Title: Collision Course

I vote Mikhail

Reviewer: renata Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2013 03:52 am

Title: Collision Course

I want Ana to end up with Mikhail.

Reviewer: Desi Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 10 2012 01:39 am

Title: Collision Course

How many times can we vote, lol? I don't do cops. && I feel Ana shouldn't either. Ain't no bitch in her blood I'm sure. Plus she should stay loyal to family. I hate when ppl go against the grain.

Reviewer: Sabrina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 01:30 am

Title: Collision Course

for me it has been Misha right from the start but to be fair i as a reader haven't gotten to know John just yet so he hasn't been given a fair chance, you know. and another thing - i like the tabu relationship between misha and taty. love isn't a clean cut but messy and loud. and we have seen misha struggle with his feelings for taty so i think that part there can become a source or push when - or if - misha hears about john. i can easily see taty throw that in his face - something like "a little too late to act like a brother, don't you think!?" - if he were to forbid her from seeing john, causing a fraction in the family so your story got a lot going on :)

follow your original thought and feeling. write what feels right for you most of all and know in the end of day you got readers who will read until the end!

and in case my voting got lost in the rambling - i vote FOR MISHA!!! :D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2012 11:24 am

Title: Collision Course

the cop!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2012 12:31 am

Title: Collision Course

Mikhail please.

Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 10:19 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'm likeing the story, and I think she should have to struggle, because both men want her.

Reviewer: annette Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 08:06 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'd prefer her with John. She needs to grow and move on with her life, all she's ever known is the family. The guys have watched over her all her life and will continue to do so regardless of what she does or who she is with. She needs more friends and/or a relationship outside of the family. If you're going to do this based on votes, I guess John doesn't stand a chance then, bad boy wins. I'm sorry I still see this as so wrong him and her sleeping together, when the brothers helped raised this young woman.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 05:56 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'm starting to like John! Buttt oh geez. I think she should have a good time with John at the BBQ. Maybe the brothers start following her to keep an eye on her and discover shes at the bbq with another guy? Then maybe they see hes a cop and get pissed. Tell her she can't see him. Of course she's mad they're telling her what to do so she defies them and creates tension between she and her "brother"? OR.. she decides to keep talking to john only to get info about what the police know about her family? Then later down the line she develops feelings for him? That may give you more options for the story if you take that route.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 04:59 pm

Title: Collision Course

I love Tati and Mikhail together. They're too cute.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 03:39 pm

Title: Collision Course

I'm pleased to finally see Ana and John interact ! It'll be interesting if she could help him fix his Mustang and even more peak his interest this way. I want them to get into a relashionship. But I root for Misha too, so I wouldn't mind a love triangle !

Anyway, thanx a lot for the russian translations,

your faithful reader !

 

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 03:23 pm

Title: Collision Course

I prefer the bad boy for her.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2012 02:14 pm



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