Oh, this story has been missed. I'm both excited and terrified for them--perfect.
Symph
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 21 2011 05:49 am
good to see you back, woman.
and these two? mm. smh. the chemistry is off the charts.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2011 02:44 am
Welcome back!!! What a lovely morning after. Dove needs to just sit back and savor this experience. It is unfortunate to condone adultery but in this fiction realm I'm so on the side of Dove "getting her life".
Please aak the muse ever so nicely to return asap:).
Date: December 21 2011 12:58 am
Great update! I want more I hope the muse is back in full force now that it has taken a break. :D
Thank you for the update.
Happy writing and Happy Holidays!!!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 11:15 pm
Yay, so glad to read more about Dove and Xavier! Is he finally going to tell her what he intends to do with her book or is he going to procrastinate another day? The more he waits the more angry Dove will be when he finally does tell her.
Do you mind talking about your NaNo project? I love hearing about what people worked on, the stories they came up with.
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 10:24 pm
I want Dove to realize that she will never truly be happy married to Shon or letting her brothers use her and treat her like she doesn't matter. I want the experience that Dove is having with Xavier to be her wake up call, to open her eyes to what love truly is. Dove is not there yet and that makes me sad!!! I so love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 09:15 pm
Wow. How is Dove ever going to return to her normal married life? Xavier Is one hot commodity whom, it seems is falling for Dove. Please continue!
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 09:00 pm
I am just reading your story and it is awesome.
I love it.
can't wait to see how she will attempt to go back to her boring life w/her husband.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 20 2011 08:02 pm
Now I'm not one to promote adultery, but it seems to me like Dove needs to be treasured and obviously needs some good sex. Since she's not getting it at home Xavier seems like the obvious choice.
Though it seems like these were moments of calm before the storm.
Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 06:30 pm
thanks for the update! i've missed this story, really glad to see it back and look more than forward to more!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 06:06 pm
one word - GODDAAAAMN!!! that was BEYOND HOTTT! *whistles and fan face* so damn good, lol!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 05:56 pm
You must want me to find you and abuse you for stopping right there...filthy tease...glad to see you back
Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2011 05:47 pm
Gorgeousness!
Reviewer: Yasmin Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 17 2011 12:02 am
Yes Lawd!You can never go wrong with phone sex! I'm a former Phone-Sex Operator, so I should know! lol! Your writing is so fluid and lovely!
Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 06:20 am
Amazing character development in Xavier. Love how Dove is finally allowed to be herself in all her glorious color and silk:). I need moo ore! Soon:)!
Reviewer: Nodrivel99 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 30 2011 01:29 am
Xav, still lying to yourself, huh. Hope Dove doesn't find out about the deal from someone else before Xav can tell her.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 07:17 am
He needs to tell her about the book and it's part in the tv show and he I do believe is falling for more then he wants to admit to himself or I could be wrong.
Thank u for the wonderful update, More please.
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 06:29 am
Great writing, every time. Love the full bodied characters.
Symphs
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 05:38 am
oh, xavier, you ass.
but that sex was steaming.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 03:59 am
Dove, Xavier is loving you so well, has Shon ever loved you like he loves you? I hope that this experience changes how she deals with her family. I want to realize that she deserves to be loved, I think X is falling in love with Dove. I want him to throw down the gaunlet showing Dove just what she means to him.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 11:45 pm
Wow, what an update! Next chapter please, can't wait to see what happens when he tells her the truth!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 09:52 pm
No apology necessary. That was well worth the wait my friend. Well worth the wait.
Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 07:08 pm
This is HOT!!!!!! LOve it!!!!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2011 06:23 pm
Oh, this is a story. Such great writing, three dimensional characters, interesting plot. Brava. Also, great word choice, nothing is cliche or unorginal. Thanks so much.
Symph
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 25 2011 04:59 pm
well, damn! ummm...yeah, this was...yeah...Xav, yeah, I enjoyed this chapter. *purely for the literary value :)*
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2011 08:45 pm