Reviews For Victim of the Fall
Title: Flock of Birds

Oh I am so sorry to hear that, and I hope you will get well soon. Take your time, we'll be waiting when you are ready to come back. Don't rush it, we understand.



Author's Response:

Thanks pretty eyes, cant wait to catch up on your stuff too!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2012 09:46 am

Title: Flock of Birds

I obviously don't know you from Cain.  However,  I'm glad that you shared what was going on.  Not out of salacious curiosity but so I can send you blessings, hopes for speedy recovery and healing.  Take care of yourself....



Author's Response:

Aww thanks pinklemonade! I appreciate that!

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 07:28 am

Title: Flock of Birds

I like!

Reviewer: FranklinsMuse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 10:10 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

I want more.  I love your poetic writing.  *sigh*

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 01:08 am

Title: Flock of Birds

Glad you are back.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 08:43 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

I will always love this story!  Simply beautiful! So glad to see it back on the site!  Update SOON!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much pimpernel hun, I plan on updating soon, working on the chapter now.

Reviewer: S.Pimpernel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2011 11:20 am

Title: Flock of Birds

Lovin this!

Reviewer: Sure_Thang Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2011 05:31 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

This is and awesome story.  I have been reading since you first posted.  Unfortionally Dana and Andrew's story is all to real, but something has to give.  I believe that Andrews girlfriend knows something is up with him because of the on again, off again affair that she  has and the fact that she has never demanded Andrew set a date for the wedding just shows you that she is okay with the way things are.  Now Dana and Andrew will have to piss or get off the pot!  What will happen if Dana gets pregnant?  Since Andrew doesnt like using condoms with Dana, do you think that maybe is what he wants, that way the decision is made for him.  It is clear that he doesnt want to let her go!  I believe that they love each other.  Now Mimi had ever right to tell Dana what she did, if a friend cant be truthful with you who can.  I know it sounded a little hard but Mimi only said what she did because she loves her like a sister.  I also think its time for Dana to be happy and girl let that man do you orally!!  Of course there is something from her pass that is holding her back.  Dana let go and be free enjoy your life with the man you love and that is Andrew!!

Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2011 07:33 am

Title: Flock of Birds

I read all thirteen chapters in one night. This story is hot, and also very realistic. I love it. I hope you finish it. I check every day to see if it's updated. <3



Author's Response:

Wow, that's awesome! Thank you heaps Mariah! I will try to add as soon as I can, once my net situation is fixed.

Reviewer: Mariah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 07:30 am

Title: Flock of Birds

Loved the last chapter... Simply perfection. I like that Dana got out her feeling in one than another... I'm starting to understand her vunrability more. Oh and thanks for the added pic of Phillip I now see how attractive he really is. The first pic I thought he was ugly, LOL But I ran with it and as I read more he became more attractive to me.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you pretty eyes! I updated the picture of andrew and dana cause in part two a bit of time has passed since their first encounter which is 2003. Not many years but just a couple. I'm glad you noticed the topic on his looks, I didn;t want a traditional handsome guy, i wanted someone a bit rough looking. Thank you for the wonderful review and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 02:28 am

Title: Flock of Birds

Great story.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Update has been added, thank you kaye!

Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2011 08:45 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

You mentioned you never wrote a sex scene before. I surly couldn't tell. You did a amazing job... The literotica comment LOL The thing I liked is that you made the scene classy and I didn't finish like I just fucked the characters myself. Like I said you made it classy and left a little mystery behind it too. LOVED it. Now I'm curious to what will happen since they didn't use protection.

Oh and by the way the picture in chapt 7 so beautiful. I like how you ran with the imagination of it being a nude painting. Very clever.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much sweetie, Im so glad you liked it. I was actually worried it would be too graphic or crude so Im glad it didn't come across that way. Im uncomfortable with sex scenes but im hoping practice makes perfect lmao.

I'm glad you liked the picture, i did too. Seeing the picture alone inspired that chapterm, I love my visuals lol.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2011 10:20 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

I guess the rude person that came to you like that was probably mad because you used Aaliyah's face as one of the characters. I'm guessing, and they may feel that if a form of disrespect. But hey its a great story and this is a fanfiction site. That person obviously doesn't know what Fanfiction means. If they don't like it than they shouldn't read it. Don't let anyone discourage you from doing something just because they don't like it.

Bottom line is you have a good story here and you are very talented. And I don't care if you use Aaliyah or shrek I"m still going to read you're story because its the BOMB DOT COM and like I said if a person doesn't like it, then don't read it.



Author's Response:

Hey pretty eyes, you are right it was to do with my casting mainly. But the thing is, all my characters in all of my stories are flawed people. I used the previous casting in a drug addiction story and scrapped it when I got the same complaint on the forum. I'm not using their actual names or real lives so I didn't understand why people took issue with it.

I will keep writing this though, thank you so much!

Reviewer: Pretty eyes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2011 02:27 am

Title: Flock of Birds

Please do not pay any attention to the people that are trying to bring you down cause Honey your story is amazing! I hope you feel better to continue this story because I defiantly want you to, I need to know what happens! please update soon. xo

Author's Response:

Don't worry Catherine I've decided to keep going, thank you for the support!

Reviewer: Catherine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 09:24 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

This is a very well written fic. i am enjoying very much so sorry to hear that some asshat wrote You telling You , that you should be ashamed of Your story...Fuckem is all ii have to say do your thing and keep up the good work. can't wait to read more chapters there are so many ways you can go with this. i will be here with bells on to read ur work and review ,review ,review ...thank you for the chance to read your inner thoughts i for one like your style now ....on with the show :P cyn~



Author's Response:

Thank you so much cynn, your words have made my day!

Reviewer: cynn333 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2011 08:22 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

Great start! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Krsitin, I am glad you like it :D

Reviewer: Kristin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 19 2011 06:09 am

Title: Flock of Birds

Great start. Interested in reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2011 05:24 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

strong intro! love to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2011 04:12 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

beautiful start starring beautiful people. i don't know how but there's something about this story...i'll back and look forward to the read, thank you!  

Author's Response: Thank you Cassius! I hope you continue to read and enjoy :)

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2011 03:34 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

Nice start up, not sure what this story is about yet. But I love the pics *bittersweet face* and the prologue was good. I can't wait to know more :)

Author's Response: All will be revealed in time :D hehe thank you sweetlooking!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 23 2011 01:58 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

Great start!

Please continue!!!



Author's Response: Definetely will, I've had this story in my head for quite a while. Thank you gardenia!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2011 01:14 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

wondering if he feels the same way towards her...sure left me wondering.

awaiting an update

Author's Response: I'll continue to update regularly, thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2011 01:06 pm

Title: Flock of Birds

The Prologue has peaked my interest and I have somany questions. Just gonna sit back and watch this unfold. Hope you update often. *look at me, you just got started and I'm already demanding*

Author's Response: I'm glad you are being demanding, Im going to need it so I can stay on track. Thank you Bella!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 23 2011 10:59 am



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