SCREAMS! Oh I love this!! Please more!
I love Nathan and El lol,
I can't wait for Ana to get home!
Monica is crazy and I can't wait to see how all this comes together !!
awesome update
Reviewer: Hanna Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 11:13 pm
please write more, i had to read this story about 30 times already.
Reviewer: cullensjonas Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2014 04:22 pm
I hope you come back and complete this story.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: February 22 2014 05:26 am
I hope she doesn't hurt El
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2014 12:32 am
Please please please write more i waited forever for this story
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2014 11:24 pm
update soon love this story i look this story all the time more 5*****
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2014 04:29 am
Love this story!!!! I have a question? Did Nathan lie to El about his fiancee? He seem to be shady.
Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 15 2013 04:23 am
please update. this is a very good story and it's unfair that you dont want us to read more :(
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2013 02:31 pm
Great update!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 31 2013 05:56 pm
I love this story! Will laid the smack down on Ecward and Frederick! I am so HAPPY! I know that he will pay in prison they have a code even in prison! El and Nathan love story maybe? Finish this please make Ana happy!! Excellent update
Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2013 09:53 pm
Love this story!! Hope Frederick gets what's coming to him! Hope Monica get herself together before its too late!! What a messed up family!! Glad Will is there for Ana!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2013 11:30 pm
What an excellent update! This story ROCKS!
Reviewer: Russian Sunflower Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2013 06:13 pm
We see the root of all evil in Ruth. She is a woman with denial problems. She needs some imprisonment and drugs! Edward, Frederick and Monica all need a ass whipping. I hope that nothing that they want goes to plan,
i love this story!!!!
Reviewer: Russian Sunflower Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2013 05:20 pm
Monica is Mad... Federick is Mad... the mother is Mad... just what is up with that family. Thank goodness the dad and vincent are sane otherwsie I would have wrote this whole family off geez! The whole lot of them are mad
Also Will is a beast! DAMN! Edward is not walking again Federick is just going to die WOW... props to Will I'd never get that man upset EVER
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 09:42 pm
AWESOME UPDATE! Will kicked ass and took name's! WOW!!!!! But, please help Monica before she hurts El....... I think Nathan is in love with El, that is why he get's on her nerves!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 03:47 am
I've heard about a lot of family reunions, but I've never heard of a family reunion that needs to take place at the looney bin. I'm at a point where I 'm constantly changing my mind as to who is the craziest.The mom held the crown for a minute until Monica entered. You got these people so crazy I may have to start sleeping with the light on after reading this story. I wouldn't want them creeping up on me in my dreams.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 03:36 am
5***** 5***** u rock love this story keep the up dates coming and i see your next story nathan and el after this great story love will and ana i hope u get them a beautiful lovemaking story
Reviewer: faye Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 03:36 am
That was perfect! I wish Will would have killed him but I guess this better. I love how you did that fight scene.
Nathan and El hmmmmmm........ Yes! Update
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 03:13 am
The root of all evil is the mother!
Ruth is crazy! She made Frederick and the monster is on the loose with his crazy sister. Edward,Frederick,Monica and Ryth should all just die painful deaths.
excellent chapter
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 02:19 am
Please kill Frederick, please, I don't want him anywhere near Ana! Kill him
i hate him
excellent
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 01:31 am
I LOVE THIS STORY PERIOD!
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 12:52 am
Make Frederick disappear please! I hate that rapist,a$$ wipe. He is crazy and needs a serious beat down. He can't have Ana. She needs Will and by this chapter she knows that he needs her.
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 12:31 am
I guess Glenna the witch does have a heart.
Will and Ana are an beautiful and amazing couple! LOVE it
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2013 11:50 pm
LOVED LOVED this chapter!!! Will is the most alpha man that I have read about, I love the way he is with Ana and the way he beats the crap out of those who want to hurt his Ana! EXCELLENT chapter
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2013 10:56 pm
Is Glenna going to be another Monica? Some women do strange things when they are desperate. I hope she realizes that she is no longer What Will wants. He wants Ana. I love Gretchen ! Excellent
Reviewer: Jane doe Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2013 10:37 pm