note. Thank you very much! It was wonderful. Thank you for the links, that hotel looks fabulous and the book looks interesting. I might have to look into getting it if I can. If you feel comfortable, I would love to see some of your pictures. I'm thinking of doing another video so if you have some where you and your daughter do not appear, please send them. I can incorporate them. Or if they are on flicker or something, I would love to see them. I'm always happy to meet people who have been as it is a very special place for me.

Also, I am so glad that you are enjoying the story!

PB

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 06:35 am

Title: Roku (6)

Definitely loved the update. Sad to see Sara having such a touch time adjusting to the situation. Hope everything works out in the end. Can't wait until Percy arrives...she needs some support.

Love your Japan video. Very nice!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I am happy to say that Darren Percy has arrived! :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 05:37 am

Title: Roku (6)

I just read this story and really, really enjoyed it.  I also loved your taste of Japan video.

Although Umezawa-san is a despicable person I love your interpretation of her.  Sara handed her her ass, and I loved that Yuki and his father backed Sara up.  As far as love matches, I'm Team Saki, they were/are in love.  Kaoru is finding herself thanks to Sara but does she really belong with Yuki?  Being that Japan is steeped in tradition, I'm pretty sure divorce is not a common as it is in the USA.  Kamir is a decent guy and would be a good friend or even a good man for Sara if she wasn't in love with Yuki.  Can't wait for the next update or to see Darren Percy arrive in Japan.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you for taking a gander at my story! I think you have just coined a phrase for me, hope I can remember it. "Team Saki." That is the question! Does she belong with Yuki, very insightful. I'm hoping to develop that more as we go. I like your review, please do so again.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 04:14 am

Title: Go (5)

Sara/Yuki, for me!  I hope Umezawa-san does something else so Sara can really go at her! She needs to be taken down a bit!  Yuki will have his work cut out for him with Kamir in the picture.



Author's Response:

Come now, we must seek peace. Let us not invent situations for violence. That was funny though.

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 03:30 am

Title: Roku (6)

I feel for Sara. she's trying to be so compliant with everything for her son's sake but she still has those feelings/dreams for a happy family btw shouda, yuki, and herself. I don't know which direction you will choose to go with the pairings but I honestly do believe that she should move forward with someone new instead of backward with yuki. he does need to make it up to her, but i think they can do that as friends. looking forward to seeing how yuki's mom and sara's mom get along.



Author's Response:

I appreciate your comments. Truthfully, I don't know either.... :))

Thank you!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 02:27 am

Title: Actors & Actresses

You know, I am not even mad at Yuki anymore, punk that he is! I just want Sara to be happy, but I don't see how Yuki can be a part of that, except as a supportive and loving father to his child.  She and Karou are becoming friends, too much water has gone under that bridge and the ship left port A LONG TIME AGO!  Eight years is a long time.  The best Yuki should hope for is respect and caring from the mother of his child.  Now with that being said....get ya freak on with Kamir and live HEA already!! LOL



Author's Response:

Well, you are the first one to tell me that! Gotta write this down....

Kamir is definitely trying to move things in the direction to which you have pointed.

Thank You!

Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 01:53 am

Title: Roku (6)

I just started reading this story and I love it.  I don't Yuki he is a punk who gave up on his love to marry for status.    I want a happy ending but he would have divorce Karou in order for that to happen.  Yuki won't do that because he has not spine!!



Author's Response:

I understand your feelings. People are capable of change though...thank goodness.

Thanks for taking a gander!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2011 12:09 am

Title: Roku (6)

Wonderful, Yuki you are still a punk bitch, Sara I wish happyness for you. Please do not let Yuki break your heart again. He is weak and he only pretending to be somethinng that he can never be. A measure of a man is when he defends the woman he love against racist and unlearn people.  I feel for Sara because I had a similar story accept no offspring. I kick that punk ass mentally. This story brought back that period in my life, Loving and living well is the best revenge because Sara you will find someone better. I know this is fiction but the emotions that Sara is feeling is real to me. Thank you



Author's Response:

Bain,

I was very touched by this review. There is no praise greater than when one(writer) can tap into real emotions and convey them sincerely and accurately to the reader. While I am very sorry you have suffered through a similar situation, I am equally gratified that at least I am transmitting the emotions accurately. Though a work of fiction in which the situation is glossed over and possibly even played around with some, I take very seriously your feelings and hope that I in no way minimize or make fun of them.

Thank you,

PB

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2011 10:44 pm

Title: Go (5)

ho.ly. shit.

showdown indeed. but long time coming.

so glad mom-dukes got told the hell about herself. rudeness. ugh.

and i'm starting to really like Kamir. (btw, you wrote Kumar in a few places; not sure how that fits in.)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the heads up, I'm going to fix that. It was a typo. :)

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2011 05:01 am

Title: San (3)

Girl, you had me tearing up!

Powerful stuff...to admit one's fears and insecurities, out loud, to a stranger, never mind someone you feel has the upperhand on you...very deep!



Author's Response:

Thank you! It is, especially since the culture does not express emotions by rule. :)

Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 05:51 am



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