this my second time reading this story and still feels like i am reading it for the first time .One of my favourite stories on the chamber.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/13 03:25 pm
I like to give a review because that's the least I can do to show my appreciation for you writers taking the time to write stroies like these that make you laugh your head off. Mr Price watching Brent eat him out of house and home is just one hilarious moment in the story), and just entertain us. I became very depressed when I had to move my beridden mother into my home and care for her and no longer had an active life. Don't get me wrong I love my mother so much that I couldn't leave her in a nursing home. Now, I go to work and come home to care for her along with my siblings. Right now I have no life, so I was glad to find out about 'The Chamber'. Okay, this is a long drawn out way of saying you can definitely mark this off your bucket list and call yourself a writer. This is a very good story.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/18/13 09:56 am
Seldom do I read a story that makes me laugh out loud--a lot, but this one did. I couldn't wait to finish it and I tip my hat off to Ms. Vesta. Shawnie was too nice, but Sean was a true gangster when it came to insulting those he cared about. Mr. Price's character was hilarious and Jenny deserved a serious beat down. Thank you for sharing your work and I enjoyed reading Over the Hedge.
Author's Response:
Thank so much Penelope!!! I've been asked by close friends which genre my story best fits in. And I always answer romantic comedy. So I am loving the fact that I did my due diligence and got you to laugh. Thanks again for taking the time to read this little tale and thanks for leaving a review!!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: 03/14/13 10:59 pm
So romantic! MORE!
Author's Response:
Thanks amlaamar!!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: 12/27/12 01:20 am
That was HOT!!
Im SO happy I found this story and its completed too!
May the new year be a prosperous and happy one for you and your family!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: 12/26/12 11:00 pm
ROTFLMAO!!!! Thats was hilarious!!!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/26/12 12:07 am
This was FANTASTIC! It made me laugh out loud till I sweat! It made me feel warm and runny. You did a fantastic job with the displaying the feelings of Phil about his daughters and the men they should have.
Well Done!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: 09/28/12 04:14 pm
Great story. I enjoyed it a lot.
Reviewer: Xioaxa Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/12 11:07 am
Great update. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/12 03:07 pm
Absolutely Beautiful! This story was actually breathtaking, especially the epilogue.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much alexp696!!! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: alexp696 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/27/12 02:01 pm
Amazing story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I am very glad that you liked it. And thanks so much for reviewing. It really means a lot.
Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/02/12 01:31 pm
So I read this whole thing in like 2 days and I loved it :D
Your writing is ah-mazing and I hope to read more from you soon :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much!!! This was a fun story to write and I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate you taking the time to write a review., They keep me motivated!!
Reviewer: ConverseObsessed Signed [Report This]Date: 06/03/12 02:08 pm
I absolutely enjoyed this story, your writing really drew mw in, I was right up there with Lashawnda when she had to ut a girl in her place for trying it on with her man, and with Sean when he was protecting his family.
Is there going to be a Brent and Chrystal story, as I would love to know how Mr Price got on with Brent inhaling his food on a weekly basis lol.
Thank you for such a wonderful read
Author's Response:
Hi Jules
I am so happy that you enjoyed this story. This couple is my favorite to write about. There will be more from the other members of the gang and some one shots with Sean and Lashawnda. Brent and Crystal are going to be a challenge for me to write because I don't want there relationship or personality to mirror Sean and Lashawnda's. But I guess we'll see what my overactive imagination comes up with. I'm sure Mr. Price will do all in his power to get rid of old "hungry eyes"...lol
I really appreciate you taking the time to write a review it means so much to me.
Thanks
~Minerva~
Reviewer: Jules Signed [Report This]Date: 05/13/12 06:37 am
I did enjoy this awesome story I am so glad that you wrote it and that I was able to read it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. So glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Felicia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/28/12 06:56 am
Thank you so much for this great story. It took me a while, but i am glad I stayed with it. It was definitely worth it. I hope this isn't the last we see of these great characters. Thanks again.
Author's Response:
Thanks sooo much for taking the time to read and write a review. It means a lot to me. It won't be the last you see of these two. I've got a whole lot in store for them.
Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/26/12 09:07 pm
I absolutely LOVED reading this. It took me a minute to read the whole thing, but i'm glad that I put my foot down and decided finish reading this today. I love your writing style. It's just something about your writing style that just pulls me in. It's like I'm actually in the story and can actually feel what these characters are going through. I loved all of the characters except crazy Jenny. I loved every chapter and scene--which are still very vivid because of your details. I look forward to reading many more of your works in the future. Thank you for writing such a beautiful love story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Vava for reading and takin the time to review. Your words have put a huge smile on my face. Its good to know that you were truly able to be pulled into this tale of love. I loved writing about these two and hope to bring you much more.
Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]Date: 02/23/12 09:02 pm
Wait, dont give them a girl just yet, lets keep them trying, maybe shock them with twins or triplets. I just cant shake the feeling that Sean likes to keep her barefoot and pregnant, it seems to suite her. lol
Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/20/12 01:39 pm
I love this story, it literally took ke like two days to read it all, it was great, well more than great, it was just... lovely.
The relationship you built between the two characters is beautiful, you can tell that they love each other soo much, it just makes you wish that you too can find a love like theirs. A love that is pure, sweet and gentle yet filled with passion and last that'll probably never fade. You get the impression that they've created a wonderful home filled with love, joy and children, ALOT of children and i have a feeling just a few more to come.
Basically what i wanted to say is that, I get it. I get the story, and the love you were trying to show and I appreciate it. It was a wonderful story.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much leah...your reviews is much appreciated. I'm so glad that you get it. That was my goal with this story. Just writing about two people who are in love, not too much drama between them and lots of love and laughter.
Reviewer: leah Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/20/12 01:30 pm
Wow!
Ms. Vesta, you were right. Reading the end and epilogue put a happy smile on my face. I have really enjoyed reading Over the Hedge and want to thank you for sharing your story with me via The Chamber. You Rock!
May God bless you and thanks again.
Author's Response:
Yeah!!! So glad you liked it. I appreciate the reveiw; it means a lot.
Reviewer: Chamberguest Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/20/12 10:32 am
I Love This Story SOO Much! You Are A AMAZING Writer! :)
- I Really Can't Wait For The Other Stories To Start. I'm Kind Of Looking Forward To How Lashawnda, Dealt With The "Cheating" Thing With Sean. Plus, Her Pregnancies And The Wedding.
Great Story, Thank You So Much For Sharing Your Talent With Us!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! I'll do my best to get the other stories out. I love writing about these two.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/19/12 07:48 pm
You are truly AWESOME & Talented!!!!! I can't wait to see what you gift us with next. Please don't keep us waiting too long.....
Author's Response:
LadyeT you are making me blush and grin from ear to ear right now. Thanks so much for the positive words. I'll try not to wait too long. And thanks so much for reading; I'm glad yo liked it.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: 02/19/12 06:11 pm
I loved Sean and Lashawnda's story so much that I had to read it again!!
Author's Response:
Wow thats just awesome...I'm hoping to have some more on these two soon.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 02/19/12 05:34 pm
Just read this story and liked it. Minerva, I too would like to know the name of guy in the cast pics. He is HOTT!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading Tia. I'm glad you you liked it. As for the guy in the cast pic I wish I knew...I absolutely suck at finding pics for cast. But suprisingly I was shocked to find this guys pic in some add on line. He looks exactly like my muse that inspired this story. I really wish I knew his name. Because it would be nice to have other shots of him to include in the other stories.
Reviewer: Tia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/19/12 04:38 pm
This was a great incite into the Colcord family. Question was Greyson death or was the signing something Sean taught the kids?
I really enjoyed this story. Great writing!
Author's Response:
Yes our little Greyson has a hearing impairment. Thanks so much for reading Cherry
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 02/19/12 10:36 am
SIMPLY......BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/18/12 09:10 pm