What is up with Dominick? Will he be competition for Akiyo. I am trying to figure out who Akiyo doesn't want to remember. Akiyo, your father can't respect you as a man unless you cut the strings and stand on your own two feet. Silly rebellions won't work.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2014 03:10 am
This story is very interesting. I hope you are able to come back to finish it some day.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 06 2014 09:52 am
keep writing! as a person who as been involved in interracial relationships and have bi-racial children, I too sometimes feel like I have some racist issue issues, but they more tied to things that i have experienced!
Reviewer: sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:38 am
Wow, Daizan comes off as a tough cookie. Hopefully she mellows as time goes by. Akiyo has surely met his match.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2011 04:44 am
omg love this story, post more soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 22 2011 11:23 pm
Daze is very angry, and that anger is going to get her into trouble. Me likey!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 22 2011 06:43 pm
I am enjoying what I'm reading so far. Your characters are engaging, for sure!
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Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2011 11:58 pm
This is really good! An interesting and compelling first chapter. I am already very much intrigued by all of these characters (All the Ds!) and am anxious to read more.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I really get nervous about the fanfiction I write and writing my own stuff is making my anxiety act up, but its about time I tried. I really appreciate your input as such a accomplished writer.
Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2011 11:49 pm
Interesting start. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2011 09:37 pm
I like, please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2011 05:05 pm
Loved the chapter!
Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2011 04:03 pm
I really like this story. Please continue
Reviewer: Rmahni Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2011 12:35 pm