Reviews For Bright Ōsaka Star
Title: Jyuu go (15)

Love this chapter very insightful....Great Job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 03:33 am

Title: Jyuu go (15)

I just love love love Shouda..he is perfection in a child..so sweet, kind and loving. He is what all parents want their children to be...funny I agree with Izumi..he is a lot like Yuki..alot..though Sarau through and through...he is teh best of them both!! Respectful , charming, smart and humble..lots from his dad...I really love Shouda.

 

I love how he put it out there though..he wants his parents together again and he wants brothers and sisters with them...but he is too sensitive to hurt Karou (his mother's side) to achieve his desires....I love that so much.

I am glad Izumi got to spendd this time with Shouda and that it made her realize some things about her own child...it was a beautiful revelation!

I love how it is all developing....I think everyone is going to come to the conclusion tha Yuki and Sarau need to be together...as it was always suppose to be...

Sweetie can weave a story like no other...the characters are so real...yiu acre about them, appreciate them and wish for their happiness!! 

They have dignity, love and copassion. No matter how bad some of them may have started off you want them to have HEA they all deserve...even Karou !!!  Excellent job sweetie.. 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 03:31 am

Title: Jyuu go (15)

that was beautiful

Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2012 12:36 am

Title: Jyuu go (15)

Excellent.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 11:31 pm

Title: Jyuu go (15)

I really enjoy this story.  It has taken a surprising turn with the Karou situation.  I did not think you would divorce them.  Thanks for sharing and I'm glad you were able to update 2 chapters in such a short time.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 10:37 pm

Title: Jyuu go (15)

Awesome, Shouda is the balm to melt the ice encased heart of his Mrs. U.  I am glad that talking with Shouda helped to realize the error of her ways and prompted an apology to Yuki.  I wonder will Yuki tell Shouda that he and Karou are getting a divorce.  Maybe Shouda and Yuki can conspire against Sara on wininning heart, although he never lost her heart or her love.  This story is so sweet!!  Yuki is so fine and I need Yuki (Daniel) in my life!!



Author's Response:

Indeed, indeed, children often are. They make us see things through their innocence. Yes, what Yuki will do with the information still remains to be seen. I wonder if Shouda could really grasp the meaning of his words if he told him. A conspiracy would be nice, yes.

But...step away fromt he Henney

|D

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2012 09:55 pm

Title: Jyuu yon (14)

Ah! What a great way to end a chapter! Bravo! Bravo!

Reviewer: Ioneha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2012 02:01 am

Title: Jyuu yon (14)

This was worth the long wait.  I love it..

Yuki is going after his woman...Yea!!!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 09:37 pm

Title: Jyuu yon (14)

I really love this story

Perhaps now we will be able to see romance bloosem between the two

UPDATE SOOOOOOOON

i realy wished that you updated sooner cuz i really love this story

I find that iam facinated with sara and yuki

Reviewer: tisha1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 08:11 pm

Title: Jyuu yon (14)

Thanks for a great update.  I am glad that Yuki could help Saroua get the paper that she paid for. To bad Yuki's father didn't leave his mother with the other guy.



Author's Response:

No nice, poor Izumi. Well, its to be expected. We reap what we sow. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 07:23 am

Title: Jyuu yon (14)

Yuki to the rescue!!  He's my hero and his daddy knows that he wants Sara back.  I really want to Karou to tell Sara about her dalliance with Kamir becasue Sara has been very kind to you.  I so want Kamir out of the picture he really makes my teeth itch!!!  Thank you for such a wonderful update!!



Author's Response:

Teeth itch, that is a new concept for me. Very hilarious! Thanks! :]

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 05:42 am

Title: Jyuu yon (14)

I lurvs this story so much..I don't wan it to end!!

I think I am really starting to fall for Yuki...I have forgiven him for being a chump and giving up on Sarah the first time cause he is proving over and over that he is a real man for her now!!

Yuki was all sexy alpha man for his Sarah ..he made her a promise and delivered ...and the conversation with them was sweet and very respectful...I really like that..I want them together but the right wy...he neds to get divorced and ease his way back into Sarahs life again..I think he never left her heart!!

I love Yuki's dad being his back up and kinda match make..that was so awesome!!

Great job again sweetie..as always!



Author's Response:

Yea for Yuki! I must say, I like him myslef, but I always did even though I made him look reeeeallll bad. But he is a good guy. Yes, I want to keep their relationship respectful. I appreciate you pointing that out. Kenji is a trip, makes you wonder what he has up his sleeve. He always has something up there.

Thanks nene as always! :}

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 05:36 am

Title: Jyuu yon (14)

Lovely.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 04:55 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

I like confident Karou :) Kamir annoys me. Sara and Yuki need to be together...that is all lol



Author's Response:

Thanks Dani Cali! Hope you continue to enjoy. :)

Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2012 01:18 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

What the what...who does that...Kamir is a dirty dog AND a hot mess! But I absolutely love this story...don't wait ....update again soon please.

Author's Response:

Kamir is what he is and sometimes that is a dirty dog and sometimes that is a hot mess and sometimes that is a gentelmen but aren't men like that? Thanks! I've updated so...... :]

Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 01:56 pm

Title: Jyuu san (13)

Kaoru is something else.  She turned out to have some backbone after all.  Good for her wanting to divorce Yuki.  I was surprised that she told him for the reason why she stayed out overnight.  Yuki took it better than I thought he would.  The mornung scene between Shouda, Yuki and Sara was so family oriented.  I felt bad for Sara that her paper company is trying to rip her off because she got a big account. As for Kamir, he is such a loser.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Kaoru is on her way! Where I'm not sure but she is on her way. I thought about making it messy but then I asked myself why would it be. These are to estranged people who are just now come to be friends. What difference would it make except culturally. So, Kaoru said it and Yuki accepted it.

Thanks! ;]

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 01:55 pm

Title: Jyuu san (13)

Love it! Kaoru, I'm glad you decided to be a woman and tell Yuki you want out. Khamir, you're such a sleeze! I'm glad these women have you running in circles; you deserve no less.

Sara, I know you're independent but now is the time to take advantage of Yuki's family and they influence; they'll get your supplier situation straightened out in no time!

Reviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 03:56 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

What a great update.  Yuki and Sara should be together...he knows her so well

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 03:48 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

Forgot to say how much  loved the updt and cannot wait for more...excellent job sweetie as usual!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 01:31 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

My story is finally back, I have Yuki so!!!  I have loaned you my husband to be in your story.  Karou has become bold since meeting Sara.  As far as Kamir goes I hope his reaction to Sara business situation ends that farce.  Since Kamir really only wants to sleep with Sara.  Come on Yuki make your intentions known.  Karoua I am so proud of you for speaking up and asking for an divorce. 



Author's Response:

Sorry lady, but Yuki is taken! No really, Sara will beat you down and Kaoru might throw in a chop or two.

thanks! ;p

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 01:20 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

I actually really like Karou..she really does just keep it real. I respect that she told Yuki teh truth and that they care enough about each other to just move on and let the other one be happy.

They were so adult and mature about it....sometimes honesty is the best avenue.

Kamir on the other hand ..I am about sick of him...what a jerk...he is definitely not good enough for Sarah but He is not good enough bed partner for Karou either.

I hope Yuki can find a way to help Sarah and more than anhything I hope they can get back together.

 



Author's Response:

I can't believe I haven't answered reviews as far back as this. Please forgive me! (ToT)

Yes, Yuki and Kaoru have a unique relationship to be sure, but I think I would have a hard time writing it any other way. Needless drama makes me tired and bored. I feel like they should be over it by now.

Thanks!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 12:16 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

What an interesting group. I really like the relationship between Kaoru and Yuki and how they have reached this understanding. It only more relationships were like theirs instead of dramatic and stressful. 

Kamir and Kaoru are good together. I like it. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Yes, it would be nice if we could act like adults instead of small children, but the world is what it is.

Thanks again! :}

Reviewer: Ioneha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 12:11 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

Not gonna lie I am not a fan of Sara and Kamir...somthing always seemed off to me...but no matter how unrealistic it might be I hope Sara uses Yuki's family somehow to stick it to the japansese business people...that would be fun.



Author's Response:

Yeah, for me too about Sara and Kamir. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: jamminmaraca Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 12:05 am

Title: Jyuu san (13)

Excellent.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 11:49 pm

Title: Jyuu ni (12)

oh dammit, Kamir! what have you done?! first of all know this is not a flame because i looove this story ;) but this update made me sad since i'm a Kamir fan *blush* in my HEA Kamir would go back to India only to realize his mistake and come back for Sara - but that's not going to happen, lol!

i felt the attraction between Kamir and Kaoru before and thought they would only kiss, maybe grobe each other - not go all the way, lol! there's no way Kamir can redeem himself from this and i fear his reaction when he hears Sara spent the night at Yuki's...

GREAT update! looking forward seeing where this goes  - take care & happy new year!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Cassius! I think he's just being a man...right?

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2012 11:03 am



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