Reviews For Return To Me
Title: Chapter 9

Nice story. Although very short.
Ahm... and a prologue would be nice.
:)



Author's Response:

Hey kay_dalle,

I'm glad you liked the story. About my story being short, I understand true readers enjoy a story that has length but writing is just a hobby of mine and the chapters you see is whatever pops into my mind for a certain week. My work takes up a lot of my brain power and sometimes it becomes hard to give writing that time when all I want to do is soak my head :-) Thanks for the great review and added suggestion! 

Reviewer: kay_dalle Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 01 2012 08:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

I love this story. Its really hard to find fanfiction with Asian Men/Black Women so its always a treat when you update!

Author's Response:

Hey NikkiHearsAWho,

When I saw the movie I thought thats interesting because its rarely ever shown or even considered. I decided not to read other Mika/Raizo fanfiction so that I wouldn't be influenced. It has been a challenging story for me and one of my readers/reviewers Flame had to inspire me for a time to get back on track but sadly bc of stuff going on in my life I don't have that much energy for it again but I'll try. I've never left a story unfinished so I'll try my best. Thanks for a great review!

Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2012 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Loved it.  I thought the story was "retired".  Oh well I enjoyed reading this installment.



Author's Response:

Hey Qsmommy05,

I had to figure out what retirement meant as well :-) My story was once recommended and now there are new recommendations so the stories that have been recommended has to be retired...I hope I was able to explain. Thanks for enjoying the read!

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Raizo admitted that he loves him Mika, alrighty then!!!  More please!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

Yes and that professing of his love showed a lot to Mika even though there was some hesitation on her part. Thanks very much for your awesome review! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 8

Great update! I really love this story:-)



Author's Response:

Hey kwajeraspen,

Thanks so much! I try my best to push across a good chapter that my readers will enjoy although I know they may complain about the length of time between my updates...LOL!!! Once again thanks! I really appreciate your review!

Reviewer: kwajeraspen Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2012 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Can I just say that I love Rain?  I love Rain that man is twelve kinds of fine!!!  I am so glad that Raizo made up his minds to stick around for Mika.  I am so happy that Raizo saved all of those babies.  Ecxellent update!!



Author's Response:

Pmgayles does Bi Rain know all your thoughts about him...LOL!! Still I do enjoy reading them...LMAO!!! Although I have to mention that you are very low in the rating of his finest...LOLLLLL!!! 

In the beginning it was easy for him to take a step back from Mika but not now - she has captured a major part of his heart. I felt Rai had to be the one to find them and this chapter proved to be the perfect opportunity. Thanks for your awesome review!

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2012 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Chocolate

Great update. I love how you are incorporating certain scenes from the movie into the story.  I cannot wait to read the thought swirling around in Rai's head. 



Author's Response:

Hey Qsmommy05,

Sometimes I do that intentionally because at certain points I want my readers to have a little visualization of our couple. Raizo does have many thoughts swirling around in that handsome head of his...:-) He has a hard time sharing but Mika has a way of dragging it out of him. I really appreciate your reading of my fanfic and submitting a review. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2012 05:41 pm

Title: Chapter 7

As always a great update.

Now why does Mika not want to tell her boss the information.  There has to be a good gut feeling.

I hope they find these children soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Moni!

It is definitely a gut feeling on Mika's part not to reveal the information to Ryan. Right now her mind is saying that Raizo has the best chance of finding the children given his background. So far Europol hasn't been able to even with his assistance. Again thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2012 03:01 pm

Title: Chapter 7

My brain is mush from reading this story starring Rain, he don't know it but he's my husband!!!  I love me some Rain!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

LNAO!!! All I can say is maybe he is aware of it subconsciously since he may be starring in quite a few of your dreams...wifey...LOLLLL!!! Happy you are enjoying the fanfic and thanks for the awesome review!!!

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2012 07:18 am

Title: Chapter 6

I love this couple!!! These last two chapters were HOTTTT! Please update soon

Author's Response:

Hey vmck

I love them too! :-) Wish we had more of them in the movie. I wish they made a sequel but you remember that old saying "if wishes were horses all of us would ride" so I guess at times all we have are the fanfics. Glad you enjoyed our hot couple :-) Have a happy and blessed 2012! 

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Hope you had a great Christmas as well.

I enjoyed the update?   Can Ryan really be trusted?



Author's Response:

Hey Moni!

Consididering everything that was going on, I had a great and blessed Christmas thanks for asking! I also want to say thanks for your awesome review! Glad you enjoyed the update. This writer is keeping her mouth closed regarding Ryan ;-) Have blessed and wonderful 2012!  

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 12:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I'm worried about Mika and Raizo.  I don't trust Ryan; he seems really shady.  They need to watch out for him...  Happy New Year!!



Author's Response:

Hey dcphoenix1,

With regards to Ryan, "Mums" the word :-). Thanks for sharing your review with me and giving me such an awesome rating. Happy New Year to you as well and I pray that you have a great 2012!

 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 06:27 am

Title: Chapter 5

***NEW READER***

 

OMGosh this story is the BOMB! First & Foremost I just want to say that this chocolate girl right here LOVES her some Bi Rain!! Lmaoo Every since I've seen Ninja Assassin, I can't get enough of this guy. And once I found out just how talented he was, he caught my attention more than just looking sexy as ever in the film (Not to mention, he was in the film with a SISTAH..Lmaoo That's what really hooked me!) However, I just wanted to tell you that I love your story! I can understand Mika's feelings in the beginning when it came to Raizo. Even though they knew each other in a short amount of time, they had to endure so much TOGETHER in a short amount a time. And what woman in their right mind could forget a guy who drop lines like "Your heart is special" when the guy didn't even know her from his next door neighbor? Not even the smoothiest foo with the hottest game would use that line (I don't believe) Lol So I definitely understand her yearning to reconnect with him.

Now Raizo, I sympathis with what he is going through as well. He really doesn't know how to place his emotions when it comes to matters of the heart because of his horrible upbringing. But even through all that, his emotions aren't completely lost and Mika brings it out of him. He probably just didn't know how to handle it because he hasn't felt that way since Kirko which he expressed to Mika. So hopefully, they both work through it.

But they sure as hell worked the hell out on the dresser Lmaoo girl I was over her like YEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Rain look some damn good in that photo wooo...

I know things might get tricky with this case. I can't wait to find out what happens next, and how Mika & Raizo will handle things. Keep up the excellent writing & I hope you don't end this too soon!!

--Jay



Author's Response:

Hey Hey my inkpen leaks,

This chocolate girl over here feels the same way too LOL!!! I absolutely dig both of them in Ninja Assassin and my brain instantly started working on a concept along certain lines that the story didn't want to touch. I sort of lost my way (which sometimes happens) but one my reviewer Flame help me sort out some things. I'm back on track although bc of preparing for the christmas and work this next chapter has been a total grind (don't worry I know what I want to write, I'm so tired putting pen to paper.) I hope it doesn't take until January to put up the next chapter, heaven forbid lol!

Back to Raizo - thats one sexy, delicious Asian dude and I couldn't resist adding that image. He must barely walk the streets LMAO!!! Glad you like the little sex scene I incorporated those two deserve a little action LOL!!!

Thanks so much for writing such an introspective review. I fully enjoyed reading all your thoughts and I'm also happy that your mind is immerse in my little story. As for ending it soon, I'll see where my mind takes me. Thanks! 

Reviewer: my inkpen leaks Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2011 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 1

Love it!



Author's Response:

Hey Monique!

Thanks for leaving such an awesome review! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 12:50 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Ahh is that even a question. The pics were HOTT!! Definitely appropriate. If I was with Rain at that moment he would be jumped no questions asked. Lol. I loved the chapter their finally moving forward. And maybe it's just me but I don't think they need all the pet names. But otherwise I'm totally happy and can't wait for another update. Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Hey Flame!

Believe it or not (I hope u do lol) I was reflecting on the same thing regarding the pet names (cheesy right lol) but Mika calling him Raizo all the time was totally bugging the hell outta me. Of course I love the way he says Mika ( I melt) but I don't know maybe I need to find another name...I'll think about it.

When I first came across those pics I thought about you. Maybe it was bc you commented on the pic I added the last time. Like I told another reviewer, every time I see Rain and that body I'm like HIYAH YAH! Get me something cold bc I need to cool down...LOL!!

As always thanks Flame. You've helped me a great deal and thanks for the awesome review! 

Reviewer: Flame Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 10:04 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I don't know about anyone else, but i'm liking it.  Keep up the good work.  The pictures are an added bonus.

 



Author's Response:

Hey kimyso,

Wonderful that you are enjoying my story. I couldn't resist adding those pics and I wish I could find some more but ah well...we'll see ;) Thanks for adding your awesome review!

Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2011 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 5

Excellent chapter! Loved the lovin'....
Hope u feel better

Author's Response:

Thanks vmck for wishing me well and I'm so grateful that you loved my chapter and considered it exellente! Makes me feel like yah I did good by my readers this chapter. Once again THANKS!

 

Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 06:54 pm

Title: Chapter 5

They did the do and it was good. Good, golly Miss Molly I love me some Rain!!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

Yep! You took the words right out of my mouth. Everytime I see a pic of this guy I'm like blown away with the way he takes great care of his body and I hope he's keeping up with it...lol! Thanks for such an awesome review!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 5

Yes, I enjoyed.  Wish it was longer.

Hope you get better.



Author's Response:

Hey Moni,

Thanks for enjoying my little story lol! Right now with this fanfic I find that I'm tiptoeing back into Valent Chamber and that feeling of wanting to write again and enjoying it. Thats my explanation and I'm sticking to it...LOL! Once thanks for the awesome review and for wishing me well. Yes I am feeling a bit better even though sometimes I think the weather is conspiring against me..lol but what can you do but press forward.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 06:29 am

Title: Chapter 4

Love Mike and Raizo....can't wait to read more.....



Author's Response:

Hey kwajeraspen,

I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story and also glad that you love our couple. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Reviewer: kwajeraspen Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 12:48 pm

Title: Chapter 4

This is such a good read!!! I hope there is much more cos i would love to read!!!

 

A new fan,

Kim



Author's Response:

Hey kimyso my new fan!

Ahhh... you touch my heart! Thanks for such an awesome review of my story and I'm grateful and appreciative that you are enjoying it so far.  

 

Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2011 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 4

OMG LOVED IT!!!! Sorry I've been incog-negro the last few days and now got to read your update. And whoohee child, it was HOTT. After all the sexual repression they went through it's about time they did something. But of course ever the honest Raizo couldn't let it go too far. I still love him though.

There is something I thought I should mention. I doubt you even thought about it, its such a small note. But Raizo didn't wear cologne or scents that can be tracked. If you recall in the movie( I watched it recently) he told her not to use scented soap or perfume because the ninja's could smell her. However things have changed and he's gotten rid of his enemies, and the people he works for are clearly too inept to actually know or do something about that. So I'm assuming he let a few lifestyle markers go from his previous life. So I'm definitely looking for more! Like loosening up those buttons!!! hehe

Anyway I really like what you did with this chapter in showing more of thier personalities. I'm definitely connecting to them more and gosh I feel sorry for Mika, things don't come easy for her do they? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I can't wait for more, love the picture at the end btw it was a nice touch. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Flame and I really mean from the bottom of my heart!

That's the one part of his character I couldn't let go of and I felt that even through all that sexual heatttt that he would want to come clean with Mika. He's putting it all on the line for a future with her without any secrets between them. 

That part about the cologne I thought about it real long and hard. I took out the sentence then put it back in - I did this about a couple of times. Indeed I thought about scene between them but like you said this gang isn't as sophisticated as the Ozuno clan was and they are trying to build themselves up into a formidable organization - they need Raizo's ingenuity in order to do so. As you can see Raizo is frustrated by them and their ineptitude....LOL. Of course I want to loosen him a little for Ms. Mika. Don't remind about that chest of his...Lawdie put out the fire...LMAO!!

I read what you told me the last time about giving them more depth and I'm trying so thanks for the compliment. Mika is like many women that I interact with on a daily basis, nothing ever comes easy for them and they have to fight everyday to take care of themselves and their families. I believe I incorparated a little of these women into Mika's character.

As for the picture, sometimes I feel like I need one to give my readers an idea of what these two people might be going through. Its great when you can find a good picture but its good when you can create one using photoshop. Still heartbroken that my last CPU crashed and I lost all my creations :-(  LOL! I'll survive.

Thanks for such a wonderful review! You're awesome! 

 

 

Reviewer: Flame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2011 07:50 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Did you really just stop a sex scene? Hurry up with the next chapter so I can see how all this stuff is going to come together.



Author's Response:

Yeah I really did guitarlovechild...stop a sex scene...sorry...LOLL!!!

I had it all drawn together in my mind but I thought... hold on one minute - the Raizo I know wouldn't keep Mika in the dark about his life even if his sexual urgings was pushing him forward. Raizo has always been honest with Mika and considers her a very special person in his life and he has had just a couple of people that have really touched his heart - Kiriko and now Mika. Thanks for the great review and I'm sure I'll make it up to you...LMAO!!

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 05:37 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I love this story...keep writing you are doing an excellent job.

I am glad he is confessing.  I can't wait for them to consumate their relationship, however, it is already emotionally.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks Moni!

At times it has been hard writing this story (you can ask Flame) and I needed some encouragement to continue. The movie has always been one of my favorites so I was very surprised when I was having a hard time after chapter 2. I love this couple and I want to give my readers a good incite into what they might be going through. Sometimes I need to dig deeper which makes me very happy when I hear reviews like yours that say I'm doing an excellent job. More than anything I love and appreciate the authors who share their stories those fans who take the time out to read and love our stories. Thanks for the awesome review! 

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I am so excited, you updated one of my favorite stories!!!  Raizo is still hot as ever and they were about to get their groove on and he ruined it.    Raizo sex first, confession later!!!  Mika is going to love you no matter what!!!  I am looking forward to the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

LOL!...I was truly laughing at your sex first, confession later statement. I felt that Raizo is an honest type who wouldn't want to lead Mika on. Of course he's a MAN with all his sexual appetites...lol but he also really cares about her. Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 05:05 am



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