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Title: {Three}

Is Glenna going to be another Monica? Some women do strange things when they are desperate. I hope she realizes that she is no longer What Will wants. He wants Ana. I love Gretchen ! Excellent

 Reviewer: Jane doe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 10:37 pm
Title: {Two}

Beautiful painful and amazing!!!! I love Will and I want him to help Ana realize that she can be free of that horrible man if she would just fall in love....preferably with him . I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

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Date: October 25 2013 10:20 pm
Title: {One}

I love these characters? I especially love Ana. I just know I will be reaching for a tissue and laughing also. Excellent start

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Date: October 25 2013 09:51 pm
Title: {Ten}

Will there be a Nathan and El romance I would love that!!!!!!!!!!awesome!

 Reviewer: Chamber Woman Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 07:24 pm
Title: {Ten}

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! BEAUTIFUL and MASTERFUL!!!!! You are AMAZING!!!!UPDAT e please

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Date: October 25 2013 07:22 pm
Title: {Ten}

Oh, and another thing, unless they put Ruth away for the rest.of.her.life, she needs to die as well, because she will become more obsessed with Ana and would prolly go after her. The bitch carries a butcher knife and ain't above using it. So, yeah, dust her.

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Date: October 25 2013 10:41 am
Title: {Ten}

this story is chock full of crazies. One wants Ana, one wants to kill Fredrick AND El. Monica is as delusional as that crazy ass psychotic brother of hers. Is psychosis hereditary? 'cause that family has more than their share.

A part of me wanted Will to kill that mofo, but I'm glad he didn't. However, he could have it arranged. Frederick makes my skin crawl. Monica is right about one thing, he won't stop. He will have to die.

I was surprised at Nathan. What is really going on with him?

Good chapter, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 10:34 am
Title: {Ten}

Monica poor thing has gone coocoo for coaco puffs behind her crazy, psychotic brother so much to take her other brother hostage in her plot to kill and do away with Fredrick.

Fredrick got the brakes beat off his ass.  He thought he was so slick trying to sneak up behind Will "NOT HAPPENING CAPTIAN" LOL!

I am glad that Warren was able to stop him from killing the monster let his death be on someone else's hands not his he would be arrested and Ana would lose him along with his family.

Nathan seems to be a good guy.  I am glad he told El what was going on.  I think that deep down he is in love with El they are just playing this cat and mouse game well El don't know yet shoot may Nathan doesn't know either but anyway they would be good for each other apparently she keeps him in check.  :)

Thank you for the update waiting for more please.

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Date: October 25 2013 06:49 am
Title: {Ten}

I just loved the fight scene when he walked in the door, excellent. It was HOT..

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 04:24 am
Title: {Ten}

Hi! I'm a new reader!! let me just say this I LOVE THIS STORY!! I'm so happy that I finally gave this story a chance. I regret not reading this sooner. 

But can't wait for the next update!!! 

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 02:48 am
Title: {Ten}

This story is so awesome. I thank you for sharing it. Please CONTINUE!!!!!

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Date: October 25 2013 01:58 am
Title: {Ten}

SafeHaven,

What a story. I have just read it and the evil and craziness of these people - clearly is beyond my belief.

You are a great writer.

Thanks 

 Reviewer: Mocomath Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2013 12:24 am
Title: {Ten}

Epic beatdown, yes.  That is exactly what Frederick needed, to realize how helpless he made all of those women feel.  Monica needs to go sit her a** down somewhere. Nth is is more for her than for Ana.  If she was thinking about Ana, she will not even attempt to see her.  And I have to ask,  will we be seeing any romantic interests with El and Nathan.  Fingers crossed, sad face if you don't :(

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 10:00 pm
Title: {Ten}

I forgot to ask who the two men were that Nathan incapacitated?  Does Monica know that her mother has been arrested? 

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Date: October 24 2013 09:12 pm
Title: {Ten}

Wow, that was such an epic beatdown!!  Safehaven you have made my day even brighter with this update.     Monica is cray cray and just criminally insane as her brother Fredster and momster!!    I enjoyed this update so much that I will have to reread this update again.  Will is the shiznit and I love him even more after this update.   Edward is fine too bad he's a vile miscreant who deserved the beat down that Wil rained down on his head.

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Date: October 24 2013 08:40 pm
Title: {Nine}

I have missed this story so much!!!! Please update this amazing BOOK!!!!!

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Date: October 24 2013 07:05 pm
Title: {Eight}

Absolutely outstanding!!!!! I love this story please keep it coming

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Date: October 24 2013 06:41 pm
Title: {Eight}

please, dont make me beg update more please oh please great one.

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Date: October 24 2013 05:12 am
Title: {Nine}

PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE KILL THAT CRAZY ASS MAN!

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Date: October 24 2013 01:41 am
Title: {Nine}

These people are crazy as hell!!

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Date: October 23 2013 04:18 am
Title: {Nine}

THANK YOU! I HAVE MISSED THIS AMAZING AND WONDERFUL STORY! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!!! 

LOVE YOUR WORK!!!

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Date: October 22 2013 09:50 pm
Title: {Nine}

I have missed this story SO MUCH! It is my favorite ! Please update again soon!! Thank you!!!!!!

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Date: October 22 2013 06:39 pm
Title: {Nine}

Ruth reminds me of those type of mothers who give thier child everything and think that they are perfect and can do no wrong. They always end up on some sort of medicine because they can't deal with the fact that their child is evil and crazy just like them. She is in serious denial and I hope that she gets jail time for violating the restraining order! she needs hospitalization.

Frederick just needs death. He is beyond the point of fixing and death is the ONLY cure! Monica should be the one to kill him. He forced her to help him rape Ana. I want her to kill him and Edward but leave EL alone. I think that she thinks of Ell as bad becuase she knows that if she looks at her she will see her failure and what she allowed to happen. El reminds her of what she wants to forget.

i hate Edward. I don't think that Nathan is bad. He's a Kapori there hS to be a reason that he was with other women. I hope that he gets right and beats Edward I hate this man . Trying to hurt someone to keep his job is crazy,

AWESOMEUPDATE. now DO it again !!!!!

 Reviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 02:08 pm
Title: {Eight}

I love this story!!!!! You are an awesome writer

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Date: October 22 2013 01:41 pm
Title: {Seven}

Amazingly beautiful and excellent!!!!!

love the way you write

 Reviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2013 01:11 pm


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