Leslie is so stupid, she really makes my teeth itch. Marco is crazy, if the baby was Blake's then why did he kill Kim? Although I don't miss that ho, but she didn't deserve to die. I can't wait to read more!!! Hopefully the next chapters will be longer. Please!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2011 08:32 am
Marcello is so jealous, he will say anything to turn her against Blake. And anyway when will Blake have time to kill Kim, he was not even angry with, just sad she lost the baby. His mind was always on Leslie. I do have a feeling it was Marcello kill her over the baby. After all he is mafia. I just hope Leslie stay don't do anything stupid, like believe Marcello.
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2011 06:26 pm
nice update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2011 06:43 am
I really don't like Marcello anymore, he's jealous that Blake has Leslie. I really hope that Leslie isn't going to do or say anything stupid but something tells me she will. I want her to maintain her faith and love in Blake. Blake wanted that baby so he would kill Kim, besides they were getting a divorce anyway. Marcello on the other hand was angry because Kim's messed his trying to get Leslie. Marcello is crazy like fox!! Love this update!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2011 05:23 am
I know Marco is hot too but I do hope Leslie won't sleep with him again no matter what happen between her and Blake.
Author's Response:
No no lol not at all
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 17 2011 10:27 am
Wow, Kim is such a bitch!! She had the audacity to call him and tell him that he was the father, so why not have the balls to tell him to his face that she lost the baby. Being a ho is bad enough but being a lying ho is worse!! I am glad that Blake said what he did to her father. Blake deserves to be happy and Leslie makes him happy. I so love the story!
Author's Response:
don't be so quick to call her a bitch...
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 17 2011 07:13 am
Silly people! I'm glad they made up. I do understand Dad's viewpoint. He's just trying to protect his daughter. She will always be his baby girl. Mom seems less emotional. Terrific story.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2011 10:42 pm
great update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2011 10:32 am
Gosh, those two simply look fabulous together !!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 14 2011 07:36 am
It is about that those woke up and smelled the coffee. I hate that the baby died but it was for the best. I still had my doubts that the baby was his, Kim was a liar and can't be trusted. But hey he is free from that ho!!!! Yay
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2011 05:54 am
Oh my goodness finally I was dying :) I just love this story and I'm actually quite interested in the stuff that went down with Kim
P.s if thats you in the very end photo your are gorgeous
Author's Response:
Nooo the actress Marsha Thomson who plays Diane in white collar. she's gorgeous :)
Reviewer: underrestrains Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2011 03:03 am
WTH is wrong with Blake?? Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 07:58 am
A chapter filled with angst! Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 09:10 am
Wondering if mom knows he is interested, and if so why she would ask him to walk her out. He is married after all.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 04:27 am
Marriage must be in the rocks, if he is eyeing another woman.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 04:21 am
Leslie didn't handle that well, Blake has every right to be angry at her. I am wondering if Leslie really knows what she wants. SHe knew that it was a possibility that the baby was his, so I don't understand want her problem is. Hopefully being with her family will help her to know what she wants and if she really wants Blake. I am really not feeling Leslie right now, she is making my teeth itch again.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 04:04 am
So now all of a sudden the baby is his?? Okay!
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2011 04:02 am
Great if only she could give Marco a chance and get Blake out of her system.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2011 08:23 am
I am so feeling Marco more the Blake even with that mafia thing over his head another liar though but I can understand that is not something you tell a woman that you are not in a relationship with as of yet not a serious one anyway they just met and are getting to know one another.
Blake is an asshole and he has no rights over Leslie with his lying ass Leslie is not his assignment Kim is until that assignment is over then he is in the wrong,
I am glad though it is out in the open with his parents.
Loving the story definitely on the Marco team as of now,
Thank you for sharing more please.
Happy writing,
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2011 07:54 am
Interesting story so far. Why is Kim lying to Blake?? Marco has anger issues. He has too much baggage.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 06:49 am
Its getting complicated.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2011 03:16 am
Well the visit with the parents didn't go well. Leslie acted like a brat. Get it straight with your parents, girl. Love the chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 10:48 pm
I was not expecting that and Blake is wrong on 2 counts one for cheating on his wife no matter how bad the relationship is if you are not into anymore get a divorce two not letting Lesile know so she could make that choice to cheat with him or not and get her heart involved.
Great update thank you
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 09:43 pm
I'm sorry but Leslie is such a slut right now. She is not better than Kim. She had sex with Blake while still being with Marco. She even accept to get married while she doesn't love Marco. If she at least has some respect or care for him, she wouldn't have cheated on him or even accept to marry him without being in love.
And Marco doesn't make sense. So he slept with Kim without a condom because she is a slut and wasn't worth it. That is exactly why he should have used one. People use condom to protect them from STD's and unwanted pregnancy. So him telling Leslie that he didn't use a condom with Kim because she wasn't worth it was the stupidest thing I've ever heard!! This just show that Marco is disgusting and beyond stupid.
Date: August 25 2011 11:23 pm
This story took a turn I wasn't expecting. What a mess! Can't wait to see how it is sorted out. Well done!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2011 12:41 am