I understand, but school is much more important!
Thank you for understanding pmgayles. I think that when I finally do update, I will post two at a time. At least for my first time back, since I've made you all wait so long.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/12 07:37 am
Great start. I really dont like Johnny and feel very sorry for Brie life on a spiral heading for diaster. But first we need to find the root of the problem.
That will all become evident soon. Thank you so much for the review.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/11 09:29 pm
Brielle is stupid, It makes me wonder what other crazy thing that she has gotten herself in. Her parents are acting like she was the one drinking and driving. It hurts my heart to read a story where young people are so stupid and have no conscience of how the decisions that they make now will affect their future. So sad!!
I'm glad that you're just as irritated in her as I am. She really is annoying to write and I honestly wouldn't know how to if I hadn't known people like her when I was younger. She will soon be on a road to redemption though. I promise you, so stay tuned.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/11 08:14 pm
The stupidiy of children! Bri needs help, she is lost. She allows Johnny to use her for sex, Johnny ain't cute to me. So I sm not seeing theatraction. Caleb, poor Johnny ain't gay sweetheart you don't stand a chance! Can't wait as it to read more although I hope to see thses charactrts grow.rr
You said it perfectly. These kids are seriously lacking in the common sense department. However, they wouldn't really be teenagers if they weren't. They'll grow, especially Bree. Just wait and see. And as for what everyone sees in Johnny, well he's like that guy (and everyone knows someone like this) who isn't really attractive and doesn't have a good personality, but still manages pull in women. I've never understood this either, but stay tuned to watch it unfold.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/11 09:12 am