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Title: Four

Interesting story.

 Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2018 10:47 pm
Title: Four

Please come back 

 Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2018 04:42 pm
Title: Four

Where's the rest of the story!!!! Please finish!!! Brady & Penelope I want to know what happens 

 Reviewer: mstinadimples Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2017 01:52 pm
Title: Four

Pleaseeeeeeee update this story is amazing bballs

 Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 06:54 pm
Title: Four

A person like Harvey you just have to take out, because he will never give up. I love Pen and Brady together. Thanks for the update.

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Date: May 09 2016 06:31 pm
Title: Four

I love Brady and Pen like I love dark chocolate!!!!! These two are so passionate and so deserve each other. I love this story keep writing.

 Reviewer: SafeHaven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 05:43 pm
Title: Four

This story is on my must read list. I love this challenge and this couple. This good man better not finish last. I love Pen and Brady.

 Reviewer: Umiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2016 07:46 pm
Title: Three

I love Brady Sloane and Penelope Sands. They are so passionate and it just pops off the screen. I am just addicted to them this chapter was so amazing and enthralling! As for Harvey I have no words for someone with the entitlement gene. BrDy shut him down once I think next it will be physical because Pen is his. LOve this story

 Reviewer: Umiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2016 07:11 pm
Title: Two

Oh my I am loving this. Pen is exactly the woman that Brady needs. I don't think that hat he could even make himself touch her without Pen's ...ah help LOL. What an awesome chapter.

 Reviewer: Umiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2016 06:46 pm
Title: One

I am liking this so far. Brady is a man that deserves love and that music lol. Great start

 Reviewer: Umiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2016 06:27 pm
Title: Four

Things are getting hot, hot and hotter.  Please update soon.  Great chapter.

 Reviewer: rosa1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08 2016 12:21 pm
Title: Four

Harvey is a man that never got what he wanted with women and now he has reached a crisis point with Penelope. He has never succeeded in getting the woman that he wanted so now he will use underhanded methods. Who would want someone like that! Brady is not going to let that happen. He and Pen BELONG together. They have too much passion to let anything that Harvey throws at them break them! I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE!

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 09:16 pm
Title: Three

What an thrilling and passionate chapter! I loved every word of it. I love Brady and Pen she is EXACTLY what he needs.

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 08:13 pm
Title: Two

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I am hooked!

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 07:48 pm
Title: One

I love Brady already and his team. Penelope is a funny woman and I hope that all that music on his heads leads him to go after her. Great start

 Reviewer: WalkingPapers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 07:24 pm
Title: Four

Love the update.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 04:46 pm
Title: Four

My goodness, Harvey, someone needs to dig up dirt on him.  He has been paying off how many women and these women, why haven't they not gotten paid and made this man pay.  This is obvious par for the course and he believes her father is going to be "happy" to have his darling daughter with scum like him.  Puhleese.  He doesn't know that Pen is smarter than what he gives her credit for and she is aware of the snake he is which is why she doesn't want to date him.  Lucas is right there along with Harvey if he even makes one attempt to besmirch Brady's name.  This man has already been thru enough and you want to make it worse like a spoiled brat.  I hope her mom and dad come in and whoop Harvey's ass like they Aunt Viv and Philip from the old Prince of Bel Air.  Don't let Pen fall for the okie doke and don't let our boy Brady go down because of this mitch.

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 04:25 pm
Title: Four

These two are so passionate and captivating. I love the way that you write them. I love this story!!!!!! Please UPDATE

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 03:37 pm
Title: Four

I love this story. Brady and Penélope are very passionate about each other. 💕

 Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 12:45 pm
Title: Three

Harvy Brady didn't threaten you was a promise, that he would f#*k you up on sight.  Love me some Brady!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 01:48 am
Title: Four

I love this story. I love Brady and Pen and I cannot wait for you to update again. I love thier lust and thier passion for each other. I just love it. Please update this is just awesome

 Reviewer: Water Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 11:29 pm
Title: Four

I cannot take my eyes from the screen when I read this. I absolutely love and adore Brady and Peneolpe! She is ALL that Bardy needs to heal his heart. Thank you so much Now do it AGAIN!!!!!

 Reviewer: Hanna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 08:11 pm
Title: Four

I thank you for making my day bright and filled with anticipation of the next chapter of this captivating tale. I Love Bardy and Pen lustful , fiery and scintillating attraction to each other. BRING IT!!!!!!!! I am waiting

 Reviewer: Xaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 02:14 pm
Title: Four

I love Brady and Pen's attraction to each other. They are so captivating I tingle LOL! Harvey is a piece of S$$$. People like him who can't lose with grace always fail and he is so due for failure. Excellent update now give me more

 Reviewer: Russian Sunflower Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 01:38 pm
Title: Four

Harvey will never understand that he cannot have everything that he wants. He tried it before and it did not work why does he think that it will work this time? Brady is a cop! What does he think that his team will do if he even thinks of hurting him with some made up crap. Brady and Pen are forever I LOVE thier HEAT And LUST! I love this couple!!!! I want a Brady PLEAS HURRY UP AND UPDATE YOU ARE KILLING ME!!!!!

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 12:55 pm


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