Please update this. I'm continuously looking for it even though its been so long.
Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]Date: 05/29/13 09:05 pm
Love the video summary!!! Sooo creative.... Nice touch..
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/31/12 03:42 pm
Well I for one will eagerly be awaiting..
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: 03/23/12 02:20 am
I think I need a cold shower
Reviewer: meme Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/23/12 02:18 am
Oh damn... this is good
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: 03/23/12 02:09 am
Thanks Diva, looking forward to reading more from you!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/14/12 12:01 am
Glad to hear from you. Look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 03/13/12 09:45 pm
I am glad that you working on some updates this story has been missed!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 03/13/12 06:53 pm
Can't wait for this to get started!! That ex is already on my hit list!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 03/13/12 06:21 pm
DD, stop being nervous, lol, you are a great writer. I love this story and cannot wait for Chanelle and Chase to meet up. Ohh, I can't wait for more, lol.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/13/12 04:36 pm
This story is so good and raw . SO ready for an update . Loving it !!!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/13/12 03:15 pm
LOL! Never saw this one! Too funny! You need to get back to this story, its too good!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/12 06:47 pm
This story is too good! Please post again soon. I cannot wait for the meeting of Odetta and Chase. Good, goodness that is going to be hot, especially with what you have already given us, lol.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/27/11 08:38 pm
Damn is right. I hope these two have a chance encounter...
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/26/11 03:17 am
Short and sweet.
Update soon at least.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: 12/24/11 11:13 am
I was reading about an owner and his client communicationg until an intrusion came in.
It's a HATE at first SIGHT between me and the ex-wife.
Author's Response:
How cool!! Yes, hatred is in order cause girlfriend has ISSUES, according to my muse. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: 12/24/11 10:58 am
The ex-wife is stupid, it's nun ya bitness who Chanelle is! Why did he. spend the night in her guest room? His ex-wife is being played by a Khardasisn I hate her already! Henri is a selfhish lover, so why is Dette still with him? I like this stofy!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 12/24/11 09:06 am
You are a fan of short and to the point aren't you? I mean you are good, you give us just enough to whett our appitites and then....wham! You end the installment, I guess that is your way of keeping us coming back for more! I like your thought process. That is really kick ass! And your writing is hott!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/11 08:45 am
There is nothing like reading a round of BUTT NAKED sex in the morning! Except maybe having some hot sweaty, Butt naked sex in the morning! Wow what a way to start out a story.....but the problem with that is there is no place else to go. You know you will have to keep writing like this or your readers will be upset. Teasing us like that! But I don't care and I will give you a big TEN for giving me much pleasure in the morning! zoh yeah why does all the good men have to have a crazy ass ex? That goes for good women also!
Author's Response:
Kitty, thank you for reading and telling me the truth. I really appreciate your constructive criticism cause these two characters are SOMETHING ELSE.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/24/11 08:41 am
There is nothing like reading a round of BUTT NAKED sex in the morning! Except maybe having some hot sweaty, Butt naked sex in the morning! Wow what a way to start out a story.....but the problem with that is there is no place else to go. You know you will have to keep writing like this or your readers will be upset. Teasing us like that! But I don't care and I will give you a big TEN for giving me much pleasure in the morning! zoh yeah why does all the good men have to have a crazy ass ex? That goes for good women also!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/24/11 08:29 am
Ok I like what I see so far.....lets get into the story and let me see if I can imagine these characters can come to life for me.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/24/11 08:19 am
I would really like more =)
Reviewer: Inthenykoftime Signed [Report This]Date: 12/24/11 06:33 am
DirtyDiva!
The video is to coolest thing EVER! I haven't even read anything yet and I'm already psyched.
Are you still writing on this? If not I have a feeling you need to "get down on it."
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm still writing on it and the muse is kicking my butt!! I promise you that this story will continue.
Reviewer: puertaobierta Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/11 10:32 am
My damn eyes has been bucked wide open from the first sentence to the last damn word. I think I need some visine and some damn ice cold water!!! That was so f***in' hot HAWT!! WOW what the hell did Chanelle put on homeboy? That was hella good DirtyDiva...hella good.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Elizablu!! This is technically my first long length story so, please give me some pointers while reading. Thanks so much for taking time to read my story.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 07/16/11 06:47 pm
Nevermind who Chanelle is wench/bitch it's not you and you are Chase's ex-wife so again you don't need to know now as to why he is in the guest room of his ex-wife is definitely an answer I would like to get.
Nice start more please.
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
You got me over here DYING!!! ROFLOL!!! From what you've read, ol' girl is SOMETHING ELSE.... Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 06/14/11 06:50 pm