Title: Chapter 6

A steamy kiss with a attrative man may be awkward but in this case I would probably to the same. A day of bonding between two sex driven adults is what i call a sweet treat. I am glad that she finally said yes to Kei athough she said it would be on her terms. At the end if the day, she is still a woman with needs. Eva and her sexual hiatus are no match for the Sexy Kei. For a man near his fifties he sure is sexy. I literally read this chapter in no time at all. You are a literary genuis with a great taste in music.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I am having so much fun with Eva and Kei and even though this is a rewrite/re-edit, I never quite know what these two are going to do next.  I hope by the end I'll have made more metal fans out of the readers!

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2012 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 6

So...I was recommended to this story because as most people know I am a lover of all things BWAM related. Hahaha but I honestly was a little leery because I'm not into jpop/rock or visual Keith or anything. However I would like to tell you, I'm now hooked! Kei has that androgynous/vampiric vibe that is so sexy to me on the right guy. In my head I see him as kind of a long haired Japanese version of lestat or something. It's hard to explain. At any rate I want to let you know, I hope you update soon! Love, Love, Love this!



Author's Response:

Yay, another BW/AM lover!  When I started writing this for NaNoWriMo last year, Kei was indeed a Visual Kei guitarist (and some of those bands I really love, especially the harder stuff) but after a time, that didn't really suit the kind of story I wanted to tell.  Making him and the band American fit better and that way, they can also misbehave in ways the more rigidly controlled Japanese artists wouldn't be able to.  I love your description of Kei; I never really thought of it.  He's modeled after Sugizo from Luna Sea/X-Japan with touches of the smouldering Atsushi Sakarai from Buck-Tick as well as Michael Romeo of Symphony X.  I really am a huge metal fan and my significant other is in a metal band, so if I don't get it right, he'll let me know, LOL.  Chapter seven is going up now.  Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2012 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 6

When they get down and do the nasty it will be hot!!!!    I love Kei, he is so sexy.  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

LOL, I think so too.  Kind of looking forward to that chapter :-)  Thank you for the feedback.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2012 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 6

Nice story can't wait to see where it goes, luv your reference to Howlin Wolf he's one of my favorite I have his pandora station.



Author's Response:

A few weeks ago I was watching this series called 'Metal Evolution' and one of the influences a lot of the British metal bands mentioned was the blues, especially Robert Johnson and Howlin' Wolf.  Metal really is amped up blues.  Thank you for the feedback.

Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2012 12:04 am



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