I would really like to see how this story turns out. It capture my attention right away. Please continue writing. ◇◆◆
Reviewer: EmeraldTaurus81 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2014 06:25 am
May I ask what are you waiting for to submit some new chapters...I mean I've been waiting for ever.............................................................can't wait!!!!!!
Reviewer: Nutella Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 21 2012 01:56 am
very intrigued!
Reviewer: minajesty Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2012 02:58 am
Definitely an interesting start!! Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: March 14 2012 08:02 am
LOVE YOUR FIRST CHAPTER, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST
Reviewer: LaceTurkeyExpress Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2012 04:55 pm
I like it...next update PLEASE make it longer!!! DEUCES.
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed
[Report This]Date: March 12 2012 01:54 am
It's a good sign when I'm smiling and chuckling to myself. Please continue.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 11:04 pm
On a side note I don't know any law which states Nikki is for girls and Nicky is for boys. I've seen both spellings and for either boy or girl. I think people are making gender claims that are unnecessary and silly. I'm if we take the name Samantha and Samuel---that sammie or sammy is not gender specific. I prefer the spellings as is. I do agree with some of the other reviewers who found the first chapter too short. However I do disagree that the other boys in high school are assholes. They're horny, teenage boys. That's what they do. Nothing surprising or horrifying here. However my initial review stands...I'm hoping against hope that Sam is smart and can read people.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 09:44 pm
By the title I wasn't feeling it. By the summary I was intrigued but still lukewarm. Although the story is sadly playing out as the beginning of "She's All That" I hope it goes in another direction. Why can't the girl be in the know as to what is going on and plays along...I hate the pawn games because personally I wouldn't want to stay in that sort of relationship even if he tries to make up to me because he can't be trusted.
Although I like your story and writing skill; I'm not feeling the direction of it. I hope this girl isn't dumb and knows his handle and calls him on it. If he wants to play She's All That he can do it with someone else---I'm sure this reputation precedes him. But I get the feeling that's wishful thinking on my part.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 09:36 pm
I'm intrigued and amused. I don't have a problem with the characters so far because you've clearly set them up to be assholes, I mean, they could be saying bare compliments but the minute you involve bets to sleep with people you're an asshole.
I will say I was confused about their genders based on names. Not Sam so much as the spelling of Nikki. That's the feminine way to spell it and I just can't imagine a lady killer being that effective with a female name.
It'll be interesting to learn more about Sam since so far we just have someone who dresses very thuggish/manly and has anger issues, lol.
Also, I don't mind the whoopi comments or those types of things since I think it clearly highlights the type of characters we're dealing with and they're funny.
Great start even if the chapter is super short.
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 09:28 pm
loooooooool! This is hilarious! Short, way tooooo short but hilarious! would have been a 10 had it been longer :(
Reviewer: BurntSienna Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 08:42 pm
I love it! I think you are off to a wonderful start! I think it is going to be good for Nikki to get his ego taken down a few pegs, and it looks like Sam is just the person to do it! :)
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 07:28 pm
I think this is a fresh spin on things.
I don't care how you spell Nikki because I hate that speling anyway. All girls and boys that I know-except for one and that was actually a boy and there was nothing girly about him-spelt it Nicky, the tradional way! It doesn't look so porn star. LOL. But that's personal preference and not a reason for me to stop reading.
The characters are starting off slap'em in the face style LOL. I like when an author does that because there are some people in life that just grow on you because they grow and that can be a beautiful thing when done right.
Don't be discouraged. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 07:14 pm
Short and sweet, I found myself laughing and smiling. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 06:15 pm
Good start . Willing to read more .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 05:45 pm
Can't wait to see where this goes. Hopefully Sam wises up before things are too late and I'm sure she has a story as to why she dresses that way. Can't wait to figure it out.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 05:22 pm
I don't know how I feel about this story yet, it has just started and I already hate each character that you've introduced. You have also thrown me off with how you've spelled Nikki's name. The male version is usually spelled Nicky and the female version is how you've spelled it. Since uou have spelled that you really need to make sure to use the correct pronoun, when you talk about Sam make sure you her,and she. I am hoping that by the end od this story that these characters have grown. Will the next chapter be Sam's point of view? I would love to know why she was beating the snot out of that guy with her lunch tray? How will you let us know why she looks like that? Will it through her having nightmares or will she be seeing a therapist? Just curious!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 03:04 pm
Very intriging. However I do take offensive to the charaterization of Whoopie Golgberg. I am a huge fan of hers. Although I don't dig her dressing style, I find her style more casual then anyhting.
With that said, I must say I like the story. I can't wait to see what journey Sam takes NIkki on.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2012 02:25 pm
What Hershey_kisses said....times 2!!!
Reviewer: XxSKYxLARKxX Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 02:11 pm
ha ha hell you must update soon and hey dont be stingy with the lenght neither need it please to be extra long pleasssessssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 12:52 pm