Reviews For Victim of the Fall
Title: Constraints

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Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 05:23 pm

Title: Constraints

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Dana is kind of weird. Why doesn''t she like oral sex? There must be something wrong.

I do not approve of what Dana is doing, but Mimi has no right to judge her. She was kind of a bad friend to her right now. And Dana is right Mimi is noisy as hell and she should mind her own business. Dana doesn''t have to tell her every single thing about her life. She deserved her privacy. I''m not saying that Mimi should encourage what she is doing. She has the right to give her opinion and tell her that what she is doing is wrong. However the way she is doing it is very judgmental. More than her friend she acts like she is Dana''s mother and that Dana has to ask her for her permission if she wants to do something.

Seriously Mimi really pissed me off in this chapter. I was glad that Dana fought back. She shouldn''t feel sorry for the way she countered Mimi, because she was clearly out of line. A real friend would never treat you like that. And what she told Dana about her parents was very low.



Author''s Response:

I agree with you, thank you so much for the great review!

Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 04 2011 06:38 am

Title: Constraints

Poor Dana...she''s in a really tough spot, but she did get herself into it...it''ll be interesting to see if Andrew steps up and finally does the right thing.  It seems he is just as invested in Dana as she is in him, so I''m not sure what''s holding him back...he really doesn''t seem to care for Ingrid at all.

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Looking forward to the next update whenever you get back; have fun with the family!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2011 05:55 am

Title: Constraints

Dana is heading for heartache and trouble. Andrew is a dog for messing around with her when he''s involved with someone else.

Dana treated Mimi terribly. As her friend she told her what she believed in but Dana didn''t want to hear it but to throw her friendship away because of Andrew!! SAD!!! Hope she doesn''t regret it!!!

Author''s Response:

I''m sure it will be sorted :) thank you baha!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2011 04:26 am



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