I would really like more =)
Reviewer: Inthenykoftime Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2011 01:33 pm
DirtyDiva!
The video is to coolest thing EVER! I haven't even read anything yet and I'm already psyched.
Are you still writing on this? If not I have a feeling you need to "get down on it."
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm still writing on it and the muse is kicking my butt!! I promise you that this story will continue.
Reviewer: puertaobierta Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 02 2011 05:32 pm
My damn eyes has been bucked wide open from the first sentence to the last damn word. I think I need some visine and some damn ice cold water!!! That was so f***in' hot HAWT!! WOW what the hell did Chanelle put on homeboy? That was hella good DirtyDiva...hella good.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Elizablu!! This is technically my first long length story so, please give me some pointers while reading. Thanks so much for taking time to read my story.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2011 01:47 am
Nevermind who Chanelle is wench/bitch it's not you and you are Chase's ex-wife so again you don't need to know now as to why he is in the guest room of his ex-wife is definitely an answer I would like to get.
Nice start more please.
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
You got me over here DYING!!! ROFLOL!!! From what you've read, ol' girl is SOMETHING ELSE.... Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: June 15 2011 01:50 am
OOOOOh, My My MY!! That was indeed one of the best starts to a story that I've seen in a long time. Please don't keep me waiting. The tiny mouse in my brain is running itself ragged trying to figure out what happens next. Can't wait.
Reviewer: Buddha Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 07:42 pm
Damn!!!
Can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response:
LOL....I can't either!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:52 pm
Thanks for a great update. I was LOL at the talking dick. thanks
Author's Response:
ROFLOL!!! Stephen King once said that his book ideas always start with the first line coming to him suddenly. That is exactly how it happen to me....weird. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 01:51 pm
oh that was hot but what the heck he doin in her house N The video I thouht she wouldn't let him C R B around his daughter personaly I woodint have anything 2 do with her outside our child. but whatever that was a great start keep it up.
Author's Response:
LOL!! I'm glad you're putting 2 n 2 together. Your questions will be answered as the story unfolds. Clue #1-It was 3 years since he had sex. Hmmmmmm....I wonder why????? LOL
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 14 2011 09:59 am
Didn't scare me a bit..lol!
Umm....Kristina needs to remember, ex-wife! Why the hell is she demanding to who anybody is now! They have a kid together, so I'm assuming thats why he's in her house.
Author's Response:
I'm loving the review!! You are correct AND why IS he in her house? But...is it really HER house??? *evil laugh*
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 07:15 am
great chapter
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 06:54 am
So..umm...like... WOW. At least he had the presence of mind to pull out. And it ain't the ex-wife's bidness who Chanelle is. This chick is going to be trouble for Chase. Chase might need to put a lock on "no so little" Chase. hee
Can't wait to hear more about his time with Chanelle. 'cause she sure as hell has made an impression on him. And he has made an impression on me. :-)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 06:35 am
love the cliff hanger its cute
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!! More to come later :)
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 05:31 am
Wow, that was HAWT!! He sure laid it on her. Can't wait to see what he'll do to Chanelle when he has her. That ex wife is too much taking advantage of him while he was sleeping.
Author's Response:
LOL!! Yeah, Kristina is definitely an opportunist and thirsty, isn't she?? LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 05:17 am
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Keep reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: MsJ Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 04:17 am
WOW, what a way to start a story.. I think I need a SHOWER after reading that.
Please don't be long with the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing...truly!!! I'm taking my time to plot the story but the next chapter should be coming in the next few days.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:54 am
I thought it was a very hot scene! It takes a lot to make me blush and wow, you did just that, LOL! You had me looking around my apartment just to make sure that I was alone but the sad thing is, I LIVE ALONE! LMAO!
Very good job on this chapter. Love the metaphor about the liquid tears. I thought that was very creative. Writers who are creative with words = Greatness to me. I love the fact that you didn't go for the lovey dovey kind of scene. Loved it a lot! :)
Can't wait for me!
Author's Response:
I BOW DOWN TO YOU, GIRL!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! I love your stories so much...and thanks for your encouraging words.
Reviewer: Candice Caine Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:48 am
Everything was extremeley hot except for the first line. "His dick cried liquid tears" is a little redundant. You could just say his dick cried. Other than that it was hot.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking time to read my story and review it. Every author has like a calling card that they use in their stories. For some reason.."cry liquid tears" is mine. I've used it in just about all my stories. That does kinda sound redundant liquid=tears could be the same thing. Thanks for your comments :)
Reviewer: aaliyah Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:39 am
love it
Author's Response:
Thank your for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:20 am
DirtyD, that was sooo hot!!! Please have him run into Odette(I like that better than Chanelle)soon.... that boy needs a Queen, not a diva, wannabe,,,lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Like all good stories, we must have a lil wee drama before the protagonist gets what he wants...LOL
Reviewer: VAL1 Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:18 am
no it didnt cant wait for the real thing
Author's Response:
Me neither!!! Imagine your MUSE dropping this opening on you??? ROFLOL!!!
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:07 am
Wow! I think you kill me, please update soon.
Author's Response:
ROFLOL!! Imagine how I felt after writing it.....#need a cigarette.com
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:05 am
*Woooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww*
That was extremely hottttt!
Author's Response:
ROFLOL!! THAT'S WHAT I WAS SAYING WHEN I WAS WRITING IT!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 02:53 am
wow powerful song! please update! The song just inspired me to write something
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments Nsablo!! More to come soon!!
Reviewer: Nsablo Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2011 07:49 pm
Love the pics. I just want more.
Author's Response:
Thanks juno!! More to come soon...:)
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2011 06:54 pm
Is this it? I mean that song is great---which reminds me I haven't heard some R.Kelly in a while. But there's no chapter. Please update soon---maybe give us a more detailed summary of the story. Cause it's a list of characters but nothing else. Unless Chase is having an affair with Odette while married to Kristina----which is wrong on so many levels considering he has a daughter in this. And Odette agreed to this. Cause that's the impression the song is giving me....
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments vaberella!! The song is meant to show the emotions of wanting someone you can't have especially if they belong to someone else. Then it also shows no matter how much you try to do the RIGHT thing...one look or touch will have you doing things or feeling emotions you shouldn't...sort of like looking at forbidden fruit...the longer you look, the more likely you will indulge. I can tell you that Chase and Odette are GOOD PEOPLE but what happens to good people when they are taken for granted??? More to come...:)
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2011 04:16 pm