I like this story, but I can't help keep going back to the notion that The Family or their actions are not clear. They are referred, implied, or mentioned that they killed people; are they the mob?
Also, glad the author mentioned a part 2, because it says the story was complete, yet chapter 32 only had pictures (great selections thank you), but I was like "What just happened? This is not the ending." Daniel has to get his, Lorraine has to make up her shittiness to her daughter, and Niamh has to make things right with Blaise. And how Blaise's mistreatment of Niall as a kid never was addressed.
Where do these darn names (Niall, Niamh, and Blaise) come from? And I thought my name was weird as a kid.
Date: July 21 2016 06:41 am
Can I call them both easy because I'm sure after this night its nothing but difficult.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed
[Report This]Date: June 01 2013 10:25 pm
Excellent,
I feel sorry for Blaise...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed
[Report This]Date: February 24 2013 11:00 am
Thank you thank you thank you!!!!
Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2012 02:10 am
Both Niall and Blaise are too fine!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 05:56 pm
Niamh, I see that my opinion of you much too soon. I thought that you were growing in to a much stronger adult but you are only growing more stupid!! I truly hope that Blaise doesn't take her crazy back, her momma the more I read about her the more my teeth start to itch. Niamh, one can never have enough people to love you. Really your brother turned his back on you and your mother has lied to you your whole lie so tell me whose love is detrimental to your existence. Your families or Blaise and his father Joseph. Niamh is just as stupid as Lorraine, they both deserve to grow old alone!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 05:56 pm
Is there a way to fix the broken links for the pics? If not, could you give me the actor/actresses names so I can google them? I am really interested in seeing what the missing characters look like. Great story so far!
Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 07:32 am
Awww I really hope they can work things out in the future.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2012 04:20 pm
I don't understand why she has to put Blaise on hold, but maybe dealing with Daniel, finding out she was the product of rape and hate, and wanting back her family is just too much to handle.
Also the thought of Joseph being her brother's father and Blaise being her brother's sibling is just too much for her to wrap her brain around. Let's not forget her friendship with Daniel's other children and now she has two additional siblings also. Whew! What a mess! And on top of everything else, she's asked to kill her father and save the world. No wonder this girl's head is spinning!
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2012 01:54 pm
Niamh is such a stupid girl. She really frustrate me. And her mother too. I honestly think that she is making a mistake. She is such a weak girl. She can't handle dealing with Blaise while trying to get back with her family. How ridiculous is that. What is so difficult about dealing with Blaise. When you say I love you to someone it means that you want to be with them, that you can't live without them. And if that person loves you back it means the same, and that he will be by your site, support you, be your shoulder to lean on and be a friend when you need one. Its absolutely ridiculous that she is pushing him away because she wants to work on her family first. Why not try to get things to work with your family, while also having Blaise to be there for you for support. She is acting as if he is a thing that she can just put away, and get it back when she wants too. It doesn't work that way. I hope that Blaise will move on and gets a nice girl who is willing to truly love him, get married and have kids. Niamh had her chance and she blew it.
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 07 2012 08:46 am
I will be waiting patiently because that was certainly unsatisfying. Niamh frustrates me so I do hope that the feeling like a I slap so hard that she lands back in her momma's womb alleviates with the sequel.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2012 08:10 am
I love this story. (But you know this already). I can understand when the muse is not being cooperative. I will be patient. LOL
Can't wait for all of this to come to a head!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2012 02:37 am
Yay!!!
Author's Response:
=D
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2012 02:00 am
Love love love the update.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 09:19 pm
Wow! Powerful update. More please!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 12:14 pm
They are asking Niamh to risked her life, I can't wait to read about Daniel's demise!!! I want tht a hole dead!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2012 04:15 am
Wow. I'm on the edge of my seat.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: February 21 2012 12:53 am
So why is Justin following Niamha and Blaise? I really don't understand the lackadasical attitude that Joseph seems to have about this situation. Why is it necessary to use Niamh to get rid of Daniel? Why can't Joseph just kill him or have him killed? Joseph is punk and it's his punkness that has destoryed his family. Love it!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 20 2012 09:47 pm
Excellent as always. I guess Blaise didn't realize that they were being followed. I hope they get into the safety of their bunker before Daniel gets there.
I'm glad that he told Naihm about Daniel. She should know.
thank you thank you for updating. I can't wait to see this play out.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
[Report This]Date: February 12 2012 08:14 pm
Wow, I am glad someone told Niamha that Daniel the asshole was her father!! What more are they going to hit her with? Was her mother Lorraine raped, becasue I hope that she didn't willing give herself to that asshole? I am still not liking Lorraine too much. Thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2012 07:03 am
Wow! A plan...Joseph has a plan....I pray that it works and that it all comes together and that Daniel gets whats coming to him.
I am so on the edge of my seat. Damn! This should be a movie....
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2012 02:19 pm
This is going to be bad, Daniel makes my teeth itch. But Joseph punk ass makes me want to chew on some rusty nails and spit then at him. What does Joseph have planned? It seems that that he has rediscovered his balls, it's about time now that you son involved in this craziness.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2012 05:33 am
Oh I'm on the edge of my seat! I so want Niahm to find out about Daniel being her father, but I don't want her to be hurt. Lorraine,wake up! It wasn't your daughter's fault that you were raped. I know that Lorriane is just trying to deal with all of the pain and betrayal, but her daughter needs her!
How will the poor child feel about being a product of rape, while her brother was a product of love? I can feel everything coming to a head, or is it just my own imagination? LOL. Wonderful story. I was so happy to see the update.
I wait anxiously and patiently for the next installment....
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2012 08:31 pm
Wowww I would've never guessed that they were all related. That's crazy
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2012 07:18 pm
Boy, I so want Daniel to get his! Also I'm a bit confused. In the beginning you said that Naill was the firstborn and then later you said Blaise was the first born. I thought Joe was with Lorriane first and she got pregnant and he found out after her married Blaise's mother and Daniel refused to let him be with Lorraine. Is there some sort of suprise coming? Maybe they both were pregnant at the same time and then Blaise came prematurely???
Now evil Daniel is claiming his daugter to Blaise after he rejected her all this time! I guess he's trying to get under Blaise's skin.
I can't wait for the next installment! Excellent writing.
Author's Response:
Uh oh, did I do that? Hmm I'll have to go back and check up on myself.
My intentions was for Niall to have been conceived during a "Final Tryst" and Niall should be the first born.
Woops.
Thank you for bringing that to my attention =)
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2012 01:15 pm