I implored you, please come back and finish this novel. Their many outstanding writers on this site, yet your story is priceless. I love Dovie and Xavier, there chemisty is on fire. I do not want Dovie to go back to her husband. How you written Dovie awakening, and Xavier being the key to unlock that part of her that has been silented so long. This is a love story between two people who deseved to be together. This story needs to be finish. I hoping you will read the comments and come back. Thank you.Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 06:12 pm
I have been so entirely engrossed in this story. Someone suggested in the shout box, that it be featured next month and I couldn't agree more!! I'm so glad my curiosity made me look for it. Your writing is absolutely fabulous!! This story is... I don't have words worthy enough to describe how deliciously seductive it is!! My only regret is that it is not finished. I hope you come back and complete it. I have to go back and rate the other chapters because I was too anxious to do so before!! Awesome!! You are very talented. The characters are a perfect fit and the story descriptions are impeccable!!Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 07:25 pm
I love everything about this story. Waiting, desperately, for an update!!Reviewer: luxegrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 05:38 am
It's been awhile since you have updated this story, I am
hoping that you still read your reviews on this site because
this is really a very good story to just leave hanging and not
finishing it or updating it...Please if u read this UPDATE!!!
Finish the story!!! :-)Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 01:52 pm
...wow.. I mean that's all that I can say. This story here is fleshy, sinewy, deep, eloquent in a sort of coming of age fashion- and relatable. Because being a woman is compromise in itself lol and you relayed it so beautifully. I really loved Dove, you wrote her so well so it must be so special for you- take your time but we really would love to see how this all unfolds... After all, Thanksgiving is right around the corner (*nudge*wink) so I know what I'll be reading.Reviewer: Poppy Velour Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 10:20 pm
This! This is the book that should be garnering raves from every woman out there.
You set the scenes so well and your dialog is excellent.
The seks is wonderful as well (my mouth was hanging open and drool dripped out onto my ipad, really).
I don't like to pester authors, but I'd really like to see the ending of this story (even if it means that she returns to Shon (I'll be heartbroken though, because her story is mine and I like to think that if given the chance she has, I'd take it)).Reviewer: Liquidfyre Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2013 12:40 am
Lookie here missy!!!!!! This story has had me clinching my thighs together for the last three chapters. Hawt!!!! Hawt!!!! Hawt!!!! Please don't leave me hanging much longer. I'm begging for a Happy Ever After for Dove......She deserves it!!! We all do!!!!! Happy Endings!!!!! Happy Endings!!!! Happy Endings!!!!! Happy Endings!!!!!!Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2012 05:11 am
I was trying to get caught up on the chapters before commenting but I can't hold it any longer! When is she going to realize this marriage was a big mistake? Nothing will change once she goes home, she'll still be everyone's slave! She's making me go ARRRRGH!Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 05:54 pm
First of all allow me to apologize profusely. I have been remiss in my duties as a Chamber reader and I feel like an utter ass for not having read this earlier. You are more than a writer...A total lyricist and its a crime and mean as hell to leave us hanging for so long!!! I don't just love this, I LUUUUUUUURRRRRVVVE this LOL. Desperately awaiting the next update.Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2012 03:16 am
"An unexamied life is not worth living", I am completely in love with Xavier and Dove. You have written a lovely story and I am hoping that "Dove" will have enough courage to leave her husband and live her life. Xavier need to tell "Dove the truth. I did not review every chapter because I was so beguiled by your writing. Excellent story.Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 11 2012 04:15 am