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Title: Author's Note

Hopefully you can update soon😀

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 02:41 am
Title: Cast pictures and video summary

Ok, so I know that life gets in the way, but why haven"t you update this story in a while.

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 11:11 pm
Title: Cast pictures and video summary

Ok, so I know that life gets in the way, but why haven"t you update this story in a while.

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 11:06 pm
Title: Author's Note

I haven't given up hope that one day I'll drop in to see you've given us more. 

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 28 2014 04:14 pm
Title: Author's Note

Please update this. I'm continuously looking  for it even though its been so long.

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 04:05 am
Title: Cast pictures and video summary

Love the video summary!!! Sooo creative.... Nice touch..

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 10:42 pm
Title: Author's Note

Well I for one will eagerly be awaiting..

 Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 09:20 am
Title: Chapter 2

I think I need a cold shower

 Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 09:18 am
Title: Chapter 1-Remember

Oh damn... this is good

 Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 23 2012 09:09 am
Title: Author's Note

Thanks Diva, looking forward to reading more from you!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 07:01 am
Title: Author's Note

Glad to hear from you. Look forward to reading more.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 04:45 am
Title: Author's Note

I am glad that you working on some updates this story has been missed!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 01:53 am
Title: Author's Note

Can't wait for this to get started!! That ex is already on my hit list!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2012 01:21 am
Title: Author's Note

DD, stop being nervous, lol, you are a great writer. I love this story and cannot wait for Chanelle and Chase to meet up. Ohh, I can't wait for more, lol.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 11:36 pm
Title: Chapter 2

This story is so good and raw . SO ready for an update . Loving it !!!

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 10:15 pm
Title: Chapter 2

LOL! Never saw this one! Too funny! You need to get back to this story, its too good!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 01:47 am
Title: Chapter 2

This story is too good! Please post again soon. I cannot wait for the meeting of Odetta and Chase. Good, goodness that is going to be hot, especially with what you have already given us, lol.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 2

Damn is right. I hope these two have a chance encounter...

 Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 10:17 am
Title: Chapter 2

Short and sweet.

Update soon at least.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 06:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1-Remember

I was reading about an owner and his client communicationg until an intrusion came in.

It's a HATE at first SIGHT between me and the ex-wife.



Author's Response:

How cool!!  Yes, hatred is in order cause girlfriend has ISSUES, according to my muse.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1-Remember

The ex-wife is stupid, it's nun ya bitness who Chanelle is! Why did he. spend the night in her guest room? His ex-wife is being played by a Khardasisn I hate her already! Henri is a selfhish lover, so why is Dette still with him? I like this stofy!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 04:06 pm
Title: Chapter 2

You are a fan of short and to the point aren't you? I mean you are good, you give us just enough to whett our appitites and then....wham! You end the installment, I guess that is your way of keeping us coming back for more! I like your thought process. That is really kick ass! And your writing is hott! 

 

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 03:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1-Remember

There is nothing like reading a round of BUTT NAKED sex in the morning! Except maybe having some hot sweaty, Butt naked sex in the morning!  Wow what a way to start out a story.....but the problem with that is there is no place else to go. You know you will have to keep writing like this or your readers will be upset. Teasing us like that! But I don't care and I will give you a big  TEN for giving me much pleasure in the morning! zoh yeah why does all the good men have to have a crazy ass ex? That goes for good women also!



Author's Response:

Kitty, thank you for reading and telling me the truth.  I really appreciate your constructive criticism cause these two characters are SOMETHING ELSE.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 03:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1-Remember

There is nothing like reading a round of BUTT NAKED sex in the morning! Except maybe having some hot sweaty, Butt naked sex in the morning!  Wow what a way to start out a story.....but the problem with that is there is no place else to go. You know you will have to keep writing like this or your readers will be upset. Teasing us like that! But I don't care and I will give you a big  TEN for giving me much pleasure in the morning! zoh yeah why does all the good men have to have a crazy ass ex? That goes for good women also!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 03:29 pm
Title: Cast pictures and video summary

Ok I like what I see so far.....lets get into the story and let me see if I can imagine these characters can come to life for me.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2011 03:19 pm


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