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Title: Chapter 4- The Longest Day

Two men interested in Leslie. Good except for the secrets. Leslie is too nice of a person but she is going to get hurt. Excited to read the next chapter.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 17 2011 05:00 pm
Title: Chapter 4- The Longest Day

I'm glad she kicked Blake's lying behind to the curb and met Marco.  I can't wait to see who Leslie ends up with.  

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2011 03:19 pm
Title: Chapter 4- The Longest Day

GO MARCO!

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Date: August 17 2011 07:58 am
Title: Chapter 3- Don't Hide From Me

AWWW HELLL, Lesile!!! ***my lost child in the city*** ususally when something is too good to be true...then it is. Blake you (don't know what to do about my bitch of wife..)scourndel. You knew that your ass is fuckin' married!! Now when all of this mess here see the light of day, guess who is gonna get blamed...my girl Lesile...Why isn't his mother concerned about Blake spending all of this time Lesile...that shit seems strange to me. Love it!! Thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 11:40 am
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

It seems to me that he needs to cut his ties with his wife (get a damn DIVORCE!!) cause apparently, the fool ain't happy. He needs to handle that before he do something that's gonna hurt our girl in the process. I'm loving this tale. Thanks for sharing!!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 11:26 am
Title: Chapter 3- Don't Hide From Me

Hmmm, his words should be the clue to her that something's up. She needs to find out more about him before investing anymore of her time. Does his mom suspect anything??? He needs to decide what he wants, her or his marriage?? She's gonna be crushed when she finds out.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 08:16 am
Title: Chapter 3- Don't Hide From Me

Fast but great

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 07:51 am
Title: Chapter 3- Don't Hide From Me

I knew that he was going to sex Leslie up before he told her the truth.  Blake you are so wrong for that, Leslie doesn't know that you are a married.    I don't want to see Leslie get hurt but nothing can stop that now.  Great story.  I can't wait to read more!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 07:16 am
Title: Chapter 3- Don't Hide From Me

Oh Lord. Blake is a azz and Leslie has no clue especially with him not wearing a ring. Even his own mother didnt mention he was married. Cant wait to see what happens.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 06:58 am
Title: Chapter 3- Don't Hide From Me

Blake you messed up. Poor Leslie!

 Reviewer: Reading Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 06:51 am
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

sounds like some drama and future heartbreaking

 Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 02:44 am
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

great

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Date: August 14 2011 08:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

great job....

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 08:16 pm
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

Bring on the next chapter!

 Reviewer: sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 08:22 am
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

WTH is going on here? Hope Leslie finds out more about him before her heart gets broken. He needs to be honest with Leslie and not lead her on!! He's NOT a single man. Are there issues with his marriage???

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 07:08 am
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

Oh Blake is in trouble and his mother isnt helping matters I love it.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 07:03 am
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

Keep it coming. I love the idea.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 07:01 am
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

Ok..first dude's in church eye-ballin' another woman,now he's out on a date with her? The ground might open up and swallow this guy! What's he doing!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 06:30 am
Title: Chapter 2- The Introduction

I like it so far.  I wonder what's up with Blake and his wife.

Please update again soon.

 Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 06:25 am
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

Want more.... LOL!!

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 05:53 am
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

Bryleigh strikes again! Great start!

 Reviewer: Waiting Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 05:09 am
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

Uh oh Blake likes what he sees but he married! Not a good situation. Trouble ahead with a capital T. Good start.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 03:57 am
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

Someone had better tell Leslie that that fool is married, because tells me that he won't.  Why did he marry her if his parents weren't crazy about her?  Just crazy. I can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 01:58 am
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

my girl tika sumpter  is leslie am looking forward to this story keep it coming here we go again  trolling the site or updates cant wait

 Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 01:47 am
Title: Chapter 1- Hello New York

Interesting it starts in a church. I'm curious now.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2011 01:11 am


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