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Title: Jyuu sichi (17)

I love when mothers conspire together to get their children together. It's also so amusing. I'm excited to see what Izumi and Percy will do!



Author's Response:

Me too! :)

Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 03:15 am

Title: Jyuu sichi (17)

I am so sick of Kamir...I thought Karou was so funny when she asked him if he was having a tantrum...I LOL......he is like a child...and attacking uki was definitely not winning any prizes with Sarah.

 

I think Karou is using Kamir just as much as he is using her..I am ppretty sure soon as she gets her thrills over she will move on to something real...meantime I am not mad at her for getting her jollies..lol

I love Sarah and Yuki together but he is going to have to confidence and fight for his woman....he thinks she would let Kamir back in her life after all this ....why...he really does not know Sarah at all...but even if he feels that way he needs to fight for our girl....not sit back and let it happen!!

Ok the mothers are putting their heads together to get the kids together...I love it...watch out now...this is gonna be good!!! 

I love this story sweetie...your writing is spot on...perfection!!!



Author's Response:

Poor Kamir, he's a man! What can he say? They are often silly creatures I think. Yuki has been down for a while now. Its no wonder his confidence in matters of the heart is pretty low. Here's hoping he gets it together. Thank you for your kind words!

:)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2012 12:56 am

Title: Jyuu sichi (17)

This chapter has not changed my opinion of Kamir, he is ho with no respect for Sara.  Sure he apologized but was it sincere?  I don't think that it was, he still wants a chance with Sara but he does realize that Sara does not love him.  I am so happy that Karou is using Kamir for a good time and that she realizes that Kamir is not the man for Sara. 

Kamir is definitely a dog, Yuki is a good man who allowed his parents to control him.  Meeting and becoming a father is every sense of the word as helped him to develop a spine.  Although he has not right to be upset with Sara, but he is coming to all of the wrong conclusions about Sara's and Kamir's relationship.  Why hasn't he told Sara yet that he and Karou are divorcing?  What in the hell is he waiting for?

I have a bad feeling about the mothers, it can't be good with both of their head together!!  Yuki needs to talk to  Sara fast before the mothers get involved and ruin any chance that Yuki has of winning back Sara's heart.  He has quite a bit to overcome and could the assistance of his son. Great update!!!



Author's Response:

You are right on point on many things. Kamir, Kaoru, Yuki. It all seems to be tangled up right now. But I have to say that I like Kamir in all his arrogant, childish glory and I'm not quite sure why. So I guess that makes me like Kaoru.

:)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2012 08:45 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

I hope you continue this.  I had fun reading it.  I too am a Daniel Henney fan.  It was hard for me to picture him in this story since I know he is Korean but then Rain is Korean but he play a hot Japanese man in Ninja Assassin. LOL!

Reviewer: KimG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 19 2012 05:08 am

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

I finally sorted out my browser issue to be able to post a review. Thanks for another great update. Yuki basically needs to bare his soul if he wants any chance with Sara after what he pulled.



Author's Response:

I agree with you on this. Just say it clearly and with conviction. That's what he needs to do. Thanks!

:)

Reviewer: Meg Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2012 02:32 am

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

I think tha Kamir and Kaoru should be together, but I also feel like thier relaitionship would be kind of casual. And as for sara and yuki, I think they should become more like friends trying to get to know each other.

Reviewer: nikol Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 05 2012 08:14 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

please, please UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON

iam dying for more

I have been re-reading the entire story and have some suggestions of Yuki should announce his feeling for Sara

1) DRAMATIC

Sara having had enough of heart break from both men decides she needs and break and wants to leave, after having a horrible arguement about the affair with kamire. But Yuki can not be apart from her again. In an attempt to wine her heart, he follows her to the airport and they profess their love for one another. Ending with a dramatic kiss.

2) REALISTIC

As Sara and Yuki spend more time in the park with their son an his friend, they both start seeing peices of a normal family again. The couple gradually start spending more time with each other and leads up to a kiss that niether one of them can stiop thinking about.... Yuki has had enough and tells her that he loves her still!!!!!!!!

As you can seee I have a pretty wild imagination about theses things, but it is only because I am really pasionate about the characters that you have potrayed.

 

UPDATE PLEASE

Reviewer: UPDATE Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 09:41 pm

Title: Actors & Actresses

Before I complete your most recent chapter, I just had to tell you how moving the scene with Sarah, Yuki and the other guy was! The emotions you described were so on point! And I hurt for Sarah, with her feeling like she's just a rich-man's emotional toy. 

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 12:10 am

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

1.  I want Kaoru with someone else. Kamir is an ass.

2. I think Yuki should just tell Sara.  Sara shouldn't just give in though. Yuki really abandoned her when she needed him the most. She needs time to see if she wants to start again.

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 01:44 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

so sad tyat little boy.

i think karou and kamir kinda should be together, who knows maybe she would just magically fall pregnant.

and yuki,  should ... i dont know, but i dont feel it would be a loud announcement, maybe his mother should tell her?



Author's Response:

A loud announcement definitely would not be Yuki's style. I agree. Thanks!

 

Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 01:37 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

So...Kamir is an A class idiot and I think he should suffer a little before him and Kaoru get together...but in the end I do think they should be together. And of course Yuki should announce his feelings, maybe with something grand or sweet involving Shouda.

But thats just the opinion of a hopeless romantic



Author's Response:

A Kamoru shipper? With a little pain on the side. I like it. Hopeless romantics are welcome. Thanks!

Reviewer: Simmmz Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 03:05 am

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

1. no they should not

2. first thing first he needs to get a divorce...maybe use that as a way to get together..be like I want you but not until I am truly free to love you the way you deserve not like our frist time but better.



Author's Response:

Noted and noted! Thanks!

Reviewer: jamminmaraca Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 02:05 am

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

i don't think that kaoru should end up together. How sara has helped her find her footing in life and become a confident woman. for them to end up together would smack of betrayal.

Reviewer: jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 12:19 am

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

Hell no, Kamir doesn't deserve to be with either women. He knew Kaoru was married even though she is unhappy. He slept with her while in somewhat of a relationship with Sara. He is only thinking about himself. Yuki should just give Kaoru a divorce and they both move on. Yuki is feeling at fault but he was trying to work things out with Kaoru. I think Yuki should wait till he is done with Kaoru before letting Sara know about his feelings. Sara doesn't need anything else to depress her.

Author's Response:

Very well put! Kamir is pretty selfish...you make him sound so bad. :) I am sure Yuki would not try anything with Sara until everything was done with Kaoru. That is, he could say to Sara it was over and it be so. He would know Sara would die before she would do anything against his marrage.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:49 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

I am glad Sarau found out the truth about Kamir..I really do not care for him and how dare him be jealous of Yuki!! 

I do not want Sarau mad at Karaou though..I want them to be friends...I think Karaou is a good person in a bad situation...everything about her marriage was just wrong and both her and yuki were unhappy! Karaou really respects and admires Saarau..they should be friends.

I think Karou is too good for Kamir..I think she should enjoy being single and working..she should find someone that chose her first..desired her first and foremost ..not as an after thought because they could not have Sarau like Kamir and Yuki.

Also..I think Sarau in her heart knows Yuki cares about her because she still cares about him. I just think however he admits his feelings it should be done as respectful and tasteful ,sweetly and lovingly sensitive as everything about there relationship has been so far!!

Excellent updt sweetie....I just cannot get enough of this wonderful wonderful story!

 



Author's Response:

I know right? Kamir has some nerve. It will be interesting to see how Kaoru and Sara interact now that Sara knows. Indeed. I think you are right about what Sara knows in her heart. I think its growing inside her little by little. In fact, I'd go so far as to say the only things suppressing it, is his marrage. xD And we all know whats up with that!

Thanks nene!

:}

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:44 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

1. Lovely story.

2. Kamir and Kaoru are friends with benefits.

3. Yuki is finally has a backbone and he needs to tell Sara that he respect and love her.

4. Wedding bells are in order.

Thank you for this outstanding writing and please update soon.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 11:05 pm

Title: Actors & Actresses

I think Yuki.....

typo...whoops

Reviewer: Lucky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 10:45 pm

Title: Actors & Actresses

I love this story.  I think you should publish it. Self-publishing is the way to go these days.   Anyways, I think that Kaoru and Kamir should be together.  Kaoru got the shaft.  She isn't an unlikable character, but I ended up hating her because she was a road block between Yuki and Sara.  She deserves some happiness too.  I Yuki needs to lay his cards on the table after ice cream (totally self-serving because I want them together like yesterday). While Shouda is off to bed, he should just bring it up.  LOL  

 

 


Reviewer: Lucky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 10:44 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

Oh. Shouda is such a nice kid. I feel sorry for Sara but she handled the revelation rather well. 

For Kamir to jump from one woman to the next,I am having second thoughts on him being with Kaoru. Yes,she cheated on her husband but two wrongs can't possibly make a right. 

As far as how Yuki should confess,the indirect approach is always fun. For Sara to overhear it or something like that would be interesting to watch. 

Reviewer: Ioneha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 10:43 pm

Title: Actors & Actresses

I meant that I was not a fan of Kamir!  Sorry for the mistake.  I love this story and I am so grateful for the regular updates!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 10:36 pm

Title: Jyuu roku (16)

I don't know how I feel about Kaoru and Kamir, Kamir only wanted to sex up Sara while Kaoru just wanted to feel something.  It would be great if Kaoru used Kamir for sex and he developed feelings and got hurt.  I am a fan of Kamir, but Kaoru deserves to find love.  She knew when they got engage Yuki didn't love her, hell she didn't love Yuki.  Her hurt and anger were her own and she choose to not to love.  Yuki just let his momma treat Kaoru any old way.  Becoming a father with the only woman that he ever loved iniated that his change.  It would be cool if Yuki told Shouda how he feels about his momma and that he wants another chance.  Then they could plot together on how to woo Sara!!! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 10:25 pm

Title: Jyuu go (15)

Thanks for a great update,  It is good to see  Izumi relaxed and let down her hair.  Having the other grand parents there has done a workld of good for  Izumi.  As for Percy & Darren, I just love them.  I love how supportive they are to each other.  I thought that it was interesting that Shouda knew that something was goig on between his two grand parents.  From the mouth s of babes...his words unlocked the mean spirit of  Izumi who could apologize to her son.  I ca understand why Yuki was surprised by his mothers actions. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2012 12:04 pm

Title: Jyuu go (15)

Loved the update; I really enjoy reading about these characters.

Sara has raised a wonderful child in Shoulda; he is kind thoughtful and loving...he is so much of his mother with bits of his father thrown in for good measure...

I think Yuki and Sara belong together; can't wait until they are a family as they should be...I know Yuki still has a lot of making-up to do, but he's well on his way; his love and care for Sara is so heart-warming...love how he saw to all her needs; even those she hadn't considered yet.  Can't wait until the divorce is final; I do like Karou; hope she doesn't end up with Kamir, as he is a selfish snake...

The confrontation of the grannies was priceless:)  So glad they are getting along better now!  Love the talk Yuki got to have with his mother; that was so long overdue...

Love this story and hope you update again soon.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 09:16 pm

Title: Jyuu go (15)

Hopefully they all start getting alonge

I really want to see Yuki and Sara become closer and more in love

I wonder when we are going to find out about the other two

UPDATE SOON Because i can't live without this story

I really love it

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON

Reviewer: tisha1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 08:05 pm

Title: Jyuu go (15)

This was nice.  I'm glad Mrs. Umezawa is starting to see the errors of her ways.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 09:04 am



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