Reviews For Victim of the Fall
Title: Capture

Dana,leave Mr. Hot and Cold alone...He's just yanking your chain!!! lol

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 05:47 pm

Title: Capture

Interesting update.

Author''s Response:

Thank you Baha! :D

', '2011-04-29 00:13:09', 9, '1', 'ST'), (74456, 1882, 12576, 'Crazykee', 0, '

I am loving this, cant wait to see what happens during the photo shoot :)



Author''s Response:

Thank you Crazykee, will add very soon!

', '2011-04-29 15:04:12', -1, '1', 'ST'), (74765, 1882, 12577, 'intellectual titmouse', 727, '

i think this was a pretty successful chapter. tons of tension. i''m lying in wait, though it''s so wrong for these two to hook up!



Author''s Response:

Thank you for the review intellectual titmouse! I agree with you.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2011 03:38 am

Title: Capture

i swear, andrew comes off as an ass more often than not.



Author''s Response:

lol he does, doesn''t he? Thank you grumpirah!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2011 02:34 am

Title: Capture

okay. that was terrible.

rn

BECAUSE YOU STOPPED THERE!!!!

rn

how dare you?! LoL Andrew''s got it bad and i can give a guess as to what pushed him to this point (considering what you so successfully relayed), but . . . calling her out of the blue and barking at her for some bs photoshoot? smh. terrible, my dude.

rn

i love, love, love this story so far and cannot wait for more updates. thanks so much for sharing this!



Author''s Response:

lol Im sorry mouse :p I hope the next add pleases you, and I''m glad you''re enjoying it. Thank you so much for the support!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2011 12:17 am

Title: Capture

I started to read it today and I realy like it... hope u will uplaod soon



Author''s Response:

Thank you lacky, Im glad you''re liking it!

Reviewer: lacky Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2011 11:53 pm



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