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Title: Chapter 3

Great update.  At least Rick and Marva are talking more. I am surprised that Marva doesn't want to go to college.  Thanks



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Thank you <3.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 01:45 pm
Title: Chapter 2

What happen to Rick's father? I am glad that Marva is still friendly woth Rick.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 01:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like Rick.  I hope that Marva doesn't break his heart and the jock doesn't beet him up at school.  Thanks



Author's Response:

No, thank you for reading <3.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 01:26 pm
Title: Chapter 8

She didn't lose Rick. She threw him away. Marva is so self-centered and really not a nice person at all.

It's time for Rick to be a little selfish. So glad he didn't open the door. He really needs to safeguard himself from her. She will take and take and never give anything in return.  Let's see if Marva learns anything from this.

Sabrina gave Rick some very good advice.

Rick is not as much of a loser as Marva thinks. He's able to go on without her even though he's hurt. He's got a life to live and he's going to do it. What will Marva do with her life? She seems adrift.

So glad you had a backup. what a narrow escape. I'd hate not to be able to read this story. Good chapter, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thank you. The thing Marva needs to learn is that you can't treat people any kind of way and expect them to forgive you like it was nothing. She has to learn to GAIN people's respect because she's been so used to people just giving it to her.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 10:04 am
Title: Chapter 8

Great story. Marva really learnt a tough lesson. Pride goes before a fall. Please update asap.

Author's Response:

I'll be updating soon.

Thanks for reading <3.

 Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 08:28 am
Title: Chapter 8

Wow,interesting update. Not surprised that Ronnie molested her. What a terrible price she had to pay hanging out with Mr popular. Feel sorry for her though.

Understand where Rick coming from also. Seeing that she dissed him, why go to his home?? She's a mean girl with a bad attitude. Hope she tell her parents though.

Ronnie needs a reality check. He can't treat girls like crap and expect to get away with it!! PLEASE let him be punished. Did Lamar and Amber know Ronnie did drugs and abuse girls for sex??? Hope not as Amber is supposed to be her friend. Such a shame!!!

Author's Response:

I'm deciding what I should do with Ronnie. He has a lot coming his way, no doubt.

Thanks for reading <3.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 8

got to respect that rick.



Author's Response:

You do. He's really trying to hold himself together right now.

 Reviewer: readywonder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 05:27 am
Title: Chapter 2

Supreb



Author's Response:

Thank you so much <3.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 04:32 am
Title: Chapter 8

That's what Marva gets in regards to Rick. As for what Ronnie did, I felt bad for Marva. Ohh, I cannot wait for more. I wish you could update everyday. This story is too good!



Author's Response:

I wish I could write this faster too, lol.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 03:25 am
Title: Chapter 8

She deserves to be treated like that, how she treated Rick was wrong.   Marva is a little bitch, you don't treat people like that.  I can't wait for her comuppence. Marva needs to be taught a lesson.  I hope that she tells her parents what happened with that jackass and he gets arrested. 



Author's Response:

Hopefully this situation with Ronnie will be the eye opener she needs.

Thanks for the review <3.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 03:23 am
Title: Chapter 8

No one deserves to be manhandled and almost raped. Marva really let popularity go through her head. The way she snapped at that girl was so rude and un-necessary. Because she dropped Rick as a friend he wasn't there for her when she needed him. Hopefully he will eventually get over his anger but I hope not before she realizes what a great guy he is. Teens can be so self centered and shortsighted. Nice chapters.



Author's Response:

True. The thing to keep in mind is that Marva is still young. That's not an excuse for her behavior but she thinks it's okay. No one has corrected or called her out on her behavior until Rick came along.

Thanks for reading <3

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 03:15 am
Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for updating this story... I kinda feel for Marva b/c Ronnie almost RAPED her, no one deserves that, but Ronnie has ABUSER written all over his FACE.

Karma in her own way is getting backat Marva for how she treated Rick, he was a TRUE FRIEND to her and b/c she had to be "Popular" she lost him, and now is is all ALONE.

Hurry with more.



Author's Response:

Ronnie definitely showed warning signs but Marva didn't read them correctly.

Thanks for reading <3

 Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 01:49 am
Title: Chapter 8

*CRYING

I am so glad he didn't open the door. He did the right thing because then she would continue to take advantage of his generosity.

 

She needs to deal with this alone. She doesn't deserve him right now; she needs to grow up just a tad bit.

 

I can't wait for the update.

 



Author's Response:

Absolutely. Marva has to grow on her own now. No one can hold her hand. Thanks for reading <3

 Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 12:44 am
Title: Chapter 7

Wow..the entire story got erased at least you had a backup :)

 

She wanted to be popular....well it has it's consequences. She is lucky the girl came in before it got any worse.



Author's Response:

I always have a backup, lol.

True. Funny how she was saved by Rebecca's ill intentions.

 Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 12:39 am
Title: Chapter 8

Wow I can't believe all of that happened in one night. Cute story can't wait for more. PS. no worries we all make mistakes, I made them when I first started writing for this site :) so you're good



Author's Response:

Thanks <3. I like so shocked that I had pressed delete lol.

 Reviewer: JLeshay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 12:37 am
Title: Chapter 8

Great addition. Waiting impatiently for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Next chapters coming up soon.

 Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2011 12:25 am


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