Omo, I'm so glad you've updated! I think it's been a while...Anyways, I'm interested in seeing how Harry and Zora will interact when they're at Hogwarts :) I'm not going to lie, Zora seems a bit unrealistic for an 11 year old but I guess there's always an exception to every rule.
Anyways, I love this chapter and I'm wondering what obsession Lucius has. Was he in love with Cecile?
I wrote Zora to be a thoughtful, caring, happy 11 year old.
I wrote her to be confident and curious. I wrote her as being aware of her surroundings and emotions (which she has been taught and encouraged be like that by her family). But I get it, Hermione I feel exceeds the intelligence level of an 11 year old at times (how she knew the whole history of Hogwarts and how she knew wizards social customs more so then Harry when the reality is there are some things that she couldn't possibly know). No one seems to comment on that as much, which I find to be odd.
Both of the girls are advanced yes, but I wouldn't necessarily say that's unrealistic.
Anyways, thank you very much for your interest in TLS and I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story.
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Date: February 18 2014 06:11 am
I serious thought you gave up on this story. I was so shocked when I got the email that it was updated. Hopefully I won't have to wait another year for an update?
As I said in the author's note in the latest update a lot of personal things have happened in my life recently that took me away from writing in general. I write this story in my spare time and unfortunately it cannot be the number one priority in my life. Know that if I haven't given notice that the story is to be discontinued, assume that it is going to be updated at some point.
Thank you very much for your interest in TLS and hopefully you will continue to read it in the future.
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Date: February 17 2014 02:06 pm
Wis a lot happened un this chapter. We met Harry and his psycho relatives. Hermione bring a witch and the way that her parents found out made me LOL...Samson in the shower with Mrs Granger. As for the creepy Malfoys yikes. Was Lucid in love with Zora's mom? Thanks for a great update. I can't wait until they get to Hogwarts.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2012 02:24 am
Thanks fir s great update. Cora id doing well. I like that she has befriended Neville and defended him. As for Malfoy he is creepy just staring at Zora. Lune knows that hus father killed Zora's mom hopefully she will nit say anything.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 02:37 pm
Thanks for a great update. I was shocked that Zora could turn into a cat. I guess Dora decided that it was best that Dumbledore was aware of Zora's ability to transform . I am sure that he probably knows. As for Hermione she made those drawers move and attacked that girl. That was funny.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2012 01:15 am
TY for the update. I am glad she will have Hermie with her for support since Luna Don't remember her. I was laughing when her dad got beat up for showing up in Hermie shower with her mom. So she can talk to snakes like Harry interesting, I wonder how this will change the story. Well we have caught up to the books I can't wait to see how this turns out. Please update soon.Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2012 09:35 pm
Just wanted to say that I really enjoy this story and your writing is exceptional. I've only ever really loved one other Harry Potter story and unfortunately she didn't continue with it, so it is very nice to be once again drawn into the Harry Potter world. Keep up the great work and dishing out amazing updates.
I also enjoy the pace of the story, that seems to me like you plan on giving this story length, and the more I can get, the better.Reviewer: Rocky13Depp Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 03:56 am
I can't even remeber, but it had the black girl from Harry Potter the one that was with one of the twins and Draco together. I read it on Fanfiction
"Lessons" is the story I think your talking about. It's still on fanfiction.net. Actually it was what inspired me to write this story.Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2012 02:30 pm
You took your sweet old time with this one didn't you? I like it and now I know not to give up hope on this story getting updated. Right?
I don't like to give up on stories. Especially one so close to me as this one. The time in between chapters might be long but there will always be an update of some sort. Whether it is actually a chapter or just a note depends on my life scheduling. I had been nursing this partiuclar chapter for months now. School always comes first for me, so this story had to be put on the back burner. A lot of planning and figuring goes into this story because I want it to be good for you and my other readers.
Now that I actually have some free time there should be more updates.
Thank you for sticking around.
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Date: May 11 2012 04:42 am
I wonder are you going to keep writing this story? I really like it and this is the second Happy Potter story I read with a black girl in it. And the first one I read didn't finish either.
Could you tell me the title of that story? i might have read it....Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2012 03:51 am
bravo this story is very well done its like reading hp all over again but from a girls point of vue from the first chapter it grabs you right up to the present instalment thank you for sharing this side of the hp uinvers you have me hooked i am most devinitly looking forward to futer chapters bravo very well done leahcarxxReviewer: blown away Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 05:49 pm
the note in the middle kinda killed it for me but i still like it. but next time please leave the note at the end. thank you.Reviewer: nikol Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 08:19 am