Reviews For Will and Ana
Title: {Seven}

Loved the update! Hope Edward gets caught, evil bastard!! William needs to go down!!

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Date: February 04 2013 02:46 am

Title: {Seven}

this is really good, update soon

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Date: February 04 2013 01:41 am

Title: {Seven}

I hope he gets her pass her pain with several more awesome orgasms,,, Please hurry up and kill off crazy ass Franklin!

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Date: February 03 2013 11:16 pm

Title: {Seven}

Ana seems to be finally letting the past go even as Fredrick's barreling toward her. I can only hope that Will's self assurance won't blind him to the dangers that are lurking around him. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 09:56 pm

Title: {Six}

Fredrick is way too destructive and terrorizing than anything I've ever known. It's quite disturbing how he believes that every one else is wrong in believing the truth. That just  shows how far off his tilt he is. Will will definitely have to keep up with Fredrick if he's to save Ana- and Elle.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 09:23 pm

Title: {Five}

I'm thoroughly hooked! Glenna turned out to be something more than I expected but now, Edward's becoming a pain in the neck. Gratefully, Will's on to Fredrick and is watching every move  he makes.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 08:52 pm

Title: {Four}

Fredrick's sick in the head- and that's just because he actually thinks he's going to be able to take Ana away from Will. He's a deplorable human being (using that word as loosely as I can) and if Horace's treatment is any indication,Will will spare no expense in kicking  Fredrick's a**. So, to recap, there's Glenna trying her very best to split Will and Ana up and Fredrick who believes that Ana's waiting for him with bated breath....Oh yeah, this story's getting good.

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 08:11 pm

Title: {Three}

Fantastic chapter! I knew that Glenna wouldn't just fade into the background. I can only  assume that she's out for blood- and  that's just for starters. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 07:39 pm

Title: {Two}

No words can describe how awesome this chapter (story) is. I'm taking my time reading it because I want to get the full effect. I have a feeling that Glenna, although properly put in her place for now, is not done. She's threatened; Ana's sweetness and innocence in Will's eyes  are detrimental to her survival. I'm hooked to say the least.

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 06:31 pm

Title: {One}

I just found this and I have to say, I'm in love already. Not stopping until I get to the end.

Excellent start!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 04:13 pm

Title: {Seven}

Such a awesome update! Enjoy the pace of the story. Can't wait for more!

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Date: February 03 2013 04:10 pm

Title: {Seven}

Truly one the best stories on here,at least for me. Absolutely LOVE WILL AND ANA!!!!!

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Date: February 03 2013 03:20 pm

Title: {Seven}

L OVE this story! You are an amazing writer

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Date: February 03 2013 01:49 pm

Title: {Seven}

I'm glad you are back as I've missed this story.

it's good to see that Ana and Wil are making steady progress.   As for those two fools Frederick and Eddie, let them continue to dig their own graves!  Please update soon.

Reviewer: Dragonfly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 07:27 am

Title: {Seven}

So excited for an update. I hope that they are able to stop Frederick before he gets to Ana. Can't wait for next update.

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Date: February 03 2013 06:58 am

Title: {Seven}

Frederick is truly a pig and will get all that's coming to him. And I hope its painful, too. So will Edward. What a self-absorbed bastard! Anything to get ahead, right?

As usual, Will's gentle loving and understanding of Ana and the situation blows me away! The intimacy Ana allowed Will to share with her was major for her. And that she enjoyed it and didn't make into something of shame was the real breakthrough. I'm so proud of her!

Lovely!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 04:49 am

Title: {Seven}

love love it more soon

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 04:20 am

Title: {Seven}

Thanks for a great update. I really hope that Will is there to protect Ana from Frederic. The asshole.

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Date: February 03 2013 03:26 am

Title: {One}

so happy can wait to read it love this stroy

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Date: February 03 2013 02:54 am

Title: {Seven}

There are two individuals that I can wait for Will to beat to death, Freddie and Eddie.  Those two will be having a coming to Jesus meeting will Will real soon.  Keep Ana near you Will as that is the safest place for her.  I have missed this story Safthaven.  Thank you for the update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 02:37 am

Title: {Seven}

Welcome back! I'm glad to see some pregress on Ana's part. Frederick needs to die a horrible death. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 01:29 am

Title: {One}

wlcome back.....i have missed this story so much, the update was great!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 01:28 am

Title: {Seven}

Great update. Glad you are back update soon please.

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 01:05 am

Title: {Six}

Love it, you feel her pain and also know that he (Will) cares about her. Very good. Thanks for sharing.

 

Alison

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Date: January 30 2013 08:56 pm

Title: {One}

look for this story ever day more soon love your work

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Date: December 22 2012 03:52 pm



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