Title: Chapter 3 "The Silver Apples of the Moon, the Golden Apples of the Sun"

stiill beautiful

Reviewer: helaine2 able Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 10:46 pm

Title: Chapter 2 "Suddenly the World"

beautiful  story i love the story

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

So good! I look forward to more! And yes! A magic reveal to Gwen! I am glad she is so quick on the up take.



Author's Response:

Haha yea I always wished the show would've let Gwen in on Merlin's secret: it just seemed natural, what with them being friends and so close to Arthur. But I guess that would require the show writers to give more development and screen time to a woman **eyeroll**

Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: Candace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 29 2012 05:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1 "All my Dreams Come Back to Me"

Uther is a prick!

Why did Igraine married him again?  

Poor ARWEN!  Please bring them back together soonnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: clarencestew14 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 06:53 am

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Arthur has guts!  He stood up for Gwen when Uther insulted her!  Thank goodness he believes in Gwen's virtue!  Will he always have faith in her and them though?  Guess only time will tell!  Hope Arthur will never disappoint or hurt Gwen?  

What is it that Morgause has against Uther to warrant her to corrupt Morgana and steal her away?  Arthur is right!  There is more to this enigma than Uther is telling!

Is Gwen clairvoyant?  Can she sense magic around her?  Merlin must have told her his secret.  If only Arthur would trust Merlin like she does!

I fear for Gwen's safety not just because she's a witch, but because of what Melwas might do to her!  Wonder if Gwen could frighten him to believe she was a dangerous and powerful sorceress so he'll keep his distance away from her?

How soon will ARWEN reunite again?  In a few years' time?  Or will some unforeseen events compel Gwen to leave her kingdom and travel to Camelot?  

That was the saddest ARWEN goodbye moment!  Arthur longed to stay, but since they're destined to be together then Fate will work its miracles!  

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah Arthur's coming into his own and realizing who he is, and what he wants for himself :) I'm glad you noticed that.

Thank you as always for reviewing. Your words and details are deeply, deeply appreciated!

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 06:49 am

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Well the last chapter left us on a bit of a cliffhanger and this one is just leaving me wanting more. As always you're writing is lovely and evocative. And I am already eager for Arthur and Guinevere's reunion.



Author's Response:

I always look forward to your comments :) Thank you for your regular reviews, they are deeply appreciated!

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 09:15 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Love me some Merlin. This is an excellent story. Thanks so much for sharing your talents! I'll be waiting on the next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review! It means a lot <3

Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 02:17 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

What a sorrowful ending. Everyone hurt, everyone frightened, everyone concerned. 

I am lookng forward to part 2. 

Thanks for allowing Merlin to share his secret with Guinevere. I wonder how Morgana came to know? Will we perchance have a "flashback"?



Author's Response:

Was it Morgana who called him Emrys? Or was it the demon-child? ;) Hehehe all shall be revealed...in time. Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: sallysparrow3 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 08:51 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

AMAZING!! i am a huge fan of A&G and i have loved reading this 

Am now a huge, following fan of your work.. cant wait for more!!! 



Author's Response:

Awww thanks hun! Your words are deeply appreciated <3

 

Reviewer: Teges Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 12:57 pm

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

Fantastic chapter! 

I really hate Uther right now! 

What a sweet moment between Arthur and Gwen! Perfect! *.* aww.. a ring!! :O and it was his mother's! 

I wonder when they'll see each other again? hope veeeeeeeeerrrry sooon! :) 

 

Can't wait for the next installment! I really like your story! :) 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you likd the ARWEN moment! :) Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: guen_evere Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 09:39 am

Title: Chapter 14 "Neither Have I Wings To Fly"

yay... So sad.:( ... I'm really really worry to gwen safety and please dont let melwas force gwen to marry him. Thanks so much for you're wonderful part one. Hoping part two very soon. He he he. I wish you are very well now and no more sickness to come. Lol. xxx

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm feeling much better! Me and the hubby are both relaxing at home, recovering :) Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2012 04:31 am

Title: Chapter 13 "The Golden Witch"

Tense confrontation between Morgause/Uther, Morgana/Gwen, Morgause/Gwen....interesting chapter. A lot happened. Keep it coming!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Elle Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 20 2012 09:35 pm

Title: Chapter 13 "The Golden Witch"

My goodness, this was certainly an explosive chapter.  But stupid question...who is Aili? Was she the midwife?

Where is Arthur?  Why did Melwas and Uther come to the cottage? Is the other woman, the one who has been watching and who Gwen has caught glimpses of, Morgause? I have questions!

I'm also personally offended on Gwen's behalf by the demon child's insults of whore and slut, lol.  You'd think the little brat would be grateful that Gwen was aiding in his birth. :)  Then again, perhaps Angelica's concoction wasn't meant to aid, but to kill or other incapacitate. 

Poor Gwen - still trying to help Morgana, and clearly in over her head.  Glad Merlin was there.  

So is Morgana's child to be Mordred?

Great update!



Author's Response:

Aili is Gwen's handmaiden: she doesn't appear much but she features a tiny bit in some of the earlier chapters.

I'm so glad yo enjoyed this update, it was a difficult chapter to write not the least because I have no experience in midwifery :p

Your questions will be answered soon :)

Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2012 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 13 "The Golden Witch"

How many women did Arthur fancied before Guinevere?  Whether he's worthy of Gwen's love or not depends on his belief in the sanctity of the marriage vows.

Reviewer: darkbeauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2012 07:26 am

Title: Chapter 13 "The Golden Witch"

Why did Melwas show up with Uther?  Has he been spying on Guinevere?  Arthur better wise up and man up to thrash the hell out of Melwas for thinking of harming the woman he has grown to love!

How does Uther knows Morgause?  There are secrets even Uther hides from Arthur.  Will Arthur pried them from Uther?  

How dare Morgause insult Guinevere!  Guinevere will never betray (she'd better not) Arthur, the man she has developed feelings for (hopefully)!  

Does Morgana actually knows what she's doing?  She doesn't sound like she is in possession of her own faculties!  Has Morgause corrupted her completely?

Will Gwen learn about Merlin's magic?  Will she keep it secret or reveal it to Arthur?  Arthur has to learn that not all magic is evil!  Will he be present to witness the good magic can do?

More ARWEN scenes please... caressing Guinevere's cheek was just too soothingly romantic!  



Author's Response:

"Guinevere will never betray (she'd better not) Arthur, the man she has developed feelings for (hopefully)! "

Nope, she won't! You're pretty safe in assuming that :)

Thanks again for a lovely, detailed review. :) 

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2012 07:21 am

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

Is Morgause this blonde woman who keeps tormenting Guinevere?  Why is she so intent on harming Gwen?  

How long could ARWEN contain their passion?  Is Arthur worthy of Gwen's love?  



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! :) How long can they contain their passion? I barely managed to keep them contained in this chapter :p hehehe
Is Arthur worthy of Gwen's love? Hmm...what do you think? :)

Reviewer: darkbeauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2012 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

That was some ARWEN hotness!  It's tragic to see them pine and long for each other but are unable to be together because too many impediments stand in their way!  Too bad Uther will never approve of Arthur marrying a foreign princess since he believes she carries the legacy of magic in her blood!  Will ARWEN fight for their love though?  If they do, the obstacles will be many and they will start with Morgana, Morgause, and the Dark Fire!

Who is this Dark Fire entity?  Why was Morgana chosen to beget this demon child?  Does Gwen believes she can save her friend even if the darkness has taken over her soul?  Why isn't Gwen blessed with divine powers to combat the future evil which will threaten Albion?  

Thank goodness ARWEN are communicative and share some confidences with each other!  Since they are destined to be one for the other then no secrets should be kept between them!  Guinevere could teach Arthur things aren't all black and white and he shouldn't see them in that perspective.  

Does Merlin feel the presence of evil surrounding Morgana as well?  What does he thinks of her pregnancy?  



Author's Response:

Thanks Lara! Your reviews always make me smile :) Readers like you keep me going! 

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2012 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

wow, chapter 12 amazing chapter. Again fave Chapter of mine. Thank you so much... I'm happy and satisfied. Lol. xxx

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2012 10:48 pm

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

You're writing as always is lovely and evocative. The relationship you are building between Arthur and Gwen is beautiful and sweet. The way that they are moving forward and holding back creates wondeful tension.  I feel sorry for Morgana she seems destined to be both tooll and villian in modern takes on the legend.



Author's Response:

Thank you as always for your lovely review!  :) It means a  lot coming from a fellow writer!

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2012 06:46 pm

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

I really don't have the words to say how much I loved this chapter. The mix of fear, humor, sensuality, lust,,,, it was all there and it was perfect. I loved it it all. Truly an excellent update. 

 

Any future references to Arthur's jaw line? That is my favorite feature on Bradley....

 

 



Author's Response:

Awww **blush** thank you so much! Yknow, I was just thinking to myself that I haven't included enough appreciation of Arthur's jawline. Great Arwen minds think alike! There's just so much to admire on both of them...the pretty is off the charts :)
Glad you liked and thank you so much for your wonderful review!

Reviewer: sallysparrow3 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2012 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

Loved it! Their flirtation was really, really cute. Keep it comin'!

Reviewer: Elle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2012 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

Another great chapter. The Arthur/Gwen moment was amazing.

Cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 

Reviewer: rallitsa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2012 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 12 "And By Candlelight"

Loved the Gwen & Arthur interaction!  These two are so hot together...too bad they had to come to their senses:)

Oh, Morgana...it'll be interesting to see what happens with the creature she is carrying...scary stuff...

Looking forward to the next update already:)



Author's Response:

Haha agreed about the hotness! As I was writing I just wanted them to keep going :p then I remembered the plot and was like ok kids, break it up. 

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2012 10:15 am

Title: Chapter 11 "The Darkness Will Rise from the Deep"

yay,chapter 11 another Arwen momenT.thank you,thank you. You makes my dAy bright. Nooo,arthur going? When Arthur going,merlin is with him? How about gwen left alone with morgana? I'm worried now for gwen. I hope gwen is strong enough to defenD herself. If morgana has morgause, gwen can she get Angelica?lol... Just only my idea in my head cause is unfair. xxx

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review! Don't worry, there's plenty more ARWEN moments coming :)

Reviewer: arthurgwen2010 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 09:47 pm

Title: Chapter 11 "The Darkness Will Rise from the Deep"

I adore your story!

Cant wait for more Arwen moments.



Author's Response:

Awww thank you! :) The next chapter is pretty Arwen-esque so far :)

Reviewer: rallitsa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 10 2012 05:32 pm



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